XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Fulp Jr. in MS Paint]

Interesting

So this was an interesting piece you have here, its kind of strange and such and oddly different but also unique in its own way too so nice job on this one, I think there was some added extras you could have done with this like some backround props some borders a better font. anyways nice art here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I think there was some added extras you could have done with this like some backround props some borders a better font

~X~

[Cute Nepali girl]

Simple but nice

So this was notbad at all, it is simple and the colors are basic but you have a nice structure here I do think you could ad much more to this with some textures more backround scene and so on, overall this was a nice piece indeed, and hope you make more like this sometime.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I do think you could ad much more to this with some textures more backround scene and so on

~X~

AshisAnimation responds:

Thanks for giving me an advice
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[Happy B day LaytonJoaquinLuv!]

Nice

So nice as always you have some really nice animation here and while this is an art piece the animation puts a whole new touch and level of something on this it is a nice artistic value and the Sprite and pixel detail is as always a beautiful sight and always enjoy seeing your work the one brings in some spooky elements here and some awsome pieces of work indeed so keep up the great work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some added sparkle here and there or added sparkle I mean

~X~

[Griffin's Amiibo Corner]

Notbad

So this was sort of cool I love all the different shades and colorfull tones especially in his face and such and that pose seems just right so you did good on this piece and I was pleased with the outcome seems like you could have had some points a little darker and some points a little brighter but overall this was pretty good of an art piece here anyways nice job indeed

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some darker and lighter shades would be cool

~X~

[Connie's Ripped Jeans]

Very nice

Well as always this was some really nice artwork the backside of the character is good the little lightning effects are notbad bad I do think the lighting points should be brighter like the phone the backside light source and even her cig light point just an idea that would improve on this piece it's really solid work though and a great backside of the character nice charchter as well so nice job on this one indeed

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some more light up or glowing points on the lighting sources

~X~

[Songa the Hedgehog]

This was cute

So this was kind of cute and it was kind of funny at the same time, "SONIC" has always been a character this one was notbad I do think you could have added some backround to this one, honestly besides that this was pretty cool, a good deiction of the classic character sonic.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some backround work would be real nice with this one.

~X~

[Smash Bros. Collab! ness]

This was cute

so this was a "CUTE" piece and the animation is pretty "SMOOTH" too wish there was more to this like more in the backround maybe some sparkly detail as he walks but honestly this was a nice animation and a cute little character you have here hope to see much more art from you soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
wish there was more to this like more in the backround maybe some sparkly detail as he walks but honestly this was a nice piece.

~X~

[lenkoblepas]

Wow

So this is an interesting character you have here, the body form is pretty interesting you should really make a lrger view shot of him, but besides that this was actually pretty good stuff, so nice job there, a good and unique character here, make more soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
make a larger view screen.

~X~

[Inktober 11]

Artistic

So this was a very "ARTISTIC" piece here love the dogs and well the dog lol, but this piece speaks "EXPRESSION" with artistic value I do think some added color would have been nice but overall this was a nice piece and I do look forward to even more from you so nice work on this artistic piece.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I do think some added color would have been nice but overall this was a nice piece

~X~

[Sample]

Notbad

Ok so notbad work here but a lot is going on and it seems to be a bit confusing. I do like the "OVERALL-DESIGNS" you have going on, each one is unique and has something to offer. The way you wrote your name into the tag off to the side a bit was interesting. From the "LITTLE-MAN" in his canoe, to the face, to the book, etc. The font was great and the way you drew those stars around the font really added to it and made for a "DAZZLING-LOOK" with good solid elements of original ideas. I think the fonts you always create are some of your best pieces of art, but you've heard that from me before. I would hope that maybe you'd make the text bigger next time, more space should have been used here as there is a lot of white space going on in the edges. White backgrounds are fine, but when white space is surrounding your work it can get lost and it makes it look smaller as well, so I would either "MAKE-THINGS-LARGER" to fit the space or crop that all out next time. My fav part of this is the little man trying to canoe to somewhere. I would love to see you expand on this one and maybe tell a small story, with a background, and maybe some animation? That would be interesting to see. Overall a good sample, needs to be something more tho, and I hope you expand on these ideas in the near future.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As stated above, but mostly just take each element and make individual ideas and submissions with these and remember to eliminate your white space as it makes the project seem lost and look small.

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

An animated version of this hmm... I like that idea! It'd be the right time for a 10th year anniversary edition too. Thanks for the feedback; views as always!