XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Venomous]

Intense

Wow this was pretty intense, the "VENOM" character is really intense the texture is very deep and you have some good visual here with all that he is doing I was really impressed with the texture of it all anyways hope you make more villins and heros as some sort of a series of them or something, anyways great stuff here.

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hope you make more villins and heros as some sort of a series of them or something

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[Dying Superhero 1]

Okay

Ok so this is another one of the times you will reuse another older piece of art to go with a new idea and create a new submission. I am fine with this, but only in terms of improvement and not the way this is striking me. I think this one here is a less granded piece than the first one and lacks a lot of your original flare, like the text work you always do youreself, here you have a basic font from any software program you just wrote in, and while that is just fine, I have grown acostume to your original style of making your own text. I don't think you should lose that in your work. I think if you are always making your own text or font rather, you should stick to the because it makes us aware that this is a "CYBERDEVIL" art piece and brings things into perspective on original work. I would love to see you redo this one with your own text and style and maybe not use the same characters are before, but something you design yourself. I know you wanted to make something involving "SAM AND MAX" but perhaps you could create your own duo to fight the justice of the world? Just an idea, but I do like this piece here, the spiral like blue/black background is good for a cover, and the characters are spot-on in terms of fan-art recreation. Okay overall.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add more of your originality to this, your own text, your own characters, etc

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Cyberdevil responds:

Agree, the font in particular's really basic here, and overall it's pretty bleak and boxy... but at least not so much white eh? ;) I'm not sure why I went for Sam & Max fan-art considering I've barely played the games, but a retake on this might be fun... will consider!

[momo's momos]

very nice character

So you have a nice character here and the little "ANIMATION" you added on this was really cool, the backround was pretty solid aswell, overall a nice piece of art here with some nice animation it all seemed to come together very well, so keep up the fantastic work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I really found nothing to change on this piece.

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[Bio-ray]

Very artistic

This was very "ARTISTIC" you really built up the "EMOTION" in this I think all this piece needs is some frames and or borders, like it could be a gallery piece, but besides that this was really nice artwork you have here, and hope to see much more from you its a beautifull piece indeed.

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I think all this piece needs is some frames and or borders, like it could be a gallery piece

~X~

[Neon Pylot]

Nice bike

So this was pretty cool and the bike was nifty the neon could be glowing even more especially on the rims of the bike but other then that this was a really nice draw you have here brilliant piece of art work here hope you make more slick designs such as this one.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More glow on the neon

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[Mencere]

Faded

Where is the art going? it is so whited out. I mean, I see something "GOOD-HERE", but it is soooo faded! The texture details are almost whited out here, they seem lost in this. I wonder why you picked to make it so much white covering it up and overall masking the details? I think you over did it on the amount of whiteout here, but it is an interesting piece. This is very abstract as you say, but things are just so subtle and hard to make out. I do like the texture effects you've got going on here. The way it looks almost peace like, like sand inside a snowstorm. I wonder what inspired you to try this out? I love the overall feeling you get looking at this as well, like you're lost in a dream, so that part works out well for you in terms of the look. I would have changed your brightness/darkness settings and made it a more darker and maybe fixed up the contrast inside this one. I think you have really good ideas and you're always trying things, and that is something I like about you. You're different and edgy and for abstract this does work well. I think you were using the darkening brush in this as well and that did help you in some areas, but overall it was good to see something different from you. I would keep trying this out and next time do something that isn't white?

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As stated above, this is far too white and faded. Try to get more darkness and less white next time. Even try playing with your image settings.

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Cyberdevil responds:

I guess I like white. :) Bright colors. Haze. Not sure what inspired me anymore, but I like the impressions you got from it! Lost in a dream sounds particularly nice. Might've been something like that I was going for.

[Timelapse Video: Pink]

Wow beautifull

First of all I love all the color used here, im an instant "FAN" here you have captured the color and emotion of this whole piece, I do think you could have had more lighting come off the top of the helmet and have a glare off of it, but anyways really nice work here on this piece.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I do think you could have had more lighting come off the top of the helmet and have a glare off of it

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[Somewhere Other Chapter 21-19]

Cool beans

She is one tough "COOKIE" I like her "BOLDNESS" I like the comic here you really push some nice ideas in this one and the detail is showing off really good, the characters as always a nice touch, and you bring some nice stories about and all together this is some nice web comic you have here, so keep making more adventures in this fine web comic of yours.

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[Somewhere Other, Chapter 22'6]

Nice web-comic

This was a nice webcomic you have here I have reviewed a few of these now and this one was pretty good love the characters and the different style of art work you have here it all comes together and makes for some nice style of art and hope you keep that effort and energy up.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Just make more of these great comic entries

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[Canoness Superior Obdulia]

Really nice character

You have some really nice work here some very nice detail lots of nifty little detail and nice and shiny elements even the backround was really deep in "TEXTURE" I wouldnt mind seeing more glow and shine effects though especially on all the nifty elements, anyways nice character.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I wouldnt mind seeing more glow and shine effects though especially on all the nifty elements

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