XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Helheim]

Wow intense

Wow this was really intense work lots of powerfull energy and effort has gone into this so first off thank you for the hard work on a beautiful piece I love the darkness of it all there should be some glowing eyes in that skull but besides all that this was an amazing piece of art hope you make more stuff like this

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some glowing eyes of course

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[Character Design - Cyberpunk]

Very nice

This is some cool black and white stuff here there's a number of things you could do here like ashine on top of gun more shadow from body and those shapes in backround could be colored somehow

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A few ideas that could help as suggested

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[KI:01]

Nice design

This was a nice design I do think you could ad some shine and sparkle on the back end of her helm and maybe have the eyes sparkle a bit but overall this was a nice robotic sci fi feel to it very nice work indeed

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some more shine and sparkle

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[Sea.]

Love the color

You have a really nice color theme here that teal and blue very nice only thing this is missing is a burst of sunlight from that end pathway that could really light up the teal color alot and bring out some deeper colors

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A burst of sunlight at end of pathway

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[what they do between episodes]

Cool piece

So here is the squad in an action seen really nice to see you adding some nice color to the background and your characters are well drawn and we'll posed so very nice detail I like the style in this scene and just love your style of art if I was to change anything it would be maybe some more lighting effects but anyways nice work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some lighting effects

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[shoryuken!]

Cool characters

Now here was some really cool characters very detailed and well drawn even with what you did with the background it was still very bland so I think you need more lighting effects and more lighting of different color in the background to make it really feel like an action scene but nice work and I like your character design

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More lightning effects in the background

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[Stickman Can't Fight]

Wow

Wow very nice this was awesome just with all the artwork alone you are really getting me interesting ideas about checking out your series the idea of a stickman and other characters look pretty good so very nice work and I look forward to more this one could use some background work detail

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some detail or some background effort

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[Guitan]

Cool

So nice work here the wording in here is cool so it's a cool logo but it needs more to t it needs more depth more color and more design within it but that's just an idea it would look a lot better I believe you have a nice design here though

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More depth in the text wording

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[Rood]

Nice and red

This was cool I like all the red maybe too much red though it does need some lighting effects or different color added but the red is cool so ad a burst of light on the wording or something like that but this was still pretty cool

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A burst of light on the wording

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[Rosa]

Very nice

This was cool and I like the end you have here the flame was pretty cool but I think you should light up the flame much more and have it shine over the Rosa more so nice job on that but some lighting effects would really improve on this very much anyways nice work I look forward to even more from you though

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More lighting effects

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