XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Jackalope]

Good

I think this here is a good sketch work but could use a few more improvement like more of background as those ink lines seem a bit of a rushed inclusion. I love how realistic this is and how you tried to create a more complicated head-turn position rather then a profile or front view sketch. The eyes are very cute and beedie, and the details for the ink lines are very well done adding texture to the piece. I love the added flower they are eating too. I Applaud you on this one, These kinds of pieces I really come to love because they just sort of jump out at you and tell a sort of story. very Engaging. Its always good to come across different and unique styles of art and as we come to the end of this review I will get to some helpful options soon. One might be that this could be Polished with more Expression of creativity.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Just more of a background, maybe colorize this

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rosesarentread responds:

Wow, thank you for such an in-depth critique! Right now I’m not too good at backgrounds, so I’ll be sure to work on them!

[Harley Quinn]

Love it

Allthough this was an older piece its still a good piece of art you have some nice skills and this was made in the first stages of the art portal but still wanted to take the time to show some respect for some good artwork here, so nice work indeed, I look forward to even more from you.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More shine

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[walk the dinosaur]

ow very nice

I like this one, the shades and textures are pretty good if you ask me I do think something more could be done with the backround but since this is an older one maybe not so much, but anyways regardless this is apretty good piece if you ask me, anyways keep up the great artistic style.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some slight backround detail

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[DS Felicia]

Very nice

Now this was very nicework a very simplistic style turned into something even more I love the border aswell as the circle orbs all in the backrounds that really made this up the characters are really nice looking and you have a way with use of color so nice job indeed on a beautifull piece here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I honestly couldnt find anything to change in my eyes this is pretty solid

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[Black Magic]

Nice work

Wow this was pretty good I like the whole canvus of the backround its really cool, a very deep texture, and the charactures are not half bad either the lighting effects are even better you should think about brighting up the eyes just a tad more with a glow effect or something

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
more glow in the eyes light them up.

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[[C] Valentines Day]

Adorable

Wow a good way to spend your Valentines at Disney. I plan to take my girl there one day, she will enjoy it...this reminds me of that and it has a cute and honest feeling to it. Not so much romantic as more of a cute girl/boy piece that shows the joys of dating and friendship. I think the coloring and anime style you used here is good and your shadows and light effects all make it come to life. I dont think much needs changing maybe less black in the background. You are good with your style here and I think over time will only get better. I love the clouds of the background most as they really seem realistic with details and the effect you used. You have a nice piece of art here, you brought out lots of nice elements in this and made it your own style thats what I liked about this its not just put out there but you really made it jump out, so nice job there and i look forward to more from you soon. Nice effort here the art piece is different and I like what you did here and the talent shows off well, So I do like this and you will have me interested in more of these types.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
The black space around the background seems a bit much to me, maybe crop it down a bit to focus more on the couple here.

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holikrep responds:

Aw thank you so much for the kind and thoughtful words! I appreciate you taking the time to do that, it means a lot! I did end up regretting not cropping it down a bit more but sadly I lost the original file during a factory reset so i'm not sure how well it'd crop anymore ;; I will be more careful about that in the future though! I'm really happy you liked the clouds ;u; )r I was probably most proud of them even though they more or less happened through a string of accidents

[Mastermind on the Button]

He looks mad

Wow this was pretty good he looks pretty mad I love the whole red and a few light up spots like lightning moon and even button, So with those light up points I would suggest to really put some glow on them they would really reflect well off the deep reds, But still a very good art piece here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I would suggest to really put some glow on them they would really reflect well off the deep reds

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[Dragon Over Earth]

Nice design

This was pretty cool I love the whole black and white design here this one seems like it would be so much better with some added color to it its very nice work though and a good design indeed, so just think about adding some color to this, anyways nice detail you added in here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some much needed color ofcourse.

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[Gabi's Alice]

Nice character

Well this was a nice character kind of jumping out at you so that was a nice pose, and I really like the backround you added it was not too complicated but was subtle and fits just right, as for improving on things, I honestly think its great as is, so nice work here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe some frames on edges of canvus if even that.

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[Old Buddies]

This was pretty interesting

Two heads here or characters one very orange one and a paper backround so that alone was some random stuff but what you do with the design of it all is pretty nifty nice shades nice form of these very large heads, onlything I can see you changing about this whole piece is make the "CANVUS" much larger

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Much larger canvus needed for more visuals of details.

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