XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Mad Lad]

Great work

So this was "COOL" Maybe some added shine and sparkle on the top of his right side of the head just to show off more shine, And so you have set things in place and now that is with some interesting things you have presented and in good fashion, and with that said and this one comming to an end, I am pleased with all the outcome on a decent effort and a decent entry.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe some added shine and sparkle on the top of his right side of the head just to show off more shine

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[Tort-RACE]

A good comic here

So this was a good little web comic I think you should make more like this, and you should for sure ad some color but mostly you have impressed me with this, and I do enjoy your style of art here it was even funny aswell so nice job ideed, so anyways untill next time.

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I think you should make more like this, and you should for sure ad some color but mostly you have impressed me with this

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[ANTAGONISTS]

Very nice

Wow this was great and for madness day too I think you could slap some fancy stylish borders on this and maybe make it stand out more, So we are here at the end of the review, I can see some areas that could be Polished but I just would like to say it was a pleasure reviewing and seeing your artwork, wish we had more artists like this on here. You for sure have the Desire for this and it shows deep in your work, so keep that element up. You have a nice Blend of artistic style and you really showed us the uniqueness of it all.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I think you could slap some fancy stylish borders on this and maybe make it stand out more

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[COMPROMISED]

Awsome Piece

First of all "CONGRATS" on the "FRONT-PAGED-AWARD" this was really nice and great for madness day I do think the red backround should glow or be brither like its a speed motion of some type, I noticed a lot of small things that slowly pulled together something nice here and thats what caught my attention with this art piece.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I do think the red backround should glow or be brither like its a speed motion of some type

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[Mermay Day 5]

Nice creature

So this seemed like a sea creature and its really nice I love that shade of blue and the other fish are nice I think you did well here on this piece, very nice shades and good texture, you should have a sun beam comming down into the ocean a bit, just an idea though.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some sun beam comming down into ocean.

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[Mad Contra]

A very nice piece

So once again you bring the "PIXEL" into effect with a nice element here lots of blood here I actually wish this piece had much more blood all over, I must say this was an interesting piece, Im not the biggest fan of this style, but I always keep the bias out of my reviews. but you do have my interest with this piece.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I actually wish this piece had much more blood all over

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ScepterDPinoy responds:

I tried to but due to time constraint I wasn't able to add enough blood and gore all over it (on the plus side there are dead grunts burning on lava near the boss.)

I'm thinking of making a 90's 1st person shooter mockup for Madness Day next year.

[Ichigo]

Cute girl

So the girl was pretty cute I love the backround and how the sunlight is comming in I think you should make that a bit more beaming down, also more expresiion on her face would be nice too its a nice art piece though and like her form just needs much more then what you have here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More expression on her face, more sunlight and sun beam.

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[Quitting time]

Nice

A fine art piece and shows off a deeper meaning with this one, as for the idea and detail I think if you made the canvus much larger and a bigger view screen this would be really cool, but your imagination is good and drawing does calm people down so nice job on this one.

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I think if you made the canvus much larger and a bigger view screen this would be really cool

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["eye" forgot who I am ..]

Well this was interesting

I like the "TITLE" and I like the "EYES" but like in one of your other pieces you need more shading and effects and more detail all around even the font could be more fancy but these are all just ideas and opinions you do have a nice effort of drawing and wording here.

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like in one of your other pieces you need more shading and effects and more detail all around even the font could be more fancy

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[Down the rabbit hole (cat dog)]

Interesting

Well this was kind of an interesting piece theres some action scenes going on in this one, its a strange scene at that with some odd going ons, the blood was good but I think you need more blood and the characters could be refined a bit more, and some more texture added, anyways nice art here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I think you need more blood and the characters could be refined a bit more, and some more texture added

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