XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Guilty Crown Vee/Rookie Parody]

Very intense

Well this one was very good love how they seem like they are standing on some mountains or something I think a sun setting in the background would have been perfect and you need a sparkle on the end of the guys sword just for an extra effect or something but those are just a few ideas that could really work and make this even better looking

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A shine and sparkle on the sword and a moon or sun set in the background

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[Wishing Rem {Vee/Rookie parody}]

Very nice

Wow I have to say this was very impressive stuff I don't think this is your best of works but it's still amazing and I think something more should be done with that backround as it was somewhat bland that actually may be the intent but wouldn't hurt to have more detail well anyways keep up the fantastic art works

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Backround seemed bland

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[Inktober Day 9]

Random

And here's a random piece with lots of unique and odd characters some really random characters. Tobad this was not in color it would be pretty awesome if you ask me. But I do like the detail you have added here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
No changes as it's more of a random idea

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[Potatoman Begins: Page 4]

Oh dark

And here we are with a dark one this one allows for some better hlow and lighting effects but I see you didn't push that idea too much but as for the story of this it really does come alive all and well and the story unveals here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More lighting effects

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[Pokemon Go]

Cool

And this was cool. I love how color I'll this is and your background work is notbad at all like the brick wall but maybe giving it some cracks would be a plus too and just an idea but anyways another good comic piece here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More little details in the backrounds and more shine on the lighting effects

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[Akira Yami Arc 1 Banner]

Cool bunch

And here you have a cool bunch of characters all ready for some fun or even a battle you gave them good expression and all the colors was great I did think this piece was a bit dark but maybe that was the intent on things it was a good little piece of art on some nice characters though and I look forward to even more from you

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Adding a light post to represent some light would make it less dark

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[Fire]

Flame on

Haha ok anyways very nice effect here and great use of the flame itself it's is visually beautiful and smooth animation so nice job there I do however think that you can improve on something like this and that would be to give the flame a much brighter glow and radiant feel about it like a flame might be

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More glow and brightness from the flame

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[Animating with CSP]

Wow nice

This one was actually pretty cute and I do like that little animation as well it made it that much more better I was just not fond of that backround I think you should have had more of a back drop of a background or something it would show more of where your little characters world is but anyways nice and cute with this piece

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some background scene of the characters world

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[Power Cut]

Notbad

Well this was notbad and must have been an easier one to make with all the darkness about and such that lighting could be brighter though and that's just an opinion though I do like this one it was quick and to the point

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Brighter lighting effect

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[Obstacle Course]

Lol

Alright this one made me laugh a very good chuckle with this one and it's entertaining ending and that ending was pretty good too really funny so you executed the joke well actually thaught it could have gone even longer

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Really nothing but maybe longer comic next time

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