XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Somewhere Other Chapter 23-4]

Very nice entry

Another nice entry here, I would suggest maybe a colored frame work element might accent it with the comic more, I like the "STYLE" and element you bring into this with the unique characters and content. its those kinds of web comics that I really have come to enjoy the detail and element that one puts through these such as this one, a good little adventure you have here.

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I would suggest maybe a colored frame work element might accent it with the comic more

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[Somewhere Other Chapter 24-1]

Awsome

Very "NICE" but would love to see these expanded longer on each submission they seem very short for each one, You bring a sense of adventure to this series and make it a fun web comic thats exciting and entertaining and just bring on some nice visual elements, and thats what I really liked and enjoyed about this one, so nice job on this one and hope to see much more and very soon.

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would love to see these expanded longer on each submission they seem very short for each one

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[Somewhere Other Chapter 24-3]

Nice comic

The "TEXT-BUBBLES" Are nice but maybe they shouldnt just blend with the frame maybe adding some depth and color in there would be a nice touch, You have a nice comic series here the characters the props the stylish backrounds and ofcourse the story, and its all those things that really make this as good as it is the detail shines well and I am pleased with the outcomes of this so nice job indeed, keep up the good work.

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As for the text bubbles maybe they shouldnt just blend with the frame maybe adding some depth and color in there would be a nice touch

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[Memory Stick]

Cool

Ouch that ending "SCENE" has to hurt a bit, but well played, Very cool piece, very well done and love the story here you always bring out the best stories here, and very nice outcome there at the end, I think you could ad more to this but it is a bit dated but regardless a good comic entry you have here, I will look forward to even more from you.

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[Log]

Entertaining Comic

Haha nice "STARDATE-2014" very nice and very well executed, Another entertaining Comic series you have here I dont even care that its in black and white thats the cool part if you ask me, its shows the detail before hand, but you bring some nice details and a good story would love to see you remake these into color though.

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[Aid]

Another cool one

So with color this would be amazing as your colored ones are fantastic, but these early ones without color still bring some detail and energy, so really nice comic here they are light but still have lots of good detail in humor and or story part of it all, so nice job there.

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[Toilet]

Very nice b/w

Nice addition of some color here and the "ATTACK-OF-THE-CARLS" sounds like a good idea, This was a very nice black and white these B/W styles always amaze me because they bring a sense of original detail and with this comic it shows the classic orignal state and thats what I like because its still as good as it was back in the day anyways nice job here.

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[Lines]

Fantastic

The "100TH" and it ends with a "SPLAT" well executed here and well done, A fantastic entry as always even with these old classic ones and originals and even if there is no color but would be nice to see you redo some of these old classic ones into some color versions, but anyways good submission here I had a good laugh with the outcome on this one.

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[Donation]

Nice comic

Cool submission, maybe you should have a thicker outline on the text bubble just an idea though, this was cool and another good black and white Comic here, this was a welldone drawing of characters all rolled up into one piece here, very nice, now as for no or little color this could have some added color if you ever upgrade it, so a nice comic you have here.

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[Somewhere Other, Chapter 24-8]

Nice energy in this one

Very nice I really like how this is going "STORY-WISE" you should have some logo or title at the top or bottom just an idea, It is really fantastic to see stuff like this always entertaining stuff that you bring to the table, I like the idea behind this and all the stories come alive in each entry of this web comic, so nice effort here and nice entry here very good quality of characters and story.

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you should have some logo or title at the top or bottom just an idea

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