XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Inktober day 2: Plant Gore]

Interesting

so this one was "INTERESTING" the whole "INKTOBER" is always as interesting as the next seems like this one could have used a little more line work on it though, but it tells a small story and I liked it for the mostpart so nice job all the way around, anyways nice work indeed on this one.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
seems like this one could have used a little more line work on it though

~X~

[Hair Gel]

Entertaining as always

So while these are the early ones they are still just as good and entertaining, theres not a lot of color and thats understandble or even details but again early stages of the comic, I really like what you have done here and are still amusing work, so keep up the fantastic work on this fun series.

~X~

[Flash]

Nice work here

Well I have to say you do some nice work even if it is in black and white a very nice style here and regardless of color or not it still brings humor and a nice all around style of a good comic so what you have here is welldone and I have enjoyed reviewing this one here.

~X~

[Unearthly]

Very nice indeed

This was some nice work and out of this world, you should brighten up that center piece a bit maybe thats just my opinion though, but overall this was a nice piece your talent shows off well with this one the rock formations, show off very well, anyways nice work here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
more light up focus point for more of the world to be shown with the reflection of light.

~X~

[Venom nom nom]

Nice

Well this was pretty interesting, the "ANIMATION" of it was smooth the "ART" was notbad the animation could have shown more squirting blood all around on this one, but everything else was pretty solid and a good little animation you have created on this art piece so nice work indeed.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
the animation could have shown more squirting blood all around on this one

~X~

[Tank Joyride]

Pretty nifty

So this one was pretty "NIFTY" I love how the color relates to newgrounds and while it is a "PICO-DAY" entry it was a classic version for "2014" I do think some other added colors in there wouldnt hurt but overall this was actually pretty good and loved the full visual image here so nice work for this piece.

~X~

[Onion]

I like these

So I really like these early ones as they show how it all started and how it all progressed along very nice, and even if theres not a lot of detail or props or even color these are still some faves of mine, so props to you on these early stages of your fun comic series.

~X~

[Superhero]

Another classic

So this was pretty good another original to the series of this fantastic series you have here and once again I will always say this was pretty impressive with all the adventure even in black and white its pretty good, so on that note nice comic entry you have here.

~X~

[Castle Window]

Decent

So this was kind of cool I like the "WINDOW" and what you all see outside I do think you could ad some "LIGHTING" effects that come down into the window or atleast onto the ledge or something, just a small idea to roll with but regardless this was pretty solid work here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I do think you could ad some lighting effects that come down into the window or atleast onto the ledge or something

~X~

[Eggs]

Nice

Well not so fun for them on "EASTER" So it was nice to see these early stages of the comics the black and white theme is always good there was not much detail but I do like the humor in this one and once again always nice to see how this all started out before, but anyways nice work here keep it going, cause its a solid comic series you have here.

~X~