XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Bowling For Bears - Trotsky]

Ok cool

Not sure what this one is but it was good work and had a nice visual, the wording could be in a better font or something but besides that this was pretty cool, you do some nice work here and this was notbad at all, so keep up the good work I look forward to more.

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the wording could be in a better font or something

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[Somewhere Other Chapter 21-9]

Cool

Love the dark text bubbles in this one you should do that with the others, So here we are with some nice comic style a good web comic and I have to say your art is a bit different then most and is pretty interesting and I like the different stuff you bring out in this comic series, I will have to check out more from you in the near future.

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Love the dark text bubbles in this one you should do that with the others

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[Somewhere Other Chapter 24-2]

Awsome comic

Nice work as always, I love what you do with "PURPLES" and such, you really bring out some nice details so keep making great comics and great details such as you have done here, this really caught my eye with this one and it just jumps out at you and I like the style and element, the energy and talent does show off in this one so nice work and effort you bring to the table, and its an honor to review your work here, hope to see more from you soon.

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you really bring out some nice details so keep making great comics and great details such as you have done here

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[The Legendary Sky Fruit]

Apple

So this was cool I like the apple and seems well drawn the "SHINE" seems like it should be on the other side and maybe even much more shine to it even adding a sparkle off the edge of the apple would be really cool, these are just ideas to think about, but anyways nice art work here.

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the shine aspect seems like it should be on the other side and maybe even much more shine to it even adding a sparkle off the edge of the apple would be really cool

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SlashCrazySmirk responds:

Thank you!

[PumpkinLock Dance Gif]

Nice

An animated pumpkin that was cool and its a lock even better, the size was just too small though, maybe you can make the view screen somewhat larger, it would be cool to see more of whats going on in the backround and such, but besides that this was pretty cool stuff.

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A larger view screen.

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[Too Small]

Not small?

I am not sure why you "DECIDED" to call this one small, it has lots of different "SIZES" going on in terms of font and wording. I think the coloring of each word is nice, and this seems to follow that trend at the time of words being used as art the different ways you can position them. I love the overall little ester-like eggs hidden around, the smile faces, they are just lightly added and you have to look closely to see and it all looks great the way you did that. It was subtle and nice and it made me smile looking at them. I think the world is big enough for the both of us. Have you seen Canada? it is just land, land, land, and they don't share it! I think there is lots of space is the world for all of us, but the saying is a nice one to re-create and use here. Nice "COLOR" selection for each letter and nice use of space, but I would have like some shadows and maybe make the text more 3D. A background would have been nice, maybe just a speech-bubble like background around the text to give it a bit more fullness and body. I wish you also made this font yourself but I see most of it is just a program and that is something I wish you would not shy away from, because I do enjoy when you use your own fonts. Overall not bad tho.

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Add some king of background around the text and font and then maybe make the font more 3D and use your own original font that you tend to draw.

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Cyberdevil responds:

Goes with the message, I think? The world not being big enough? Yupp, think this style had a peak of popularity a few years back, but t's still very much a thing. The background hmm... I had the gray pentagons there, but maybe they're a bit faded... thanks for the review!

I think overpopulation's going to be a pretty big problem in the future btw, large masses of land or no, we're consuming too much... but this one wasn't really about that anyway. XD Good to hear you've got a positive outlook on that!

[A Delicate Cycle]

Very elegant

So this was very smooth and elegant you have a sort of "CIRCULAR" border frame here and it looks pretty good I think even adding an outter border would have been cool too but your talent is very impressive and all the little details are very impressive so nice job here.

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I think even adding an outter border would have been cool too

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[Somewhere Other Chapter 21-7]

Great submission

So as always another great submission you have here the characters are brilliantly done nice detail and you bring a nice adventure to this one aswell so nice job there, and hope you keep making a good comic series like you have done here, so keep up the good work.

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I think the im sorry text bubble should be bigger since its a moments and ending point.

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[Somewhere Other Chapter 20-15]

Brilliant comic again

I cant get over how detailed your comic is you bring a sense of detail and stylish outcome, the stories play off well for themself, and you bring some really good stories and ideas and make them work very well so for that alone I give you a pat on the back for a story well done.

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No changes here this was a solid entry

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