XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Plant]

Really well done

This was a really well done piece of artwork the colors are great the meshed textuture is very nice indeed I like the lighting effect comming from the window it lights up things greatly but I think it should be a little bit brighter but besides that this was a top notch piece of art and I really enjoyed the amount of detail you pushed on this great art piece

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some more light on the sun comming in

~X~

[Malroy]

Nice work

I like this I like that you used paper and pens to make this the detail is there I think you can ad some color though with some colored pens and the background could use some type of backdrop and the sword could use a sparkle or two on the tip just an idea here that could help and improve on this great piece of art of yours anyways untill the next piece keep up the nice drawings

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some small details here and there

~X~

[Shadow rivals]

Amazing

Well I have to say this was very amazing and I really love the lighting effects you really pushed the lighting and shadows and they are just perfectly done from the light and the shadows so I was highly impressed with this one and for sure will look for more of your work if anything like this it's top solid stuff anyways no changes or improvments needed on this one

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Nothing with this fine art piece I found it to be no changes needed at all

~X~

[THE TEAM]

Wow

Wow I must say this was some very nice detail very good charchter structure love the background but I think there should be a burst of sunlight from the background hitting there backs and the lighting effect will improve on this piece greatly a very nice piece of work great characters look forward to even more

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A burst of sunlight from the back view

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[chewing]

Not too sure

I'm really not too sure on what is here but I do know that it's artistic and is stand alone on it's own unique style it's a very artistic piece I do think you can ad some more color points even more black and white points more focus on the eye and such but regardless this was such a unique and artistic piece you have here very good stuff indeed I loved it and love the talent you pushed forward into this

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some focus points and some more added color and black and white

~X~

[Inktober - Day 4]

Love it

Well I love it but then again I love all of your work and the background is white but this time I think that is fitting I think the background could have a small pattern in the same black and white or grey style of it but I do like the whole piece it's a great character and the little light from the candle could be light up a tad more but anyways nice job here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More lighting from candle some type of pattern in background

~X~

Sabtastic responds:

Thanks for the review, but your critique has more opinion than constructive feedback.
The backgrounds and colours are consistent with the other pieces because these works are printed as a series, so they have to look similar to one another. This makes them look nice when they're framed and hung up next to one another, hense the plain background! Cheers!

[Heavenly Toast]

Awesome

You have some awesome work here I just love the amount of detail you put in the background here the characters are always great and a good start to boot with a few chuckles at the end so really nice stuff and I had fun reviewing this and hope you keep making these as they are fantastic but anyways keep making the great comic style stuff

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I like the borders and frames maybe a little design in them just an idea

~X~

[DAN THE MAN]

Nice fox

This was cool and this was kind of cute with a nice style of cartoony feel but that was a good thing looks like there was a bit of shine on the character but I think you should ad more shine in random places would fit very well but it's just an idea overall you have a nice drawing here and I was pretty impressed so nice job anyways nice job on this fine piece of art

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some more shine in random points

~X~

[InkTober 2017 Day 8th Crooked]

Very in depth

And here was some very indepth detailed piece of art I really like the art style you have going on here I think more lighting on the main focus would be nice and more visual there so that's an idea that I would throw out there but besides all that this was a very good piece of artwork with some nice details and hope you keep up the great effort and details anyways once again nice job

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some more light focused on the main point here

~X~

IsaYuki responds:

Thank you very much for the advice, I'll make sure I will look after that next time.

[Fishnet Hinata]

Oh love the color

Now that is my fave color but glad you used it and you added much more detail then just a pretty girl and that's pretty cool like the space like warp of the character I think with that aspect you could have those stars glow a little bit more have some shine brighter then others and I would make the backround a little more purple ish I know it's a faint purple but could use more color anyways good charchter work here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some glow on the stars and some deeper background color

~X~