XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Fake Castle Crashers Still]

Notbad

So this was cool I like the idea of replicate another artists style and I have to say that you have done a fantastic job on this one a really nice scene and shows like action is happening so nice job all the way around on this one I love the idea here as it shows so much detail and you are already talented with your style so made this one a pleasant one anyways keep up the amazing work as always

~X~

[Nightmare Cops Arm Wrestlin']

Cool

And another nice piece of artwork you have here with some interesting style the use of color is very nice and very vibrant you use the colors well and no line work is always as amazing so nice detail here and congrats on the front page award to well deserving but anyways live your style and always looking forward to even more from you untill next time

~X~

[Starka - Supers Commission]

Bright

This one is not as dark as some of your other stuff this one has a fresh and feel good look the white background could use something more back there maybe a lined pattern or even brush of paint and such overall this was notbad at all I like the fresh look and you are as always talented so keep making great stuff indeed I look forward to more

~X~

[CYBERZ NG]

Neat

This is a neat little title page you have. It is almost like a logo you can use or something you can make for a watermark. Is that what you were intending? Was Cyberz always your name you wanted to be known for? If not, I would do this as your full NG name so people know where to look you up and how to associate your profile with your submissions. You wouldn't want to get lost in the name being a misunderstanding. In terms of the art, the orange shading in the orange text for each letter is very good. I enjoyed you using your own created font again and I did think you used good details. The black lines beside the words is nice too, but it needs more in terms of the background. Those lines just aren't enough, unless you plan to make a transparent background for logo purposes.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add some background content to this one or make it your full NG name to not confused people.

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

Again with the backgrounds! XD Thanks though. And yes, it is a logo of sorts. I don't think I was as careful about adhering to a single name back then, I had a few other aliases too, and twisted them around a bit like this sometimes, but right now that'd definitely be a good idea. Thanks for commenting!

[TheJoker]

And another

And here you have another fancy "FACE" this one could use a "GREEN" border for sure with some added color now the black and white by itself is actually pretty good and I like the style here but some added color and suggested frame work would be a nice suggestion, keep making great stuff.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
some added color and suggested frame work would be a nice suggestion

~X~

[GranGrans]

Funny

So these are pretty good, reminds me of those "FUNNY-FACE" artists you see on a boardwalk drawing, seems like you have the same idea here I would love to see you ad some color on this maybe even a frame and larger view size ofcourse, anyways nice job good stylish black and white drawing here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I would love to see you ad some color on this maybe even a frame and larger view size ofcourse

~X~

[FEAR]

Very nice

I do always like when you make your own style of texts and fonts. The fonts here are very organized and colorful. I think the reds go together and I love that you put a background around the font, and also a border type to the font itself. The fire inside the wording is nice but not too sharp in terms of fire. I would have edited the lines of the red to have more of a point and sharp look as those decals in red fire tend to do. If this was not your intent, I still feel it will look much better with this addition and maybe even match it with the yellows when you execute it. I think the font style for "FEAR" is a nice touch and obviously original. I do think the "A" in the word needs a bit more length as it is tending to look like a backwars "R". Good job overall with this one, it is one of your more memorable and enjoyable doodles.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As stated above, but mostly focus on the red looked more sharp in the edges like fire and the font A could use some more, but I did like this.

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

Good points, thanks!

[Furry Aundria]

This was cool

So this kind of reminded me of some "PIXEL" it was a bit small though and you should think about making this larger even as old as it is being a larger view could show off more of the details, wouldnt mind some backround detail also but as always have a good day.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
it was a bit small though and you should think about making this larger even as old as it is being a larger view could show off more of the details

~X~

[Apocolopolis]

Creative

Well ok "WOW" this is great, I dont understand the rating system on this one, why it is rated so low as this one here is super "CREATIVE" and good. I think this one here has all the elements of a mind that has great ideas and should not be held back by them. Each section of this piece has something going on, something new, something to draw your eyes to it. The level of detail here is also amazing and has good "CHARACTERS" inside each section. The look is somewhat of that of a comic and something otherworldly, but fascinating. The apocolypse feeling you've created and shown here is great. You have this really interesting red/black background starting at the very back and that builds into things going forward from it. The reds and blacks in textures and shades really worked here and was one of my favorite aspects of this piece. The overall flow here also looked good from going to scene to scene with different characters. The fire and effects you've drawn inside most of your
elements was also nice and a good representation of what you were going for in that apocolypse theme.

I think however the things that needed to be "FIXED" or improved on were the lack of "COLORING" in some areas of this picture. Some buildings are not colorized and seem to be just white or the color of the paper you used. It feels unfinished when you do not complete a full set of builldings with colorization and then have some other buildings have that coloring. I would go back and add up some color here to just make it more consistent with more of a flow, because leaving it to not match the rest of the work really makes this feel unfinished. I do like it overal tho, so it was a great addtion to the portal and I look forward to more of these from you.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Keep all the buildings looking the same in terms of colorization and filled in textures. You want things to not appear unfinished.

~X~