XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Kinsei Review Whore Color]

Haha

Well this was kind of funny I think there's too much hair on the legs though but you have some nice detail and the dress was funny as hell so nice job very colorful and a full picture of art indeed so nice job here. It was entertaining

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I think it's perfect as is

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[It's a Sweater]

Nice and simple

You have a nice drawing here and an even better story to go along with it your sketch and line work are absolutely beautiful I do however think you need to ad some background scene maybe a city backdrop or trees. And also adding color wouldn't hurt either but regardless you have some strong talent and hope to see much more of your work soon

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some backround and some color

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[Dawnie/Bunnry as Panty/Stockin]

Cute

And here was a cute pic I like the energy you put into this one very nice work the colors are great but seems like you should ad much more brightness to the color circles and the wings also that would but anyways just an idea to think about as this was a beautiful structural piece and some more lighting effects would be nifty

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some more lighting effects

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[Sailor Venus]

I like this one

I have to say this one is very nice I especially love those hearts I actually think you should make those hearts glow more and be more radiant with light it would top this whole piece off pretty well if you ask me but you have a nice piece of art here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Have the hearts glow and shine bright

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[FFX2 Rikku]

Great pose

And here was a great pose the background is just perfect for this character and her clothing so nice job indeed the details in her clothing is just absolutely beautiful so very nice work on this one maybe have some sun effects in the background

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some sun burst of light in the background

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[Face Study]

Wow

Wow I have to say that I love this piece this is going in my faves list this is the kind of stuff I like to do but never got the chance to just sit down and do the work but anyways very nice detail and love this in the black and white I think you should have and can still ad some type of borders and or frames to it maybe some tidbits of color even but anyways very nice work here and was very impressed with this some of your best work indeed

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some borders or frames and some small tid bits of color if still possible

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[Cock Bone]

Decent

Well that was some decent work. I think this piece as a whole was kind of bland because the main piece was smaller then the whole canvus but still and for some reason I think your backrounds sould be darker and deeper to reflect the main focus

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More darker backround

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[Purple Heart]

Very nice lips

And once again you have some very nice work again and especially since you enjoy the lip work this one braught on an even more artistic style I think this needs just two adjustments first of all more shine on the top lip and that backround could be a darker and textured deeper colortone about it but I do have to say this was still a beautiful piece of artwork and for sure look forward to even more of what you have to show us

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More shine on the lips

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[Mantrap]

More lips

You seem to like lips and that's cool you seem to do pretty good at them with the color and shape so nice job there and props to you on some beautiful looking lips and I will say pretty artistic I think this piece could use some borders or frames on edges of whole art piece will give off that art style look about it all

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Adding some borders or frames on edges would be a nice i
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[Pill Diet]

Love the color

Wow so I am always loving color pieces and you did some.nice work here the colors are vibrant and they really jump out at you and it's well drawn as well the only thing I didn't like was the yellowish backround maybe that could have some texture

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Backround could be a somewhat deeper color or more texture

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