XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Engine]

Nice work here

Wow i really like this, theres alot to see here, i do however think you should add alot more "SHINE" but also give it some oil and greese thats around in spots, so a mixture of shine and greese would also give this more of a realistic look aswell, just an idea of improvment but what you do have here is very impressive and very detailed its a work of art that is very welldone indeed, and i praise you on this, anyways nice job all around here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I have suggested some shine and even mix in some oul and greese in there.

[Dragon]

Dragons nice

Dragons are a big fave of mine and i always like these, even the black and white ones, they seem to have the detail, you have some nice detail and shades with this one, the "NECK" seemed kind of off though seemed out of place, maybe more of some swirls so its like its turning its neck or head but how you have it, its just odd, now since i do enjoy color, i think you should add atleast a little bit of color here, maybe in the backround maybe the eye etc just some little pieces here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So here you have something good, im thinking some color would be great like just a touch of color maybe something in the backround or an eye etc.

sketchnfx responds:

The neck looks a little confused, maybe because I've drawn without reference but I will fix. About the eye, I totally forget painting haha. But well, this was just a test but I will continue to draw dragons and other beasts in full color.
Hey! thanks so much for the review :P

[Carousel Boutique at Midnight]

Very creative with this piece.

You have a nice piece of art here, you brought out lots of nice elements in this and made it your own style thats what i liked about this its not just put out there but you really made it jump out, so nice job there and i look forward to more from you soon. And this was pretty interesting i like the color theme you had going on, and i like how its a very "CREATIVE"with all the designs and the "GRASS" cameout very well, it was fine linework, the backrounds were ok but could be slightly lighter somehow, maybe adding some more "LIGHT" comming off the moon it seems or light of some sort, just an idea though. And with all that said, i did have a pleasure it reviewing this as it was a nice work of art and had some parts that could be made to look better but overall i found this whole piece to be pretty good, so keep at it and keep making stuff like this.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
And so here i am trying to suggest some ideas that may or may not help but i do help these ideas do help but if not atleast i have tried, so here are a few ideas , tips and some advice, so good luck with anything you are working on and hope to see more improved stuff like this one. So i didnt really find much to improve there could be some slight shading areas like in the smoke from the right i think its smoke hehe, anyways nice job here.

SerPounce responds:

Thanks, perhaps the smoke should be darker, after all.

[To Write Love on Her Arms .]

The eyes

Let me start off this review of this decent art piece with saying that this was a good piece of artwork, this shows some good effort on your part, and you really bring things together very well with this piece, There might be some recomendations later but you seem to have it down for the mostpart. The eyes are like if they are starring right at me so that was something neat and had a mystery to it, The whole piece was pretty good some nice sketching, good tone here, the only real issue i had was that maybe the dogtag was abit off but not by much, other then that this was actually a pretty solid piece, as for improvments maybe some more detail and scratches in the dogtag. And in closing you have some good artwork here some decent detail effort, and it shows, dont know if i can suggest any improvments but if i do you will see it, but other then that this was actually notbad and has some good effort behind it so nice job there.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
and once again i come to suggest a few idea that may or may not help but in the end i do hope these tips, ideas and any advice i do offer does helpwith this art piece and or future ones or just upgrades for that matter but for the most of it i enjoy the work you do here. But as for this one and above there is not much improvment i see maybe more detail in the dogtag thing she is holding, but other then that this was alright.

Flashmovieboy responds:

Thank you for such a detailed criticism ! I'm glad you liked the piece and I agree with the mistakes you brought out. . . thank you again !

[MuchaFresh]

Very nice work here

Well its always a pleasure to see some good efforts pushed forward like this, there is actually alot to see, and the visual is a great one, You seem to have went all out on this with some nifty efforts in making something really good here so props to you on this piece. OK so onto the review here first of all i would like to say, that this whole piece is pretty "FANTASTIC" and the shadowing alone was pretty impressive you have a great design here, especially with putting fourth color and shading and a fantastic drawing all together, There was one thing thati noticed that could be improved and that was the backround "SKULLS" Now while they are just ok, they could have had a more fresh and vibrant look to them and such, more deep reds more new style of skulls as the ones you did have seem more to me like some skulls from the 80's as odd as that sounds, since this is a dark and evil presance of an image you should push those skulls to a more evilish feel, I also wouldnt mind seeing some more "SHINE" either like on the shoulder and the stocking parts maybe, but anyways nice work regardless. And well thats that, a decent piece of art, some pretty neat way you designed this it was interesting and kept me looking at all the little details, so in that aspect of it, it was a decent piece of art, and i hope to see more from you soon, anyways nice efforts.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So theres not alot i can say or do to change some stuff but i do try and suggest an idea or two wich may help and if not then good luck on any other pieces of art you may have in the works but in the meantime here are some of the ideas that i saw. So what i did get was that maybe some more shine in areas and corner points, and some more effort and fresher detail on the skulls unless the grungy look was your direction then that case leave it as is.

[Sleeping with the Flying Fish]

Unique and random

As i start this review off i can already tell this is something differant and even special in a way, So keep up the good style here as i really do like this kind of style and its always a pleasure to see stuff like this, but anywaysonto the review and stuff. So unique and random is just what i like and makes for some interesting imagination and mystery of the beholder and thats exactly what you have here, So thank you for presenting some nice art here, artistic and something random that is pretty good colors all around, unique, So this was differant and random and i really liked what you had here, nice effort nice detail and just all around a good artistic piece. And now i come to the end of the review sadly, i have enjoyed seeing this and as i look at your piece it just really gets better and better so nice efforts and keep making stuff like this and let the imagination soar.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
OK so theres alot here and you could even make it better then it is, but its pretty decent as is, so i may suggest an idea or two, i do hope to see more stuff like this with more improving points, so here are a few suggestions that may or may not help, regardless good luck. So with this piece it was pretty good, i think the onlything i can offer to improve is keep up with the random and unique styles you do have, maybe throw in more random, and dont be afraid to go with some of the dark colors cause they can work too.

[A.T.T. Design Dossier: Artwork]

Differant but notbad

And so i start off this review and i have to say This piece was alot better then i thought, But again this was a pretty good art piece has a somewhat artistic value to it and thats one of the reasons why i was drawn to this, so nice work indeed with this piece you have here. You have a nifty piece here, i am really liking the black and white color here then you have a pinkish character aswell so that was neat, Im not too familuar with all the content and stuff but i must say its still pretty interesting and brings a "UNIQUE" to the boards, It does lack content though as there is not much there other then the characters but i guess it is what it is. And so that is that, Its a decent piece, there was some nice elements thatmade this come together, and a good use of skills to make it all look pretty smooth, nothing more i can say then that but do keep up the good work, effort in detail is always a plus. Anyways good art piece here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
For improvments theres a number of things you can do, I can think of a few ideas that may make this more vibrant and really bring it out and such, youjust have to be willing to go the extra effort, but anyways if i do post any tips and ideas i hope they do help. Well one idea might beto make the canvus size somewhat larger that way you can add more stuff and most of all more detail of your art, just an idea and its for sure to please. I would like to see more backround detail aswell, the black may be your theme and all but it would be nice to see some more detail then you had.

Celx-Requin responds:

I think it served it's purpose...
Thanks,
- Celx

[Classic Pokemon]

Decent

Its always a pleasure to see srt pieces like this, as they are pretty nifty and interesting, seems like there could have been more to this but it was pretty interesting and was a good overall piece of art, and i for sure look forward to more stuff like this. So with this pokemon is always a pleasure, the art style on this looked abit "GRUNGY" maybe that was your direction but i think you can take it into paintshop pro and freshen it up maybe even make it more vibrant, it looks pretty cool though, Maybe if you even added more variaty of characters would be nice too. but those are just some fancy ideas, as the art piece as a whole its pretty good just wish the colors were more frsh and vibrant. I have come to see that this was better then i thought, and as you look into it more it kind of grows on you, So this was a good piece of art you have, and i think it could even be better,but thats for later, but anyways good piece of work and on the ending note of this review, just keep up the creative wheels turning. anywayskeepup thegood work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I found this art piece to be pretty good, there were some spots that could use some changes and improvments but then again these are just one reviewers ideas and are just suggestions, but maybe you will like some or even just one, and in the end they may help. But anyways. Needs more fresh and vibrant colors, Also adding a variaty of more characters would be nice aswell.

[Plea From a Crisis Suit]

Robots and battle good stuff

So These types of pieces are always kinda interesting you never know what you are in store for but with this one you made it interesting, and in some ways it was kind of Unique, but anyways a good piece of art you have here and i am glad to have seen this. Ok so cool "ROBOTS" are always a blast and a whole bunch of fun, and with this piece you have also presented a sort of story with whats going on so that was a plus, the action is there even in just a still piece of art and thats hard to do but thats what i got from it so nice job there, now with this not sure what to suggest to improve on maybe later though. And so My ending experience on this decent art piece was that it brings a good element of visual, there was some nifty design all around and i was generally pleased with all of this, a good art piece indeed, I do hope to see more work from you and from this theme style.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As for improvments im not too sure but i have suggested a few ideas tips, and some suggestions, maybe they will help but atleast read it and create your own experience and maybe you will come up with you own ideas from it, but regardless the ideas are there for you. Maybe adding a darker backround of sky and such, maybe some more happenings going on in the sky like other distant battles,

[Ratchet and Clank]

Fresh looking

And here we have something fresh, something interesting and kind of nifty, there was a good element about this you really know how to bring things together in a good way, and i was pleased with all of what you presented here, making something pretty interesting. Ok so this was pretty neat you used some fresh colors, there seemed to be some "BLAND" areas that you could have filled up abit like the backrounds, maybe some sort of backrop might have worked. also noticed that you have a decent designon the characters but maybe more texture besides the design already in place, Your shadowing was pretty goodm and overall this was a decent piece some fresh use of colors. and just overall pretty decent. This brings us close to the ending of the review so While this was notbad at all i wouldnt mind seeing more to it, it was generally a good and decent art piece and the effort does show, i like how you presented this and it was just pretty decent so nice job indeed.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
And as for improvments i have a few ideas of some things i may have saw, But must say it was an alright piece, but here are a few suggestions and i do hope they help and make for a better piece of with your direction ofcourse, but in anycase here are some ideas of improvment. Add some sort of backdrop, the backround was kind of bland, and maybe more detail in the skin tone, more texture would be nice,