XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Fite Us]

Cool

Well the colors are notbad I think you could have used some sort of borders and frames and whatnot and maybe some deeper colors of course but the characters are pretty good very well drawn but anyways it was a nice piece

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some frames and borders

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[Tom with a Hairband]

Notbad

Well not bad on this one nice pose too the background could use some work like a pattern or some scene backdrop. I would put some depth in his eyes too so that there's some deep caves or something but a nice piece here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As mentioned a background maybe even some work deep in his eyes

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[Leia]

Very good detail

You have some nice detail here I even like the backround here it was so fitting and perfect the gun could use some more shine and sparkle as would her legs use some good shine too. Just a few ideas that could improve on this beautiful piece of a beautiful princess I'll ad this as my fave but anyways nice work here just ad some shine and sparkle here and there but besides that it was an awesome piece so keep up the great work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More shine on the gun and sparkles and shine on her body maybe even her hair

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[Hatsune Miku (LEVEL UP)]

Notbad

Wow this is some nice variety of changes I love the teal hair color more then the other the one on the right side is much sharper and clean very well done and just a much better change from the one on the left so nice work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
No changes as it was a variation

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[X-mas Neko]

Very cute

So this was simple and cute but it was an entertaining and enjoyed piece I like all the light colors on this even the small animation made it even more enjoyable only thing I see that could be upgraded for the better would be that the background needs more detail more color more design and such so that's my advice but it's pretty good indeed keep up the good work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some background work would be a great upgrade

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[Wallpaper for NGhty folk.]

This was cute

Well this was kind of cute very smooth art smooth colors and overall just a great smooth piece about it I remember your work from years ago glad to see you still making stuff she could still use some shine on her back side

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some shine on her back side would be a plus

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[CB -Rockstar-]

Cute

This was a cute piece I love the black and white and the small bit of color but could use much more color maybe more so in the background but it is an interesting piece and you have some good line work and very smooth indeed very nice all around so nice job on this and my advice is more color in the backround

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More color in the background

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[Kinsei Review Whore Color]

Haha

Well this was kind of funny I think there's too much hair on the legs though but you have some nice detail and the dress was funny as hell so nice job very colorful and a full picture of art indeed so nice job here. It was entertaining

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I think it's perfect as is

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[It's a Sweater]

Nice and simple

You have a nice drawing here and an even better story to go along with it your sketch and line work are absolutely beautiful I do however think you need to ad some background scene maybe a city backdrop or trees. And also adding color wouldn't hurt either but regardless you have some strong talent and hope to see much more of your work soon

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some backround and some color

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