XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Let's Beat the Elite Four]

Wow

Some really nice view here and lots of Pokemon here you really pushed the limits on this piece lots of nice art pieces and this is one of the best with quality finishes here and lots of nifty Pokemon and stylish background very deep in background and some nice deep texture as well you have once again made another beautiful piece of art very nice work here hope to see more soon

~X~

[Baron Screen]

Colorful

Wow this one right here is just great, I mean this one is full blown in details of wonderful colors. I think the blues really stand out the most here, I really am enjoying this one. The level of detail and skill you've put into this is something right out of a professional handbook. I think the concept is great too and even your font is original and colored with such a deep and vibrant red. The red really shines and comes off of all those blues and makes a nice pop that stands out from the rest, and it is important for text to stand out and not be lost in the all other business and elements going on in an art piece. The cat has this great elements of surprise that you have created by drawing these bright big eyes and the body posture of a cat that is freaked out. I love the way you allowed the shadows and shading to hide the cat but kept the eyes bright to show that element of surprise and make sure it stood out from the rest of things to focus your own eyes on this part. The red barron is also nice to be positioned as he is and the overall body posture shows you that he is your main character and seem to have accomplished a goal. Your environmental setting was also well established as a sort of run down area of the streets and you did that by creating this nicely done torn up spaced out fence. I think that by making things a bit run down on a sidewalk, you showed us what your setting was and it made sense why the cat would be there. I don't think I have much here to improve on, you have covered every area of space here with details, textures, colors, shades, and dept. You have a story going on and I am entertained by each element and each detail. You clearly put effort into this and it has paid off. I think this is perfect as it is. I hope to see more from you soon and keep up the good work, I look forward to more.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Nothing to change, I like this one the way it is.

~X~

MindChamber responds:

Thanks so much for that in-depth review! Much appreciated

[Gather]

Very Artistic

I actually love this piece you have here, it has a "ABSTRACT" and a "ARTISTIC" feel about it you have some very swell ideas here and I look foward to more, Now my tip might be to ad more seperation between all the bunched up elements but I still like it, so keep up the good work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Now my tip might be to ad more seperation between all the bunched up elements but I still like it

~X~

[PimpsStreet]

Very nice

This was a cool art piece you have here with some nice texture and some well designed characters this is almost like a "POSTER" of somekind it has some very deep detail, I would slap some borders on this piece and let it shine like a framed piece, anyways really nice work here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I would slap some borders on this piece and let it shine like a framed piece

~X~

[Somewhere Other Chapter 23-4]

Very nice entry

Another nice entry here, I would suggest maybe a colored frame work element might accent it with the comic more, I like the "STYLE" and element you bring into this with the unique characters and content. its those kinds of web comics that I really have come to enjoy the detail and element that one puts through these such as this one, a good little adventure you have here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I would suggest maybe a colored frame work element might accent it with the comic more

~X~

[Somewhere Other Chapter 24-1]

Awsome

Very "NICE" but would love to see these expanded longer on each submission they seem very short for each one, You bring a sense of adventure to this series and make it a fun web comic thats exciting and entertaining and just bring on some nice visual elements, and thats what I really liked and enjoyed about this one, so nice job on this one and hope to see much more and very soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
would love to see these expanded longer on each submission they seem very short for each one

~X~

[Somewhere Other Chapter 24-3]

Nice comic

The "TEXT-BUBBLES" Are nice but maybe they shouldnt just blend with the frame maybe adding some depth and color in there would be a nice touch, You have a nice comic series here the characters the props the stylish backrounds and ofcourse the story, and its all those things that really make this as good as it is the detail shines well and I am pleased with the outcomes of this so nice job indeed, keep up the good work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As for the text bubbles maybe they shouldnt just blend with the frame maybe adding some depth and color in there would be a nice touch

~X~

[Memory Stick]

Cool

Ouch that ending "SCENE" has to hurt a bit, but well played, Very cool piece, very well done and love the story here you always bring out the best stories here, and very nice outcome there at the end, I think you could ad more to this but it is a bit dated but regardless a good comic entry you have here, I will look forward to even more from you.

~X~

[Log]

Entertaining Comic

Haha nice "STARDATE-2014" very nice and very well executed, Another entertaining Comic series you have here I dont even care that its in black and white thats the cool part if you ask me, its shows the detail before hand, but you bring some nice details and a good story would love to see you remake these into color though.

~X~

[Aid]

Another cool one

So with color this would be amazing as your colored ones are fantastic, but these early ones without color still bring some detail and energy, so really nice comic here they are light but still have lots of good detail in humor and or story part of it all, so nice job there.

~X~