XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Anzu]

Very artistic

So this was very "ARTISTIC" I really like the portrait piece you have here some really nice talent and a great expression of the character itself the backround seemed like it could have had more color in the back end but overall this was pretty amazing work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
the backround seemed like it could have had more color in the back end

~X~

[Dude]

D00d!

Do it dood, this is great, this is very detailed in the character desing, but why is this not digital? I do not see much paper work from you, but it would appear to be an all paper drawing and work that isn't done by computer. How did you go about this decision? I wonder, because you've been so digital in the past. The gear is amazing with your details and line work, but the body is very very off. The hand is so huge! But maybe he has a big hand? I think if you wanted to just show big gear, there is a way to do that, by making the gear seem a bit thicker and the hand doesn't get any smaller, that would have achived your effect much better in my eyes. The face seems a bit lost and the neck isn't really there. I think he should have a neck and the expression of this dude's face is a little barren, almost emotionaless. I'd add more emotion to the face and give a neck to boot. I think color would also benefit in this piece to show off the different type of armour and maybe a background as well, but for a doodle of a dude, this was just fine.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add a background, add color, work on the size of his hand, work on his facial expressions, and maybe more of a neck for this dude, dude.

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

Well before I started with computers it was all paper, so this was actually the kind of content I made way before that aforementioned digital past. :) Would love to do more hand-drawn work though, it's just easier with digital these days. Yupp, proportions and angles were pretty off, but I'm still pretty happy with the detail otherwise, drawing age considered! Thanks for reviewing!

[Monster under the bed]

This was cool

So this was kind of cool not sure what the yellow backround was meant for but seems like it was too bright maybe a dark grey might work even better on this piece, but there was some nice detail and a nice character even, so nice work indeedm hope you make more stuff like this.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A darker backround

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[Anger]

An awsone black and white

I love the "BRIGHT" lines here I think some sort of border or frame on this canvus piece would be nice, So this here was an awsome black and white drawing the lines are good the design of it is welldone and overall this was just some nice detail and it being in black and white is always a plus as it shows off original detail and style, before any color was added.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I think some sort of border or frame on this canvus piece would be nice

~X~

[Macademi Wasshoi Falce FanArt]

Very nice

So this was a nice and "ALURRING" piece a nice "POSE" she is in the onlything lacking here is some backround detail or patteren and I think you could ad onto it even some simple props would do, but anyways nice character here and I had fun reviewing this one.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
the onlything lacking here is some backround detail or patteren and I think you could ad onto it even some simple props would do

~X~

[Funky Dude]

Funky?

I am sorry but where is the funk? He needs to be getting down to some funky fresh beats if he has the funky. I don't even know what you were going with this one, but I do like the character. He has a personality, with those lost teeth and wide eyed smile. I love all the weapons he has and the details on them. I think the thing at the bottom is tacks? I don't really know. I'd make a point to make that a little more clear when you're adding something so small, just give more details or more text for realization of what the item is. I think that the one arm is far far too long for his body. I mean, it just comes out of no-where and then his other one is kept inside. I know you wanted him to extended his arm to hold things, but it seems very off proportions compared to the other arm. I think you really need to work on body positions of the characters you create originally, but nothing too bad, just for arms in this one. I think the overall body and character you've created in nice, but I would have loved to see this in color or with a background. You would really have spiced this up from just a doodle to a nice art submission going the extra mile in detail and colorization. Overall I do like the characters that you come up with tho.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add a background, add color, and fix the size of that extended arm.

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

Funky as in modern and stylish in an unconventional or striking way and/or strongly musty. ;)

Yupp, those are tacks! Of the Ouch TM brand. You know, you're delving into ancient work with this one, so I do know there's improvement potential but I probably won't be polishing these old ones. :) It's just fun to look back at at this point. Glad you liked the character though!

[Writer's Block]

Very entertaining

This was well "EXECUTED" onlything I would ad onto this one would be some more backround detail, Well what can I say that I have not said you bring so much laughs and chuckles my way aswell as the way to many fans and I have become an instant fan of your work here, the adventure continues on with all these characters and stories so hope you always make these as they are just so darn fun.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
onlything I would ad onto this one would be some more backround detail

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[Under The Weather]

Nice entry

I am loving the "ENHANCED" graphics in this one some really nice work here and loved the end resluts here too, And here we are with another nice entry actually more then nice entry you have a brilliant one, the whole series is brilliant and I know I have said this before but this comic series has balance of great characters great humor and fun endings, a whole awsome adventure rolled into one amazing entry.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
You should bring this style of detail to all your comic pieces.

~X~

[MineCraft: Can you dig it?]

Nice

So this was another cool piece "MINECRAFT" yes indeed im a fan of this game and this visual here that you have presented is perfect, as my tip here I think that the red stone there should have a nice sparkle to it, but thats just an idea to ponder on, anyways good stuff as always the talent shows off well with your art style.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
as my tip here I think that the red stone there should have a nice sparkle to it

~X~