XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Punk Devil Girl]

Nice

I like this and like how you have the shoelaces hanging like if she's hanging on an edges or something and nice design in the stockings too all very nice and a good structure of the character here so nice job indeed on this one it was it was a pretty good and well structure of a character I like your work in all the detail that it is maybe some added background would be good on this one

~X~

[Come Along with Me]

Very nice

So this was really cool I love the "COLORS" the bright colors love the skyline backround some really nice elements here, The sun in the backround I think you could ad some more light comming down on the character, and as for the awards you won here congrats well deserving, No entry gets the perfect award, But what this entry does offer Is a good balance of what works and some elements that you did bring forward are a nice fit.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
The sun in the backround I think you could ad some more light comming down on the character

~X~

[Morsdagen 2005]

Editorial

Wow ok I love this one it is like something from an editorial or magazine piece. The coloring and the positioning of the borders and text makes it feel like an ad or front page piece. The cloud like grass at the bottom spiraling out of the main box border really give it an original design feeling and some great depth of a piece. The flower alone by itself makes it the star of the show and the central character to your point here and your theme. I do love the way it is focused on and the overall background it goes along with. I think the shadows and elements around the flower also help focus on it and allows for a good perspective. The sun off to the side, hiding a bit, also helps you focus on the flower and even the text it comes off alive with the positioning. I love the different colors inside each letter and the shading in them really lets it pop with your gradiant color choices. I think overall there isn't anything to really improve here, as it all works together and flows very well. I think you are doing a great job with these types of submissions

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Nothing really as I think it is good the way it is.

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

Thank you!

[#Yokaitober - 16 - Ikiryō]

Wow amazing

Wow this is a beautiful piece you have here love the reds and yellows here and especilly love the "LIGHTING" effects that you swoosh through, the "YELLOW" flowers are very nice indeed, You should ad some fancy frames along the edges on this piece might accent the vase and flowers just right, but very nice work indeed.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
You should ad some fancy frames along the edges on this piece might accent the vase and flowers just right

~X~

[RPG Challenge - 14 - Medic]

I really love this piece here

Wow I am amazed with this piece I especially love the "GLOW" in the "EYE" and all the extra little details like the bottles and stuff, I do think you could have added some of that same glow to the bottles and hanging lights and such, but anyways nice work here you have a nice style with lots of detail.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I do think you could have added some of that same glow to the bottles and hanging lights and such

~X~

[Man In Car]

Comical

I did think this one was funny, but this piece right here has the elements of a comic strip or comic sketch. I think the guy is a bit too blended into the art tho, he seems lost in the background when his head comes out. I think he needs some shadows and depth to show us he isn't part of the road or the background. I do like your background tho and it is always nice to see you make those in your work when you use your ink or drawing style. I see a lot of your work without backgrounds and I am always pleased when you add one up, but this one is good and I found the character to be comical with his big "YO". I don't understand why you didnt make the font of the "YO" yourself as usually your fonts are much bigger and original with your own hand writing. I would hope next time you use your own drawing text font skills to add to the pieces you do with any speech bubbles. I do like this one and it made me laugh. I hope to see this character again sometime and I am impressed with the direction that you took with this.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Just add some more depth to his head sticking out so it doesn't get lost in the background and maybe do your own font for the speech bubbles.

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

Hmm well I guess it was a bit rushed since the font's a basic one, or I was just experimenting with styles back then. Good points on depth there!

[Fireworks]

This was an interesting piece

Not sure what your intent was on this one, and I know this is an old piece but still would be interesting to understand the intent of this piece, I personally still find this one to be abstract and artistic in its own way, and some addition of glowing and lighting effects could make this more apealling, but regardless I do like the effort.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
some addition of glowing and lighting effects could make this more apealling

~X~

[Cartoon Cartoon]

Cool Design

I love these types with everything "BUNCHED" in there together and some hidden visuals and messges in there, you should ad a colored frame on this to accent it more, And here is another cool design you have the drawing sketch and or design you have presented here is pretty amazing, Not alot of people like these types because of no color or not much color but I like these they are pretty nifty, they bring a sense of style and "FLAVOR" without all the color.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
you should ad a colored frame on this to accent it more

~X~

[Zombie Holocaust]

Notbad

So this was cool, and acually notbad at all with a very deep "GREEN" here I could see you adding more of a "GLOW" in green and shine and sparkle of the wording I would even suggest the blood have more of a shine to it also, but besides all that this was actually pretty good art style and a logo here so keep up the good work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I could see you adding more of a Glow in green and shine and sparkle of the wording I would even suggest the blood have more of a shine to it also

~X~

[Purple Lie]

Simple

Ok well I do like this one even if this one here is very simple. Wow nice detail and love this in the grey and purple areas. I think you should have and can still add some type of borders or maybe even frames to it or maybe add up more color with some effects of the snow overtop of all of this piece. I know you've got some snow in the background. I like the background but wish you added more color in the background where the buildings are. The snowball was nice, like it was looking over the city wanting to play and wanting to get out there. I think that symbolism was a good attempt and well done. You have something different and simple here, but it does shine as a good piece. Maybe shine over the windows and the overall setting having more than just the purple, but that was what you intended so I do not mind that. anyways very nice work here and was very impressed with this one as it is some of your best work indeed. I think overall this was a nice okay piece of art and very symbolic so I did enjoy that.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add a bit of color or some more detail in the buildings.

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

All good suggestions, thanks!