XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Too Small]

Not small?

I am not sure why you "DECIDED" to call this one small, it has lots of different "SIZES" going on in terms of font and wording. I think the coloring of each word is nice, and this seems to follow that trend at the time of words being used as art the different ways you can position them. I love the overall little ester-like eggs hidden around, the smile faces, they are just lightly added and you have to look closely to see and it all looks great the way you did that. It was subtle and nice and it made me smile looking at them. I think the world is big enough for the both of us. Have you seen Canada? it is just land, land, land, and they don't share it! I think there is lots of space is the world for all of us, but the saying is a nice one to re-create and use here. Nice "COLOR" selection for each letter and nice use of space, but I would have like some shadows and maybe make the text more 3D. A background would have been nice, maybe just a speech-bubble like background around the text to give it a bit more fullness and body. I wish you also made this font yourself but I see most of it is just a program and that is something I wish you would not shy away from, because I do enjoy when you use your own fonts. Overall not bad tho.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add some king of background around the text and font and then maybe make the font more 3D and use your own original font that you tend to draw.

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Cyberdevil responds:

Goes with the message, I think? The world not being big enough? Yupp, think this style had a peak of popularity a few years back, but t's still very much a thing. The background hmm... I had the gray pentagons there, but maybe they're a bit faded... thanks for the review!

I think overpopulation's going to be a pretty big problem in the future btw, large masses of land or no, we're consuming too much... but this one wasn't really about that anyway. XD Good to hear you've got a positive outlook on that!

[A Delicate Cycle]

Very elegant

So this was very smooth and elegant you have a sort of "CIRCULAR" border frame here and it looks pretty good I think even adding an outter border would have been cool too but your talent is very impressive and all the little details are very impressive so nice job here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I think even adding an outter border would have been cool too

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[Somewhere Other Chapter 21-7]

Great submission

So as always another great submission you have here the characters are brilliantly done nice detail and you bring a nice adventure to this one aswell so nice job there, and hope you keep making a good comic series like you have done here, so keep up the good work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I think the im sorry text bubble should be bigger since its a moments and ending point.

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[Somewhere Other Chapter 20-15]

Brilliant comic again

I cant get over how detailed your comic is you bring a sense of detail and stylish outcome, the stories play off well for themself, and you bring some really good stories and ideas and make them work very well so for that alone I give you a pat on the back for a story well done.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
No changes here this was a solid entry

~X~

[Somewhere Other Chapter 20-7]

Nice comic

So this was a nice comic you have here, it was pretty colorful and a nice interface of how the visual of this comic is, love the character work and nice style here, you bring a sense of adventure to this series and make it a fun web comic thats exciting and entertaining.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
In the last frame maybe some stars over his head would be nice just to show off he is dazed

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[Charlotte and Smokey Bones]

Nice

So this was pretty cool, I love the visual behind her a very good detailed character and her simple look about it all was nice, my suggestion for improvement might be more texture in her hair or even a shine in her hair, but overall this was a pretty good piece of artwork here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
my suggestion for improvement might be more texture in her hair or even a shine in her hair

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IketheGhost responds:

Thanks for the tip! c:

[Clown]

Awesome

Okay this one here, this one will be a fave for me as I love a good "CLOWN" and this one here is very sinister and happy and I love that kind of clown LOL almost like he is evil and wants to take your soul or just candy or maybe just creep out the kiddies. I think the smile was the best part here as you made a focus of sharp teeth and big mouth to drawn you into a clown feature and creepy atmosphere. I think the hair is similar to that of Bozo the Clown and that is always good to drawn on as it was one of the more famous ones. I think using red for the hair and some in the face is a big clown color and it is good you used that to keep things on the right track, it also gives that more sinister look down for this "CHARACTER". More so the "RED" under the eggs that implies you've crushed or killed something with this egg and the clowns help was very nice indeed. While your last Easter piece was fun and "WHOLESOME", this is sinister and dark. I like that you can do contrasts in work like that with the same theme of the holiday. I also love the egg and the shaping with the text in front. It really pops out that text and draws you into it when you first look at the work. I think tho that the background is a bit too white, I would have loved some hell fire, or maybe a red setting backgrounds, something to keep with your theme and not just a plain white, but still a good piece overall and interesting to see you different things for Easter.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Just add more of a background with that sinister look and feeling, but nice overall.

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Cyberdevil responds:

Maybe all of the above. XD And I agree with the background on this one, could've used something stronger! Thanks again for all these comments!

[Trash]

Cool stuff

The "DISTANT-COUSIN" lol nice idea here, Once again a nice comic this one being of the early days with the early sketchs and characters some shades and little to no color but they seemed to work well and only get better in time, but all in all this was still a great start of a comic story as it is even now.

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[Poop]

Wow nice

Nice added "COLOR" even if it was "POOP" lol, Wow I have to say this was pretty nice, a good sunmission if you ask me, even with little color or detail it was more about the story and outcome results and on that part you get an A plus, so nice work indeed, and I hope to see much more of your stuff, the story drives this one more then the detail.

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[Nott the Bravest]

This was pretty cool

So this was really nifty character you have here and I think you could have gone with more "TEXTURE" on the skintone but what you did have was pretty impressive and more style love all the little detail, the vibrant colors theme here was pretty good too if you ask me.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
some slight more texture and meshed color.

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IketheGhost responds:

Well hey thanks, I'll be sure to work on that!