XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[1?!]

Ok this was different

Ok not bad a bit different and a bit small, not to much to say here due to lack of much content, but sometimes less is more. I get what you were doing here, but I feel like there was more to this doodle in the corner of the page and you cut it off? I would have loved to see all the things you drew down on the full page and not just this little "BIT" here. I like the line work and the way you are once again creating your own text "FONT" and the overall placement of the symbols was a good way to go in terms of positioning and how to draw your eyes in. The big expressive burst around the font was nice and really enhanced the idea of this being important as those symbols mean, so you were able to associate the symbols with a bit of art as well, good job on that. I would have loved to see more and had color in this, it would have really completed the piece for me and I hope to see the rest from you in a later time frame.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add up some color here and show the rest of your doodles as I feel more was here and hidden.

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

Less is more, yes, I'm glad you're started to get that impression with these! :D I think most of the page was just regular text/notes, but I think the surrounding bits do well as a sandbox/surrounding, where the big doodle's the main emphasis. Elaborate review as always, thanks!

[Goretober 27 - Before the Gore]

Very nice work

I especially love the animation and the focus in and out of the animation gave the effect more of a "REALISIM" to the whole art piece here, would have even been better if there was an explosion afterwards but regardless you have some more beautifull artwork here very nice indeed, so nice job as always and keep making great creative characters and designs.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
would have even been better if there was an explosion afterwards

~X~

[Goretober 10 - Cannibalism]

Cool

Wow this one was really good and interesting with all the "BLOOD" kind of reminds me of myself the other day when I was in the gernie and had two ivs hooked up lol, but regardless this was a good piece here love the flowing blood you have in this one, Dont think there is really anything to really change or upgrade here as this was a solid work of art at its best, very nice animation and beautifull art work here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Dont think there is really anything to really change or upgrade here as this was a solid work of art at its best.

~X~

[Gem Fusion Heliodore is the mayor]

Very nice

So I like the idea here and this particular piece has a very "TRUMP-ESK" vibe maybe its the hair not usre but thats what I got from this, I could see giving the reds more depth of texture but other then that you actually have created a beautiful character design smooth and fresh and you really bring out some nice ideas with this and the whole magizine theme.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I could see giving the reds more depth of texture

~X~

[Edith Up]

Wow nice

This was very nice I love the form of the legs they came out well I wouldn't mind more shine on the legs from the lighting source but overall this was pretty good very good indeed great form of the character nice style and great expression on the character so all in all this is a great piece of art here and look forward to even more so keep doing what you do best here and keep up the style as I do enjoy your work

~X~

[An Isle A Minit]

Interesting

I see you have participated in the contest as well as some of my good friends here, but you did something interesting and changed it up with some color. Did you want to be different or make noticed? I think it works either way, and I always like color inside art more than the normal or simple black and white. I think this one here is a good submission for the contest, and even tho that has ended, I do wish you luck on future contest and endeavors as this one here is good work and has a lot of good things going on. I like the recreation of the main character and the props you've done as well. The faded background, almost like a page background, is a nice touch and adds something to it even more. I do wish you'd elimate the white space you have going on here, maybe crop it out more to have less white space and closer to the background. all and all a good submission and entry for a contest.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Get rid of the white space by cropping it out

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

Well, both, I suppose! Since the game's as dark as it is I went with a brighter take on it too. Always that white space hmm... think centering it could've definitely made a difference though. Thanks for commenting!

[8-bit Boy]

AWsome

And here we are once again with another beautifull piece of art, the "COLOR" is pretty amazing love the "PURPLES" especially on this one and the character itself as always amazing you show off your talent in somany ways, Maybe adding some shine or sparkle to the top of the headphones since its looks like a crown would be a nice idea, you have a nact for this character design style very nicfty stuff here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe adding some shine or sparkle to the top of the headphones since its looks like a crown would be a nice idea

~X~

[Solunn's Star]

Vibrant

This was really a nice "VIBRANT" piece you have here love the bright glowing points almost looks neon and that made it look pretty cool very nice indeed here, Now I wouldnt mind some more glowing aspects in the distance or backround just little stuff that could really glow and shine, anyways nice art here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I wouldnt mind some more glowing aspects in the distance or backround just little stuff that could really glow and shine

~X~

[Old Flash Art]

Decent

Ok well this seems like something you did to practice with and nothing really you were working on. I get a feeling this was a character design concept. I don't find them to all be bad, but they are definitely works in progress. I think the skull thing in the bottom corner is your best one and you have certainly improved from this since then. I hope you add more red to it in the future and maybe draw it more like blood, as this comes off more like red pain on the skull. The others are okay, but nothing spectacular. I don't mean they are bad, but nothing I can add in terms of improvement. I do think the robot's arms a bit too long. I think each of these should have their own separate submission and try to have them each have a background to really enhance the art.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Needs improvement in all the characters, I would not submit them together and do something for each one, but good job overall on your earlier attempts.

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

WIP or OLD. :) Good feedback, thanks!

[Lou is a ninja]

Another good piece

I really like what you have done here the character is nice and the dead guy behind the main character gave me a little chuckle so it was amusing and adorble so really nice work here you have some amazing styles of art here Some typ of added backround would be a nice little detail point on this one, and love the character work you put in

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some typ of added backround would be a nice little detail point on this one

~X~