XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Saint Patricks Day Shmup]

Awesome

So this was pretty good once again you have captured a theme here and all the animation on this piece is pretty nice too you bring all the green out and all the rainbow element out makes for a great stuff Patrick's theme I would suggest as an opinion to ad some charchter work in there and maybe even a pot of gold at the end of that rainbow lol but all is good with this piece very nice work here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A few characters and some props could be added as suggested

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[Zombidle pixel art mockup]

Fresh looking

Well as always this was pretty amazing stuff you have here this Sprite or in this case pixel mock up is pretty amazing I like all the screens showing all the action and such you have made something really nifty here and it was just a pleasure to see all the shiny and all the action my opinion is that you could really make more of these mock ups and I will look forward to seeing them and of course reviewing the beautiful shiny elements

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make more of these mock ups please

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[Overwatch Pocket Fighters box art]

Amazing

So here was another amazing piece of work here this one is like a poster of sorts and has some nice elements love the color in this one along with some nifty charchter work I never played this game so I'm not too familiar with all the subjects but for what it is it's a pretty nifty art piece and I really enjoy this piece as it's own style of art work so nice job indeed on another beautiful piece here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
No major changes to persay but I found this piece fine as is

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[Asura Necromancer]

Very nice

So this was a really nice charchter here I love the designs and pattern style in the outfit the staff with the blue orb was cool but the blue orb should be glowing or shinning and you could really do with some background detail on this aswell maybe throw in some props or something so nice job indeed here but some added props wouldn't hurt besides all that this was a really nice piece of art and I really would love to see much more from you so keep at it

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some background and some effects on the blue orb

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[Stabby Sunshine]

Cute again

So this was another cute and adorable piece here I love the bloody knife here I do think as a small idea and opinion you could ad to the knife and blood and have the blood dripping more maybe some drops on the floor and also I would even ad some blood splatter in the background that way it leaves a bit of mystery about where it all came from or what happened just an idea and or opinion

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More blood and some blood splatter in the background

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[Kaida the Dragon Trainer]

Cute

Cute pose this was pretty cute and adorable I like the pose you have here this piece shows how happy for joy she is and shows the detail in the art now of course the background could use much more work some added props or maybe wall structure a painting or something back there but does need something back there overall I found this to be a nice piece of art here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some background work on this would be nice

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[Easter Post]

Mail call?

Okay seems you like to do these Easter posts and they are very sweet and simple, but that can really work out well with your art. I like the line detail and how smooth it is, very close to vector art and as well has that ink art style. I think the use of the yellow inside of the black was a nice touch and really helped you give it a bit of depth. Why didn't you add more of a background here? I think that would have made it more festive, maybe add some Easter stuff since it is your normal Easter post. How about the eggs like last time? I think it needs more. I do like the background like texture details around the letter, giving it a bit of personality like the letter is important to accentuate the meaning of the mail. The same can be said of the details around the letter and the yellows and black lines they have to match the mail itself. It ties in well with that background detail you have going on. Some of your awesome original text here would have worked too, maybe something alone the lines of "YOUVE GOT MAIL?" or something silly like that. It would be cool to add that in there or just to spice it up here and there. Overall a good one, nice smooth solid piece of art here and good eye of using yellow to add that depth. You are really good with lines and ink work so please keep this stuff up, but more backgrounds!

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add a background and some text to this one and it'll be more complete

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Cyberdevil responds:

If that's wordplay and not TV show reference: exactly. XD

I think white backgrounds make for easy inclusion in posts and such (on my own site, where the background's white). I aimed for a Clip-Art like style too, which goes well with the traditionally white Word document. Solid outlines to let it stand out by itself. Definitely not one of my most advanced pieces though - it was more for the pun. Thanks for the advice; comment!

[Orange Wedge]

Wow

That was pretty amazing and the little "ANIMATION" was really good it made it even more funky then before, you have some really nice pieces of art here I like the style here and was pretty artistic, so nice job all the way around, hope you keep making stuff like this one.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I couldnt find anything to really change up on this.

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OrangeWedge responds:

Thank you, really!
I have plenty of things I worked on in the last months I still haven't uploaded.
Stay Tuned

[Somewhere Other Chapter 20-12]

Cool

Wow the most "DANGEROUS" place from the looks of it looks like trouble, Wish you had made this one longer seems like these comics are just too short, Another cool submission, I have to say that its refreshing seeing a long running comic here with this one, its pretty entertaining and some good design about it likeble characters and some good adventure that you bring out and about so good character work here. and good story here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Wish you had made this one longer seems like these comics are just too short

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[Somewhere Other Chapter 20-17]

Cool entry

Well here is another piece to this fun filled comic you have going you seem to have lots of these wonder how long it takes you to do one and where do your story ideas come from, I know I said it before but wouldnt hurt to have more frames regardless of all that you keep this reviewer excited and entertainined and really enjoying this series.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I know I said it before but wouldnt hurt to have more frames

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