XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Jub Jub Flash Pro version]

This was cute

This was a cute one and I like this version of the character as you added some background even and this has some nice cartoony. Feel about it all more sun beam from the sun would be nice I see it creeping out but more bright area showing on grass even

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More lighting effect from sun

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[Omae wa mou weebaboo desu]

Very nice

You gave this charracter some nice structure his emotions are showing good the drawing has some nice lines and clean sharp lines even the background could use for some detail like cracks in the wall etc just stuff like that to give off a real effect there

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some background work would be nice

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[Ai Chan Let's Play]

Cute charchter

So cute charchter you have here you drew her well and love that the whole piece was in some form of dim lighting that was pretty cool I think if you had her in more vibrant colors and the rest in dim lighting might be another good idea you could have done

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A suggestion above but what you have is fine

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[sunset]

Nice sunset

Well this was cool I like the sunset you have going on here I think it should have been more set to the edge of the ocean so it can represent that light even better but you do have a nice effect here and I say that you should light up the sun setting even more

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More lighting on sun set and have sun on edge

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[Bat Country]

Batty

Anyways nice charchter and like the bat theme you have here and I think this is what you have as your profile pic so nice look here you should do some moonlighting in the background so it reflects off the bats more that would be a cool idea

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some moonlighting effects

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[Disappointed Washington]

Pretty. Decent

This was a decent portrait of Washington and in cartoon mode was pretty good I like the face expression on it I do think this needs some sort of lighter border or frames would accent it better but overall this was pretty cool anyways nice job here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Nice work maybe a brorder or frame of some type

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[Baby Eater]

Nice

So this was cool I like the idea here that frame and or borders should be black or a dark grey and wouldn't mind more blood on this piece it was pretty good stuff here it's a subtle piece but pretty intense idea here anyways nice work you have here make more soon

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More blood and darker borders

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[Wolfman]

This was cool

So this was cool and since it's a sticker project it looks pretty good I would suggest some sparkle on the teeth maybe but overall this was pretty good and some nice work you have here hope the stickers had got made so nice job indeed on this project

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe borders if even that

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[Share Coke]

That was nifty

This was cool I like the cola style here and the wording that was kind of funny the background was lacking and I think you could have used some shine and sparkle on the bottle so nice job there and looks pretty good anyways nice work I like your work and style

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Adding some shine and sparkle would be nice

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[Elements]

These are cool

Well I have to say that these are kind of cool. Like the different visuals on the different elements to make this stand out more I would suggest as an idea only to have this piece to be framed with a border or frame on edges it's just a small opinion to improvment points

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some idea of frame and border suggested

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