XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Clown]

Cool clown

So this was cool this has a sort of abstract and artistic feel to it I like the subtle color use too I do think you could ad some type of background though maybe some props like flowers or some clown theme element but other then that this was a really cool piece you have here anyways it was nice to review your work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some type of backround detail and or props

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[apple juice]

Wow lol

Ok so this was amusing I didn't scroll all the way down till later cause I was focused on the straw on top of head then I saw another one lower lol so it's creative for sure and it is different so I think you should ad more dripping juice lol and once again maybe some background scene or backdrop anyway nice work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some added juice and some background detail

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[HitSquirrel fucking dies]

Nice

So this was a nice action scene I like the work here and really like the kick here I think if you went comic style you could have a big pow or smash logo with the kick just an idea to put some humor in it also some added background wouldn't hurt on this piece here besides those mentions this was cool

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A few mentions above

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[Chloe the rabbit (Commission)]

Cute

So this was a cute charchter you have here with some very smooth color on it and a nice and adorable expression on the face I think those rings or jewelry in the ears should have a sparkle and or shine on them also the background could use more detail or something other then the black background

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some added background detail and some sparkle on jewelry

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[icon voting]

The top

I say the top one is pretty good and I like it because the bottom one seems too blurred out but for the most part this was notbad and I do like the black and white style in this case the black and grey lol but regardless this is some amazing work good drawing and color as well so keep up the good work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
The top

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[Biography of Hyrule Rise of Ganon]

Very nice

So this was cool I love the zelda games and the sprites you have here are just very sharp and crisp very good quality here the visual is just sharp I even like that little sparkle on links sword would love more sparkles like that on other points but it is what it is so very nice work indeed hope to see more from you soon

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
No changes on this one

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[What if Undertale is on Cartoon Network?]

Very nice

So I was more of an 80s-late 90s with cartoons but have to say that this was a nice design you have here some cool artwork and does bring back some nice memories but anyways another great art piece you have here this was pretty cool and just a beautiful piece of art you have here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
No changes on this one it's a beautiful design and creation

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[Newgrounds in Metroidvania]

Awsome

Well first off congrats on the front page well deserved for all the time you put in on this and wow you put a lot of people in this one lots of great energy in all the different screens and mock ups really a beautiful sight and glad I got to review this piece of yours you have really made me have a new admiration for Sprite work and the effort that goes into them so props to you for all the hard work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
No changes as this was a beautiful insight on all the Sprite detail and energy

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[HIGH KICK]

Very nice

So this was another cool character combo you have here some really good poses lots of detail and nice linework really nice effort that background is notbad either it has some lighting but I think you should ad some more dominant lighting coming down to that would be a nice idea but anyways nice work here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some more lighting effect

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[Groovin']

Cool

So this was cool I like her groovy style the hair is really cute maybe you should think about adding some shine in the hair and also maybe some background detail like a disco ball since she is dancing it's just a small idea but might work well but overall a good drawing you have here anyways keep up the good work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some background work and shine

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