XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Black Magic]

Nice work

Wow this was pretty good I like the whole canvus of the backround its really cool, a very deep texture, and the charactures are not half bad either the lighting effects are even better you should think about brighting up the eyes just a tad more with a glow effect or something

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
more glow in the eyes light them up.

~X~

[[C] Valentines Day]

Adorable

Wow a good way to spend your Valentines at Disney. I plan to take my girl there one day, she will enjoy it...this reminds me of that and it has a cute and honest feeling to it. Not so much romantic as more of a cute girl/boy piece that shows the joys of dating and friendship. I think the coloring and anime style you used here is good and your shadows and light effects all make it come to life. I dont think much needs changing maybe less black in the background. You are good with your style here and I think over time will only get better. I love the clouds of the background most as they really seem realistic with details and the effect you used. You have a nice piece of art here, you brought out lots of nice elements in this and made it your own style thats what I liked about this its not just put out there but you really made it jump out, so nice job there and i look forward to more from you soon. Nice effort here the art piece is different and I like what you did here and the talent shows off well, So I do like this and you will have me interested in more of these types.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
The black space around the background seems a bit much to me, maybe crop it down a bit to focus more on the couple here.

~X~

holikrep responds:

Aw thank you so much for the kind and thoughtful words! I appreciate you taking the time to do that, it means a lot! I did end up regretting not cropping it down a bit more but sadly I lost the original file during a factory reset so i'm not sure how well it'd crop anymore ;; I will be more careful about that in the future though! I'm really happy you liked the clouds ;u; )r I was probably most proud of them even though they more or less happened through a string of accidents

[Mastermind on the Button]

He looks mad

Wow this was pretty good he looks pretty mad I love the whole red and a few light up spots like lightning moon and even button, So with those light up points I would suggest to really put some glow on them they would really reflect well off the deep reds, But still a very good art piece here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I would suggest to really put some glow on them they would really reflect well off the deep reds

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[Dragon Over Earth]

Nice design

This was pretty cool I love the whole black and white design here this one seems like it would be so much better with some added color to it its very nice work though and a good design indeed, so just think about adding some color to this, anyways nice detail you added in here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some much needed color ofcourse.

~X~

[Gabi's Alice]

Nice character

Well this was a nice character kind of jumping out at you so that was a nice pose, and I really like the backround you added it was not too complicated but was subtle and fits just right, as for improving on things, I honestly think its great as is, so nice work here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe some frames on edges of canvus if even that.

~X~

[Old Buddies]

This was pretty interesting

Two heads here or characters one very orange one and a paper backround so that alone was some random stuff but what you do with the design of it all is pretty nifty nice shades nice form of these very large heads, onlything I can see you changing about this whole piece is make the "CANVUS" much larger

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Much larger canvus needed for more visuals of details.

~X~

[Marceline (Update)]

Sexy

This is one sexy looking vampire. I love vampires. The "BLOOD" in here eyes was a great addition to this as it bring out that dark side with her sexy red lips smile. That apple gives off the sexy seductive feeling like she is trying to lure you in with innocence and you want a bit but she really is the one doing the biting. The long hair with its details and textures really fits in with that seductive and dark look. The texture and patterns in her lace outfit are really the star here as it looks almost real and similar to clothing designs. I love each part of this piece and I seem to be enjoying all the new things you bring to the table the last few days. Now before I get to the helpfull changes part of the review I will say that you have done well here, I wanted to comment on how this Radiates all sorts of creativty and that was something I really liked about this piece you have a good Expression of creativity, and I was impressed with a number of areas.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
maybe blood from her mouth dripping out, and putting a more shine on that apple would be a plus

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[Garden of Eden]

You make this look easy

Its not everyday that you come across something like this you have some great characters some decent visuals and just some good ol humor and you give them a good vive and I think thats why this has grown on me because of the vibe the characters have so I am pleased with this. these guys are always hungry lol.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Another funny one thats why making these longer would be awsome.

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[What is it?]

In a nutshell

Cool and here we are with another fun episode of the comic and this one may very well be one of my faves, I love these characters and I love how this story plays out, some very nice stuff here and good story for this particular episde so nice work here. and there was some bit of color in this one.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I like the small added color but some more of that color would be awsome.

~X~

[Fear Gut]

Amusing in its own way

Cool stuff once again well you have amazed me once again, you always bring out some new adventure and they are as fun as ever, Anyways I look forward to see more of this comic series its always interesting even if at times the story is average the excitement is always there. backrounds seemed bland though.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So the backrounds seemed bland a prop here or there would be nice.

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