XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Heat Dangers]

These are cool

I like these "WHAT-NOT-TO-DO" you present some funny jokes and such and using the dave and carl characters is always nifty, you have a nice style of artwork here and this was pretty entertaining I got a few good "CHUCKLES" out of this but anyways nice work here.

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[Critical]

Cool beans

so cool beans on another great submission of an art comic here this was another brilliant entry with some good laughs and some fine humor, so nice job on these, and some nice art detail aswell each one gets better and better, so keep making up some nice comics as you have done here.

~X~

[Hame]

Good

Ok in terms of anime "STYLE-AND-FAN-ART" this one was good. I think you made a good effort to reimage something you enjoy and recreate the character here. I do like the scar details and the overall body positioning. The eyes and the facial features show his emotions and that is always a bonus and good thing to do with "ANIME-CHARACTERS". They are so filled with emotion you need to represent that "CHARACTERS-EMOTIONS" well and I think you did a good job here. I think also maybe that you need to add some shades and shines to this one. The only real thing it is lacking is the depth of the shadowing and overall shine an anime character would posses. I would add a shine to the tooth and maybe shadows around the eyes and neck area. Your basic shadowing and shading for any standard character whereever the sun would be hitting them. It allows for more realness, even if it is a cartoon, as it builds on the character and adds that depth. I think the hair needs more textures as well, not just a solid main color, maybe shading it some hairs or the way the hair would flow, but you did include "WHITE-LINES" to show the hair "MOVMENT-AND-STYLE", which I did like that you added this detail. Overall the main face and the scar is your best part of this character and I would hope that you'd add up the things discussed here as it would make it a more professional looking anime. A "BACKROUND" would not hurt either, to make it more like a scene from the anime. I do love what you've done and hope to see more soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add up a background and add shadows and shading details to this character.

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Cyberdevil responds:

Ah yes, depth, definitely missed that in this one! I like how the shirt flows into the white, but you're right a background would add a lot. Solid feedback.

[Duck Hunt 1984]

Wow nice

So this was really nice I love the "REALISTIC" the texture alone on this piece is just amazing and I love the "VISUAL" on this I think you should make more stuff like this of other random popular game characters, anyways good art piece here this was pretty awsome if you ask me.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I think you should make more stuff like this of other random popular game characters

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[Car]

Entertaining

Haha very nice, I think you should have thrown in the "GHECCO" from those tv comercials about car insurance, So this was cool and while alot of the comics seem simular each one drives it self with its own "CREATIVITY" and comedy, and its that comedy that you bring in all of these so a big pat on the back to you for some nice work here as I found this to be pretty amazing work indeed.

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[Where's Carl?]

Keep up the good work

I love the "EXTRA-LONG" adventure here and "POTATO-MAN" was great So you have made me chuckle and laugh manytimes and especialy with this one, the humor is really good and I really like the element of humor that you put in these little stories and while they are just a comic or two they are still very good and thats what I like from these.

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[Selfie]

Cool

I really love the "ENHANCED-COLOR" the characters are really evolving in "DESIGN" Cool once again another fine submission of this fine comic you dawn on is, I really dont know how you make somany but over the years they just pop up here and there so really nice job on these, This is a long running web-comic and has some really nifty outcomes such as what you have presented here today.

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[Interspecies Cat Fight.]

Nice

Well not sure what this is but the design is very good and looks like there is some action scene going on, lots of detail in this one, lots of nice detail andjust some really cartoony style stuff a comic style character here so nice work overall, hope to see more stuff like this.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Not really anything this was somethig pretty creative and nice effort.

~X~

[Egosuntric]

This was really cool

Now this was pretty cool, I love the color theme here with yellow and red this one here could use a Yellow "BORDER" and that would accent the other theme well, just a little suggestion though, but anyways nice work you have here, just love the color theme you use here on this one.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A border or frame. nd that would accent the other theme well

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[Le Painting]

Something different

Well this one was nice I love the "PAINTING" style of it all and you made it kind of funny too also love all the little details like other characters and whatnot, overall this was a really nice art piece you have here so nice job indeed, not sure i would change anything about this its pretty amazing, anyways nice work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
not sure i would change anything about this its pretty amazing

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