XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Laptop]

Awsome outcome

Yeah the ending outcome was the best I wouldnt mind more "BLOOD-SPLATTER" though You always have some nice outcome endings especly with this one and it always gives me a luagh here or there, the less color themes ones like this are notbad and they can grow on you, I wonder if you will ever redo these and ad color, but anyways nice work indeed, keep it up. and keep it honest as you always have.

~X~

[Somewhere Other Chapter 23-8]

Awsome submission here

This entry really got intense and looks like there will be something gonna happen soon I think, No changes in this one you have produced a solid piece as always, So here was another good submission, this comic is pretty interesting seems like each entry you put out gets better and better as each one comes out so nice job on these, and do keep it exciting as you have been because these characters are pretty amazing and ad character to the story.

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No changes in this one you have produced a solid piece as always

~X~

[Glad Påsk 2005]

Easter fun

Ok this was fun to look at and has those wholesome fun "EASTER-COLORS" and innocence appeal to it all with the chick. I think the chick was nice to put in the corner with the wings coming out, but why are the wings so damn spiky and long? I think you used them to make a background, or this was fire or something different you were going for, but it makes me put my eyes all over the place because the "BIRD" looks like he got screwed up with or born off. I think the "EGGS" are "CUTE" and well detailed as Easter eggs should be, but I wonder why they are so small? I would always make them a bit bigger in width as their oval shape is a bit lost here. The text is nice and clear and have some good 3D like drawing to it. I would have loved more color in the background tho. I love the border around the entire thing as the double black lines seal this in, but it is nice to see the chick pop-out near the edge and see the look, and you signed it "BOB"? Is that your artistic name? I wonder, but it was good to have your work signed because I did like this piece. Overall I would just work on the things I mentioned, but nothing too much to change and it is good despite that.

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The background needs more color, the chick needs to have smaller wings, and the eggs could be more oval, but nice work and fun to look at.

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

Haha well my art's just full of question-generating details huh. XD Especially the old ones, to which I no longer know most answers. I think you may be right! Pretty sure the wing breadth wasn't anything related to fire, as we don't have those traditions over here. Might've been to also resemble a bed of hay, or a nest, of sorts - spring/Easter being a time of such decorations. The eggs were more of a small decoration, but could've had those as a bigger focus indeed. As for the Bob, that's my real name. Back in the day I moved between real name and alias quite a bit in my signatures - these days it's usually always cd.

Thanks for the reviews again, and glad you're noticing/appreciating the details! Old art though it may be.

[Somewhere Other Chapter 24-4]

Great comic series you have here

I really like what you do in these comics but would love much more dialog just an idea, So Great comic series you have here, it really amazes me at how well the story takes place and its always exciting to see what happens next, so keep making these great comics I look forward to even more from you, and keep adding exciting outcomes you really have something here.

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I really like what you do in these comics but would love much more dialog just an idea

~X~

[Anagram Sprites]

Amazing styles here

I love all the "DIFFERENT" Characters here, I wouldnt mind some added sparkle and shine on there though, Some amazing styles of glistering shine and detail so nice detail you have here on this one, sprite work is always so detailed and the more I see from you like this the more I enjoy the really nice sprite stuff you have here, cant wait for more of that awsome sprite element that you make shine.

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I wouldnt mind some added sparkle and shine on there though

~X~

[Jap]

Interesting

This one here was a bit "INTERESTING" but in a cute way. The hole from digging you have coming out of the picture into what seems to be the city was a nice touch. I like the way the hole finds a new place, but why did you call this "JAP" if you dug to China? I think the overall city scape is fine, but it doesn't seem to be Chinese to me. I mean, you lack the cultural "ASPECT-OF-THE-CITY" in your background. I think it could have used some "CHINESE-WRITING" or maybe more cultural stuff that they would usually have there. I like the building tho as they do show the culture with the one tower building and it would appear you added some smog, and we all know that China is riddled with smog these days. I love the colorful sky lines you have going down the background and how it looks like a colorful world and sky. I think overall this is interesting, I think the pipe could have been bigger and not so small, since you are talking about digging a hole here, why not have the pip more wide to give off a person went through it? I do like the story you are telling here about getting to the other side, or digging over to it, but I would have loved to see maybe a person coming out the other end as well. Good job tho and good efforts in your execution of the idea you had going on here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add more chinese culture and characters to the background and make the pipe wider.

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

Well there's the temple-like skyscraper in the background right? ;) But you're right. Not much else. I have no idea why I called it JAP either! All valid points, thanks!

[Somewhere Other, Chapter 24-6]

Love your style

So as I view these comics I like them but wouldnt mind some more detail in the frame work maybe even a small design here or there would work too, So I Love your style here on this comic, Its really fantastic to see stuff like this always entertaining stuff that you bring to the table and cant wait to see what else you bring aswell, because the element and detail surrounding your characters and story lines is always a plus here.

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So as I view these comics I like them but wouldnt mind some more detail in the frame work maybe even a small design here or there would work too

~X~

[Eye Surgery]

Another fun one

A staring "CONTEST" and many hours later ohmy must have been fun but based on the frames it wasent as much lol, Yes indeed as the title says this one is another fun one, I like the humor, and even not a lot of detail going on you bring the amusing humor it really makes a nice adventure of your characters here, lots of talent you have and make it work, I am always pleased with the outcome here.

~X~

[Summon]

Very nice

A "SUMMONING-DEVICE" is pretty cool lol, So its been awhile since I seen anything new from you on this series but I really enjoy comming back on this older comic stuff especly the black and white classics always a pleasure to find these gems more detail is always great but these are just classic. so keep up the good work.

~X~

[Somewhere Other Chapter 25-3]

Another cool comic part

Wow this was more towards the start of things I think, guess thats my fault for viewing these out of order, but still it was nice, wish there was more frames more viewing of the story itself on this "SUBMISSION", And here we have another cool comic piece here as they bring on some really nice work, and element the characters thrive with fun and adventure, you bring a sense of adventure to the "WEB-COMIC" and I enjoy it so nice job indeed, nice work indeed here hope you make much more to this comic.

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wish there was more frames more viewing of the story itself on this submission

~X~