XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Coco Bandicoot]

Wow

You really went all out on this one it's very impressive I love all the detail and love the backround and the big wording was awesome but the coco could use some detail and depth just an idea for some improvment

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
The coco wording or name needs either more shading or even a shine to it

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[Fly Away]

This is very nice

First of all I want to say congrats on the effects here especially the lighting effects with the glistering lighting beaming off of her that's a nice touch indeed I think as a whole you should ad more of that and the colors are pretty amazing too very good drawing here and came out well so no major changes needed just more of the lighting effects

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More focus on the lighting effects and what not

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[Dianabunny]

Cute artwork

And here we have a cartoony feel very colorfull art and style I like the prop of the carrot it's very suggestive and as for the backround it was cute maybe more texture in the backround and I would even ad a sparkle to the carrot itself but with all that said this was a beautiful piece of artwork keep it up

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Two things that could be improved a sparkle on the tip of the carrot and some more texture in the background

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[Makoto the Underboob]

Very cute

Well this one was very cute the large chest was entertaining the top view from the top downwards was pretty cool a nice art piece here I think the only thing this needs is some glistering shine on her breasts and maybe a few other points but a shine here or there would be nice. Anyways keep up the great work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A shine on her breasts is one good idea for improvement

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[Krystal]

Beautiful

This was another beautiful piece and I really love that you have a background with this one it really accents the main character very well and I would suggest more fur on the character and a sparkle at the end of her spear

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A sparkle here and there and more fur

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[Mr. Buisness man]

Artistic

I found this to be very artistic and a style of it's own. The black background almost fits but then I want to see his world he's walking away or too from. The character itself is really good with a meshed color that made for some nice texture but anyways very nice work I loved it and it's from simple to depth so nice job

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some background scene

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StalkerGuy responds:

Thank you for the review! This drawing is pretty old and I realize could have done a lot of things better.

[Phoenix /SN/]

This was deep

Wow this was some really deep colors and the yellows get really deep I lyove the reds the most you really made it a deep mesh with lots of great texture to form that deep feel so very nice job here I'm very impressed with this and with this being an original piece it needs no changes

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
No changes for this beautiful deep and intense piece

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[Girl Fox]

Notbad

So this was notbad now first off I like the character here very well done but that backround needs some detail it needs some design to it and it needs some meshed color or something but besides that I really like what you did here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Backround design and meshed detail

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[Nugget Point]

Another great piece

And here was another great piece of landscape I think the only thing missing here is maybe have some birds flying over the tower or ocean that would be a final nice touch to this I like the subtle color on this whole piece made it perfect that way but anyways a really good work of talent here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Adding some props like birds and a moon or sun

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