XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Newgrounds Staff ID Spoof]

Cute

Ok so this one here, well this one is okay and cute, but a bit much in terms of the text and overall look. I do like this one, and your artistic ability is great, but I feel like a bit of editing was needed here and you could have done away with a few things, but even if you did not do away with them, it is still a fine piece of entertainment and interesting that you did your own take on a staff information card.I like the newgrounds coloring you picked out and how the text and fonts all align with the site fonts and styles. I like that you put your own personality into your character of yourself. The tablet on the arm with the pen was a good touch, almost like someone who is ready for an art battle with gear on her like a gundam or mech. The red shirt was nice and how you added that NG on the collar area was a good little hidden gem to make you show your NG apprechiate and fit the theme of what you were creating here. Even the pants have this part going on and I do really like that. The style is ok but I am not sure where this is based off of anymore, because the URL you provided is gone. In my old age, it is hard to rmemeber the old site stuff all the time, but you did capture something very NG. Now in terms of changes that I discussed when I started my review here, I think you just needed to fix the portion of the head cover the text slightly as it blocks far too much to read and that is fine, but I feel you could have lowered the amount of text blocking by a few words or letters here. I also think that you could have added a bit more textures to your main girl as there is a lot of textures going on in the background and a lot of vectors and she seems a bit too clean for that kind of setting. I do like this and find it very cute and would hope they bring back the staff page soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I would do as discussed above, just change up the amount of the text that is covered up by her head but it is fine otherwise.

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[Bomb]

Black Sun

This one here, well this one is odd and interesting and it kind of reminds me of this old song "BLACK WHOLE SUN" or something like that. I do like it and think it is very well made. I hope you also had some inspiration from that. I love the little fire at the top, like something got shot out of it, and the way the colors are black/white in the middle works well. I do find too much white in this tho, you could add clouds or even grey clouds, just limit your white space please. Good job overall.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add up a background maybe some clouds

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Cyberdevil responds:

Black Hole Sun, yeah, now that the link's introduced I'll probably hear it in my head each time I see this. :) RIP Chris Cornell! Don't think this was inspired by the song as I never thought of the surrounding decor as sun rays before, more like explosive symbolism, but now that you mention it...

As it wasn't meant to seem like a sun the idea of clouds also seems a bit weird to me! XD It's more like a logotype you know? Thus blank surrounding. But I shall keep the potential surplus of white in mind. At the least it's definitely possible to work with other colors.

[Cuntilda]

Cool

So this was pretty cool a funny bit of two "CHARACTERS" you have here they look a bit "3-D" but anyways a good art style here even the backround was notbad at all you have some good talent and it shows off in this one, I really like your style, I would throw on a border or frame on this, anyways nice work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I would throw on a border or frame on this

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[Nixie [Gif]]

Wow

So this was kind of "UNIQUE" in its own way ofcourse the artistic value on this one was very good love the smooth animation that you added on this even making it a great art and animation mixed together, my tip for today is that you should ad more of these kinds and themes, anyways nice work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
my tip for today is that you should ad more of these kinds and themes

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[Scanty at the Beach]

Nice

So I guess these were a little trickster submissions and there's nothing wrong with that your idea of the small revealing art does attract the one sided I suppose I enjoy your art for the interesting art style but yes your test proved that sex does tend to sell but anyways I think you should do more of these little trickster but anyways nice artwork as always

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[My Curse - Prologue 3]

Very Nice

So now we are really talking here the "COLOR" is really jumping out on this one and this one has some deeep texture and deep art designs that color really comes alive, anyways really good work and Im an instant fan with this comic stuff and do look forward to even more.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make more like this

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[My Curse - Prologue 2]

Wow nice

Wow an intense comic once again you really do have this "TALENT" for pushing some nice comics and the windows and frames are just perfect, the up and close art pieces are just brilliant, And I still say ad some small pieces of color just because it would be a nice touch, but anyways nice work here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I still say ad some small pieces of color just because it would be a nice touch

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[My Curse - Prologue]

Wow this was pretty intense

Now this is one hell of a "WEB-COMIC" I love the black and white but not just your basic black and white but some deep shading and allowed for a darker element and vibe to it, this is the kind of "WEB-COMIC" I could really read over and over, now as a "SUGGESTION" My little tip here would be ad tid bits of color not alot so you dont take away from the comic but ad some color here and there, very nice comic you have here make more soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
My little tip here would be ad tid bits of color not alot so you dont take away from the comic but ad some color here and there

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