XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Somewhere Other Chapter 21-18]

Nice comic

This was a nice comic here I like the action you put into these and really put some nice artwork here, good detail here and its always nice seeing a fresh comic here on the grounds, I will for sure look for more from you because these are pretty good artwork and comic.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
No major changes on this one.

~X~

[Lucy]

Very nice

Now this was very nice, I love the "BLUE" theme you have going on here, the character is nice and welldone, good structure, And I dont think this piece needs any additions at this time its pretty good stuff, anyways keep up the fantastic work. its looking sharp.

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I dont think this piece needs any additions at this time its pretty good stuff

~X~

[Bird in Tree]

Colorful

Wow this one is something that really uses the "COLOR-SCHEMES". I think this submission is good for showing off your use of coloring and how you pick out good colors that will compliment each other and draw your eye in. The "BIRD" itself is well executed and thought out. I like the body positioning of this bird and the expression you give off with the eyes alone. The eyes are "STRONG" and the first thing I was drawn to, and I like that kind of feature with birds. You need strong eyes with birds and you've got that down. You also need to really understand the beek and body of feathers. I think you did a good job recreating something like this bird. I know it is a type I have seen before and I really like what you have done here. Even the addition of the flowers is good and I love having a nice colorful background prop to go with the main piece. The flowers work well with the tree and it all compliments each other in a nice steady flow from brush to brush. I would have love your white space background to be filled with a texture, perhaps a lace pattern to make it appear the art is printed off on lace. I feel that would have really given this some depth of feeling and enhanced the look overall. Keep up the good work though and keep focusing on using those nice color schemes you have done so well on here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I think the background could use some texture, maybe a lace effect to really make this shine.

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[Loopkat 2]

Another cute cat

Well this was another entertaining piece of art you have here very cute and the "FLOW" of animation is really cute again I would suggest some backround work like a city scene and or park just something that represents where he is or comming from or going too.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some backround scene.

~X~

[loopkat 1]

Cute cat

So this was kind of cute here I really like the animation here, it was very smooth the onlything I think this needs is some form of backround like a city view or a park, just an idea to go off of, but overall this was a nice piece here so nice work here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some backdrop city scene or park.

~X~

[Sleeping Good Personality]

Nice

Nice well this was some nice work, I like the idea here and the joke was executed well and i get it so nice job and some nice artwork here even so keep up the good work, only thing I would change here would be some more shine on the bubble but thats about it.

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only thing I would change here would be some more shine on the bubble

~X~

[Walking the Dog]

Very nice

Wow I have to say that this was a nice piece of artwork here the walking of the dog while a rainbow was out was a nice touch, I think as an extra effect you could have the rainbow beam some light or rainbow colors here or there, but anyways nice art piece with some nice animation here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some effects with the rainbow.

~X~

[Super Maria 63]

Cute

Well that was cute the colors are right on, love the big wrench, and since we are on that topic I think you could ad some "SPARKLE" comming off the wrence would be a nice little effect, but this was a nice piece of art love the character, love the mario theme aswell.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some sparkle even some shine on the big wrench.

~X~

[Shinichi Kudo]

Nice work

This was actually a nice drawing I like the "SUBTLE" visual and the soft colors, the drawing itself was pretty good and nice linework as an "IDEA" I think the tie could be colored or the teal color the same as the backround, but anyways nice work here I like it.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Color the tie too

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[My little waffle]

Really nice

So this here is some amazing work you have such beautiful lines in the black and white very fine lines and the art itself just came off very beautiful I really like the face expression aswell my only problem is that you don't have anything in the background and adding more back there might accent the main portrait a bit but overall this was a nice piece of black and white style here so nice job indeed

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someplaceelse responds:

Thanks for the feedback :)