XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Virus]

Haha nice

And here we are with another nice piece of the puzzle with this particular one I like that you added a little animation to represent the virus even more that was cool and made for a better results on this particular episode so nice job here and I look forward to even more

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More little animation like that in future comics

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[Demas]

Very nice indeed

Very nice indeed this was one of those pieces that just jump out at you with a style of it's own the reds and blacks really work well together I know that from experience but the diamond shape in background was great I would suggest some circles and even a border or frame in red

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Adding some shapes and borders in red would be awesome

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[The Showgirl]

Kind of dark

Well I must say this one was pretty dark I like it though I think if you had some sort of reflection of light beaming down her that would still allow for darkness but the light could bring it all out more just a small idea that may or may not work for you but regardless this was a beautiful piece of artwork that you have prepared for us today

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some light ght beam to reflect off her better

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[Ahhhhhh!]

I like it

Now this is pretty awesome I like what you have done here I like that you have added an expression here it does seem to need more details though and more brightness like adding a 3rd layer of color would be really nice but those are just some simple ideas to really push this forward

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
An extra layer of color would be plus and some more detail in the background

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[Carnage vs Lizard]

Nice scene

This one is very nice kind of like a battle scene taking place and you really made it come alive I would suggest adding some sparkle but the dark feel seems to work out very well and I'm pretty impressed with this so keep up with it and keep it dark with a small hint of sparkle and shine

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A small bit of sparkle polish and shine here and there

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[Lucina]

Very nice work

And here is another nice piece of art the character is great color is flawless and the drawing itself is amazing I like what you did here I do however think she does need much more facial expressions

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More facial expressions

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[Valentine's Garbage]

Love it

Wow you sure do. Do some amazing work and this is just an example fine lines that turn into some smoother lines with great color this one reminds me of a card or something for Valentine's day. Like today

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Nice piece but does not need any changes

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[Seliem Bradley (fullmetal alchemist; brotherhood)]

Good meaning

And here with this one we have some good meaning on this one a double meaning infact it was well drawn I think by adding some color would have been a blessing in making that meaning come alive even more like red eyes on the shadow or red shadow all together

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some added color for more effect

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MaikaMikaela responds:

thak you :) I've been thinking about redrawing this piece so I might do it with more colour next time ^^

[Egon]

Very cute

And this was very cute piece of art the colors are fresh and just sharp looking there's not a single piece about this that I would change all the elements have come together and made for a very nice piece of art very fresh looking clean and sharp I do hope to see much more work from you soon

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Can't change what's already beautiful

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