XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Prince Of Persia NewRes]

Cool

So this was cool I like to side view he does look a little flat though and the flames on the torch we're pretty good but I think as an opinion and advice you should have more of a glow on them just an idea and opinion to think on a bit anyways nice charchter and scene

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A few suggestions offered

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[Dark Elf]

Wow nice

I have to say that the color here and visual is very crisp and sharp very realistic touch here your work has lots of energy in it and there's a lot here you can push some shine on with a bit of glare from the shiny points just a few ideas to think about but anyways nice work here make more

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some added shine

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[wow, very dog, is it cotm?,so poke master,wow ~]

Nice

And this was cool I like the view shot and then all the tools of the trade you did pretty good here I would live to see some sharp and crisp colors come out on this maybe even some Photoshop effects bit honestly this was a pretty good drawing hope to see more just like it

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some crisp colors and effect from Photoshop

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[Flower girl]

Nice painting

So this was a subtle and nice charchter here the sword and staff could use some small detail like effects of shine and more glare and such but the character itself are pretty good and overall a nice piece of work here and good charchter so nice job on this piece

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some shine and sparkle on the weapons

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[Insectoid Alien]

Nice

This was cool I love the vibrant colors very colorful I would go ahead and even ad some colorful borders and frames on this that would be really cool I like the work I like the character it's really well drawn as for improvement just some borders or frames

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some colored borders or frames to accent the color theme

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[Cinder]

Awsome

And here was some awsome detail love the Molton lava base and the characters face expression the only thing I would add to this would be some jumping Sparks of lava or something but other then that this was cool a very nice piece of work here I like the work and love the energy

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Nice detail adding some small sparklets of lava jumping off

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[Tentacle Punk II]

Very nice

This was good I love this it's a portrait and all the tenticales look realistic and the color and shine work well together this was a nice piece of artwork here very beautiful with all the colors and such you do some nice work keep it up it's amazing stuff

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
This was fine as is

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[Tracer Tease (GIF)]

Notbad

So the animation was notbad but seemed Abit choppy I think you could have had more flow and bounce to the animation it was not fluid enough but I did like the drawing here and was really well done and well drawn so nice work on this piece here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some more fluid animation

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PaddleTone responds:

Yep, this was an early animation that I did and it shows. Thanks so much for the critique!

[Gravity Falls Fanwork]

Notbad

I think this one isnt' too bad, I am just not that familiar with this series or cartoon. I do like the vector like background at the top, but I don't understand the background they are standing on, what is going on here? I am not too sure, the lighting here is almost a bit too bright, you lost some colors and lines over brighting them and washing them out in light. I would tone that down next time and try to use more sunburst and less bright beams that ends up washing the characters out.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add less brightness to the characters, try different lighting effects as they seem washed out

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JessxJess responds:

That's fair, I appreciate the honesty! There's defiantly things to work on xD The feet always bothered me, but I try not to go back to old works and change them, I just try similar things in new works! I appreciate the feedback! I would recommend watching Gravity Falls, its a great show.