XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Fear not]

Ok...

Well God is good, but this needs work. I like to find the good in all artwork and there are some positives here, but I think just writing some nice creative fonts on a background with a heart is a bit lazy. You could put more effort into this with wild colors or a nice draw out cross, maybe a celtic cross to give some details with the regilious factor remaining. I understand the main thing here is the message, which you have gotten across very well....but maybe a bit more art instead of text next time so you can showcase your drawing skills. I tend to like these kinds of entries more then others because of the style that it is, and because of the vibe that extrudes out from these types. Now what can be said that has not already been said, You have a very nice Polished blend of creativity here, you show the effort and the talent on stuff like this and just gives the viewer a sense of pleasure.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Less use of a font and background and add more images to the font

~X~

[Captain Raar]

Very detailed

Wow this is really good the hair alone is very well textured it has a very realistic feel to it and the skin tones are really good aswell, the eyes I think could have a lighter color to them, but overall this is a nice portrait almost but still a very good piece of art here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Lighter color in the eyes.

~X~

[The Lovers]

Really deep

With this particualr piece you really do tell a story here and the "BACKROUND" is so deep and tells more of that story infact this one now kind of reminds me of the ending of "ROGUE-ONE" but very nice art work here love this one, Think I will ad this one as a favourite, but anyways nice job.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some lighting effects would be a plus on this like with the falling flames, or even the moon you could really brighten that up with a nice puplish glow and whatnot.

~X~

[Loneliness in Blue]

Nice theme here

This had a nice theme about it, I love the blues and teal colors and it was kind of an artistic peice with the character, It has a calming outlook and you bring some nice colors to this and I was pretty impressed with what you did show us here today, Great texture on this one.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
make more stuff like this you have a talent for the texture and style.

~X~

[Slice 'em Up]

Mega-Cool

I love the Zero here and the Meta-Knight. An interesting combination of friends here. I love how much detail you put into this, because pieces like this with battles call for lots of details. The shards and pieces from the use of the weapons are a nice touch. I think the only issue here is some of the lines. I think they need to go and blend into colors more and that one brush you used seems to create an uneven choppy detail the rest of the artwork doesn't have so id try to limit different brushes that are too different from the art. The one I am refering to is used for Zero's sword and the edges. It just seems a bit out of place for me. Other than that this is very well done and great work. I love the glowing of their weapons and the body positions are spot on for battle. Now every once in awhile someone comes along with something good here, and I like how you presented it, its not perfect or anything, but it is pretty good and has some nice visual about it, so nice work here on this one, and I look forward to see what you do come up with. Ok so nice work here on this art piece you bring a certain something to the table and it really shows off well, This Radiates an Expression of creativity and unique-ness, so keep doing what you do.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Do not use too many different brushes when drawing the art as it can take away from the piece if it stands out too much.

~X~

NovayaCM responds:

Thank you so much for this in depth review, I really appreciate it!! I'll definitely take those things into account for my next drawings. I actually used the same brush for Zero's sword that I did for the entire line art, its just when I increase the size it looks more jaggy, but I've been experimenting on smoother brushes to use for the future.

[feel what I feel]

Another interesting piece you have

And here we have another interesting piece its very whats the word well it needs more attention, more detail more color, adding more color all the way around that actually mix would be a plus aswell, but overall this was actually not a bad art piece but it for sure can use some improvements.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some improved "FONTS" would be a nice change here, And pick colors that mix better.

~X~

[help me out]

Interesting piece

Well this one was pretty strange but still interesting aswell, I would say you could touch it up a bit, It could be cleaned up a tad not a whole lot but it is in need of a bit of clean up, And everything seems bunched up together maybe space them out more, but anyways try a few things out and see how you can improve on those things.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
some small clean up more spacing out and more color ofcourse.

~X~

[Bubble Wand]

Original

How very wonderful to see an orginal idea here executed in a great way. The bright lights bubble colors are really interesting and give a great star effect in the choice of that yellow and shines/lighting. The character sitting creating these bubbles seems to be having a delightful time and it gives you a sense of calm when looking at the happy expression the character shows in their eyes. The little fish inside this large bubble seem to also be very happy and having a great time. I think they want to join them in making the bubbles. I love the large bubbles effect, it really gives you a sense of dept in the art and the coloring of the blues go well with all the yellows. The nebula type effect in that background is also visually appealing. Maybe make the stars in the background a bit brighter, they seem a bit dim and lost with the rest of the artwork but it is still beautiful non-the-less, So these types are a good style of art, and I like the effort you have put fourth in this and the whole idea and concept is even nice, I Applaud you and give you Kudo's on the progress of this fine piece, really seems like you have done a welldone piece here, and i was impressed. So with all that said its almost time for me to end this review, but I will say that it was a pleasure checking this piece out it brings alot to the table.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More bright stars in the background, the smaller white ones, just a bit more shine to them.

~X~

berserkbrandee responds:

Thank you for the very in-depth review! I really appreciate it and I'll keep in mind making stars in the background brighter in my future pieces! :)

[Guardbreak Girl]

This was notbad

Well this was notbad I like the style you have here it was very good work, and you have a certain style about it with some decent detail here and there makes it very fun to see whatelse you bring to the table, but based off of this it was a very nice piece of art.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
No need changes on a creative piece.

~X~