Very nice
The "STRUCTURE" on the character is amaung I do think you should ad more glows and lighting effects like with the circular beam she has going on and some "BACKROUND-ELEMENTS" would also be nice, Now this entry wont get the perfect award but what entry does, But what it does offer, Is a good balance of what works and some elements that you did bring forward are nice, Now go on and make more nifty stuff.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I do think you should ad more glows and lighting effects like with the circular beam she has going on and some backround elements would also be nice,
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