XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Beach Bums: Ela]

Cute

So this was cute I like some of the details in this art piece the girl seems like she needs more shine and sparkle though and there seems to be some background props needed the deck seemed kind of empty and with some added props and such would fill this piece and give off more of a realistic view point but regardless this was pretty good stuff here anyways nice work indeed I hope to see more from you soon

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More background props more shine and sparkle on charchter

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[Cousin]

Amazing

So this was some "AMAZING" work and I do love the black and white style here it has some very realistic elements I think if you added a frame or border in color and the rest in black and white it would be a nice touch up, but besides that idea you have some good skills.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I think if you added a frame or border in color and the rest in black and white it would be a nice touch up

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Yipcks responds:

Thank you!

And I totally agree with you, adding some colour would make it stand out more.

[philip literal]

Nice

Nice work and this was a good character here even the backround was notbad I do like the style here I do also think that some texture in the clothing is needed maybe even some shine on the hair but those are some small little details to think about, its a solid piece of art you have here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
some shine and texture work.

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[Hot nights]

Cute

So this was nice I like all the "BLUES" in this some of the stars could have more of a sparkle and shine to them, and I would even put a sparkle on the characters skin somehow, besides all that this was some really nice character work and some very nice smooth lines.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
in this some of the stars could have more of a sparkle and shine to them, and I would even put a sparkle on the characters skin somehow

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[BIRD]

Wow nice

This was a cool looking bird, I really like what you did here the paint style is really nice, and the eyes are really nifty, I do think you need some "BACKROUND" like other birds in the backround, maybe some feather design or pattern in the backround would also sufice. anyways nice work here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
other birds in the backround, maybe some feather design or pattern in the backround would also sufice

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[Mr. Owl]

Nice owl

The print design you have here on this piece is pretty decent very well done, love the thick lines and the dots and all the fine detail that you really pushed here very well stuff I am amazed could even see this on a shirt or something, anyways great work here, and keep making stuff like this.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some added color like the eyes or some of the design.

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[Chutneys Horrible Deformity]

Very colorfull

This was a nice beach scene and has some nice color too, I think a nice "SAIL-BOAT" in the backround would be nice I really love the bright colors and vibrant visuals here this was a cute art piece hope to see more from you soon, its a nice piece, glad I found this.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Ad some props like a sail boat etc.

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ChutneyGlaze responds:

Once again your awesome review has warmed my heart ❤
I will go back and add the sailboats as you command sire

[Brooke Spectre Knight]

Really nice

This was a really beautifull piece you have herem I really love the lighting effects you have on this, even the "GLARE" it comes off well and brings a realistic look a well made character a beautifil design and characrter you have here, and no real changes needed on this piece.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
No changes on this beautiful piece.

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[Dogyuunewgrounds 2016 Lemonade Stand]

Awesome

And once again we have another awsome piece here of Sprite and pixel regardless it's all shine and sparkle on this one and you have some really nice robots here I specifically love p-bot the whole scene here is filled with all sorts of shine and sparkle and honestly I don't have anything to suggest on this piece as this one is pretty full of so much detail and a well finished product so nice work indeed

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So no changes here it's a swell piece

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[Inktober Punkin']

This was cool

So the inktober really is something were people can participate in with some nice elements of art and styles I love this piece it has a lot of flavor I know there's no color in inktober pieces but would have been nice if you had some color in this piece but besides all that this was cool and we are just about at 2018s inktober so I look forward to work for this year anyways nice job

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some added color or a color version would be cool

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