XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Kaida the Dragon Trainer]

Cute

Cute pose this was pretty cute and adorable I like the pose you have here this piece shows how happy for joy she is and shows the detail in the art now of course the background could use much more work some added props or maybe wall structure a painting or something back there but does need something back there overall I found this to be a nice piece of art here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some background work on this would be nice

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[Easter Post]

Mail call?

Okay seems you like to do these Easter posts and they are very sweet and simple, but that can really work out well with your art. I like the line detail and how smooth it is, very close to vector art and as well has that ink art style. I think the use of the yellow inside of the black was a nice touch and really helped you give it a bit of depth. Why didn't you add more of a background here? I think that would have made it more festive, maybe add some Easter stuff since it is your normal Easter post. How about the eggs like last time? I think it needs more. I do like the background like texture details around the letter, giving it a bit of personality like the letter is important to accentuate the meaning of the mail. The same can be said of the details around the letter and the yellows and black lines they have to match the mail itself. It ties in well with that background detail you have going on. Some of your awesome original text here would have worked too, maybe something alone the lines of "YOUVE GOT MAIL?" or something silly like that. It would be cool to add that in there or just to spice it up here and there. Overall a good one, nice smooth solid piece of art here and good eye of using yellow to add that depth. You are really good with lines and ink work so please keep this stuff up, but more backgrounds!

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add a background and some text to this one and it'll be more complete

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Cyberdevil responds:

If that's wordplay and not TV show reference: exactly. XD

I think white backgrounds make for easy inclusion in posts and such (on my own site, where the background's white). I aimed for a Clip-Art like style too, which goes well with the traditionally white Word document. Solid outlines to let it stand out by itself. Definitely not one of my most advanced pieces though - it was more for the pun. Thanks for the advice; comment!

[Orange Wedge]

Wow

That was pretty amazing and the little "ANIMATION" was really good it made it even more funky then before, you have some really nice pieces of art here I like the style here and was pretty artistic, so nice job all the way around, hope you keep making stuff like this one.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I couldnt find anything to really change up on this.

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OrangeWedge responds:

Thank you, really!
I have plenty of things I worked on in the last months I still haven't uploaded.
Stay Tuned

[Somewhere Other Chapter 20-12]

Cool

Wow the most "DANGEROUS" place from the looks of it looks like trouble, Wish you had made this one longer seems like these comics are just too short, Another cool submission, I have to say that its refreshing seeing a long running comic here with this one, its pretty entertaining and some good design about it likeble characters and some good adventure that you bring out and about so good character work here. and good story here.

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Wish you had made this one longer seems like these comics are just too short

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[Somewhere Other Chapter 20-17]

Cool entry

Well here is another piece to this fun filled comic you have going you seem to have lots of these wonder how long it takes you to do one and where do your story ideas come from, I know I said it before but wouldnt hurt to have more frames regardless of all that you keep this reviewer excited and entertainined and really enjoying this series.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I know I said it before but wouldnt hurt to have more frames

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[Venomous]

Intense

Wow this was pretty intense, the "VENOM" character is really intense the texture is very deep and you have some good visual here with all that he is doing I was really impressed with the texture of it all anyways hope you make more villins and heros as some sort of a series of them or something, anyways great stuff here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
hope you make more villins and heros as some sort of a series of them or something

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[Dying Superhero 1]

Okay

Ok so this is another one of the times you will reuse another older piece of art to go with a new idea and create a new submission. I am fine with this, but only in terms of improvement and not the way this is striking me. I think this one here is a less granded piece than the first one and lacks a lot of your original flare, like the text work you always do youreself, here you have a basic font from any software program you just wrote in, and while that is just fine, I have grown acostume to your original style of making your own text. I don't think you should lose that in your work. I think if you are always making your own text or font rather, you should stick to the because it makes us aware that this is a "CYBERDEVIL" art piece and brings things into perspective on original work. I would love to see you redo this one with your own text and style and maybe not use the same characters are before, but something you design yourself. I know you wanted to make something involving "SAM AND MAX" but perhaps you could create your own duo to fight the justice of the world? Just an idea, but I do like this piece here, the spiral like blue/black background is good for a cover, and the characters are spot-on in terms of fan-art recreation. Okay overall.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add more of your originality to this, your own text, your own characters, etc

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Cyberdevil responds:

Agree, the font in particular's really basic here, and overall it's pretty bleak and boxy... but at least not so much white eh? ;) I'm not sure why I went for Sam & Max fan-art considering I've barely played the games, but a retake on this might be fun... will consider!

[momo's momos]

very nice character

So you have a nice character here and the little "ANIMATION" you added on this was really cool, the backround was pretty solid aswell, overall a nice piece of art here with some nice animation it all seemed to come together very well, so keep up the fantastic work.

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I really found nothing to change on this piece.

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[Bio-ray]

Very artistic

This was very "ARTISTIC" you really built up the "EMOTION" in this I think all this piece needs is some frames and or borders, like it could be a gallery piece, but besides that this was really nice artwork you have here, and hope to see much more from you its a beautifull piece indeed.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I think all this piece needs is some frames and or borders, like it could be a gallery piece

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[Neon Pylot]

Nice bike

So this was pretty cool and the bike was nifty the neon could be glowing even more especially on the rims of the bike but other then that this was a really nice draw you have here brilliant piece of art work here hope you make more slick designs such as this one.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More glow on the neon

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