XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Christmas Kirino]

Cute

Another cute charchter this time it's a head shot I like it love the black background so you can focus on just her head and you gave her a happy moment Wich is pretty cool I love the eyes I think you should make them sparkle though that would be the finishing touches in my opinion but anyways really good work here and very nice art you are very talented keep it up

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some sparkle on the eyes or even just one eye

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[wild Rosa]

This was well done

Well we have some really nice work here some nice line work to really create the girls forms and the background really just jumped out at you with some nice detail so a good well drawing charchter with some beautiful line work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More color form on the girl but maybe not. Not sure on this one

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[harley quinn deadpool]

Entertaining

Well I have to say this was kind of entertaining and a nice piece of work the characters are really good well drawn and there was some humor in the bubbles but I have to say that there should be some sort of backround with this one some backdrop scene that would explain there world more but anyways nice work here look forward to even more

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some background scenes

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[Marceline]

Different

Well this was kinda nifty it's different for sure but you have a nice charchter here with some good ideas in some detail now i do think you could ad more shine to the breasts like a streak of shine that would be the end game for this one lol no but really it would be a nice ending touch and a nice little improvment on this nifty art piece of yours

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some shine on her front end

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[Happy Birthday HappyHarry]

Wow nice

Wow this one is really nice I love the pose you have this charracter in and the shine on the armor is wow and very nice work I would love to see more shine and even some sparkle off the purple shoulder pads armor with a sparkle off the spike and such but just an idea that shine could really show more reflection off the shine anyways really nice work here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More sparkle and shine on the shoulder pieces

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[Wxd]

Different

Well this was a bit different I like the abstract feel of this with the different feel of it and it has some nice artistic style also like the idea of it on the drawing board some nice little details and it really jumped out at you but I liked it I don't see any place to change anything on this fine piece of art anyways nice work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
No improvments that I could see that was needed as it was pretty good work

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[Mercy Summer Games Skin 2017]

Very well done

So this was a very well done piece here very nice charchter lots of gold items of jewelry and I think alot of that you should ad much more sparkle and shine too because it was really looking like gold and could shine more as gold does just an idea though but that's all I have for the improvments on my end it's a good charchter

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More shine on all the gold parts and jewelry

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[The Main Man]

Nice

So this was nice I like the green blob here and you added some shine that was nice I think you can ad some more sparkle and shine to that shine morenof a glare but for what it is. It's pretty good and I like it so nice job even the background was pretty nifty and worked well with the main character so nice job all around here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some more sparkle and shine

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[Anime style]

This was cute

Very cute pose with the girl here and I like the two fingers up love the blue eyes I do think you can ad a bit more glare and shine to the eyes though and besides all that this is a really good piece you did some nice skin texture and made it all look realistic and that's what really jumped out at me so nice work on this and I look forward to even more from you here soon or in the near future

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More shine and glare in the eyes

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[Portrait of old man]

Wow

So this being the second piece of yours I'm reviewing I have to say this was absolutely beautiful I love the dark textuture especially what you did with the hair and the deep complection I do however still think this needs more of a portrait border and frame maybe even in color so that the black and white really comes out too anyways nice job here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As mentioned a colored border or frame on edges

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Fantastikus responds:

I really appreciate your reviews ,and I will try to put some kind of frame on my future projects. Thank you for helpful reviews!!! :)