Very Artistic
I actually love this piece you have here, it has a "ABSTRACT" and a "ARTISTIC" feel about it you have some very swell ideas here and I look foward to more, Now my tip might be to ad more seperation between all the bunched up elements but I still like it, so keep up the good work.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Now my tip might be to ad more seperation between all the bunched up elements but I still like it
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