XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Burnt Out]

Nice finish

A very nice finish here and we'll executed candle and wax created work some nice subjects they teach you in school this was a good finish shot here too and. Love the view shot even a nice elegant piece even with the candle lit up like that so nice job I think a colored mirror base might of had a small different effect but this did just fine it seems so anyways keep up the amazing work here

~X~

[Betty Page Value Study]

Very cool

Now I have to say this value study looks really good you did some amazing work on this one the dorm the structure the look and expression on the face just very nice work indeed I would love to see you make more people like this and see what comes of it for the most part this was your talented style at a shine so nice work here and look forward to to even more from you

~X~

[Burnt Out - Time Lapse]

Notbad

So this was pretty cool and this is something I have not seen done much of or maybe not at all on here on the grounds so props to you for being creative with this and it's nice to see some animation to show the progressive moments of the candle and such so overall this was cool and I really enjoyed this piece so all in all this was a great piece of artwork I really like the effort in this one

~X~

[Fake Castle Crashers Still]

Notbad

So this was cool I like the idea of replicate another artists style and I have to say that you have done a fantastic job on this one a really nice scene and shows like action is happening so nice job all the way around on this one I love the idea here as it shows so much detail and you are already talented with your style so made this one a pleasant one anyways keep up the amazing work as always

~X~

[Nightmare Cops Arm Wrestlin']

Cool

And another nice piece of artwork you have here with some interesting style the use of color is very nice and very vibrant you use the colors well and no line work is always as amazing so nice detail here and congrats on the front page award to well deserving but anyways live your style and always looking forward to even more from you untill next time

~X~

[Starka - Supers Commission]

Bright

This one is not as dark as some of your other stuff this one has a fresh and feel good look the white background could use something more back there maybe a lined pattern or even brush of paint and such overall this was notbad at all I like the fresh look and you are as always talented so keep making great stuff indeed I look forward to more

~X~

[CYBERZ NG]

Neat

This is a neat little title page you have. It is almost like a logo you can use or something you can make for a watermark. Is that what you were intending? Was Cyberz always your name you wanted to be known for? If not, I would do this as your full NG name so people know where to look you up and how to associate your profile with your submissions. You wouldn't want to get lost in the name being a misunderstanding. In terms of the art, the orange shading in the orange text for each letter is very good. I enjoyed you using your own created font again and I did think you used good details. The black lines beside the words is nice too, but it needs more in terms of the background. Those lines just aren't enough, unless you plan to make a transparent background for logo purposes.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add some background content to this one or make it your full NG name to not confused people.

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

Again with the backgrounds! XD Thanks though. And yes, it is a logo of sorts. I don't think I was as careful about adhering to a single name back then, I had a few other aliases too, and twisted them around a bit like this sometimes, but right now that'd definitely be a good idea. Thanks for commenting!

[TheJoker]

And another

And here you have another fancy "FACE" this one could use a "GREEN" border for sure with some added color now the black and white by itself is actually pretty good and I like the style here but some added color and suggested frame work would be a nice suggestion, keep making great stuff.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
some added color and suggested frame work would be a nice suggestion

~X~

[GranGrans]

Funny

So these are pretty good, reminds me of those "FUNNY-FACE" artists you see on a boardwalk drawing, seems like you have the same idea here I would love to see you ad some color on this maybe even a frame and larger view size ofcourse, anyways nice job good stylish black and white drawing here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I would love to see you ad some color on this maybe even a frame and larger view size ofcourse

~X~

[FEAR]

Very nice

I do always like when you make your own style of texts and fonts. The fonts here are very organized and colorful. I think the reds go together and I love that you put a background around the font, and also a border type to the font itself. The fire inside the wording is nice but not too sharp in terms of fire. I would have edited the lines of the red to have more of a point and sharp look as those decals in red fire tend to do. If this was not your intent, I still feel it will look much better with this addition and maybe even match it with the yellows when you execute it. I think the font style for "FEAR" is a nice touch and obviously original. I do think the "A" in the word needs a bit more length as it is tending to look like a backwars "R". Good job overall with this one, it is one of your more memorable and enjoyable doodles.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As stated above, but mostly focus on the red looked more sharp in the edges like fire and the font A could use some more, but I did like this.

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

Good points, thanks!