XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Love is...]

Nice Comic idea

So this was a cool "WEB-COMIC" some art detail could look smoother and fresher, So this was a nice comic idea you have here and based on the comic of review it seems pretty solid and a good creativity element about it, So "I-ENCOURAGE-YOU-TO-BUILD-ONTO-THIS" and create a great comic as you have been these web comics are pretty impressive.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
some art detail could look smoother and fresher

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BbonX responds:

A very late answer, sorry
But, thanks for the tip!
I'll remake it!

[Inktober Day 2]

I love B/W Submissions

I think you could ad some "SLIGHT" color to this, Wow I really like this Black and white drawing or painting regardless you really made it come to life and this piece goes to show that you dont really need color or much color to make it "LOOK-ALIVE" because you have made it come alive just all on the depth and detail of the black and white.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I think you could ad some slight color to this

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[Station]

Nice

LOL Dont pee on the "3rd" Rail lol another funny one, fun and entertaining moments in the comic and comic series, thats what I say about this series as you always make these characters do some wacky and crazy stuff, the comic style never gets old, and thats what really keeps me glued to the screen, so nice job here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
no changes with this one its fantastic

~X~

[Even More Fishing]

Amazing work

Haha I love the "JOKE" in this one very well executed, wish you had made this one longer maybe a few more frames, So I have to say as I always do you do some amazing work it never fails to entertain me with all the brilliance of the entertainment value that you bring to the table, and just some great characters that bring this together so props to you on some amazing style and great comic here these characters always into something but that makes it fun.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
wish you had made this one longer maybe a few more frames

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[The Wraith Of Bliss]

Really nice

Now this I really "LIKED" the texture has some real "ARTISTIC" strokes within it and has some nice pose aswell, seems like you could have added some backround detail on this piece here but besides that you have some wonderfull art detail and a really nice character work here aswell.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
seems like you could have added some backround detail on this piece

~X~

[Cia getting ready]

Cute

So this was a cute piece of art here, the "EXPRESSION" on her face was nice the "POSE" was even better and the "MIST" on the ground was cool, I do think more texture in the skintone would be a nice touch of improvments, but besides all that this was a fantastic character design.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I do think more texture in the skintone would be a nice touch of improvments

~X~

[Hanna]

Very deep

So this was pretty cool I really love the deep "TEXTURES" here from the hair to the wrinkle in the clothing to the backround fainted view really some top notch work here and well perceived especially by this instant fan of your work, and hope you make more like this sometime.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
maybe adding some lighting effect would be cool comming off the side or something.

~X~

BiffTheTimid responds:

I check newgrounds every now and then these days, and it's pretty cool to see your review. I've been coming to the site since probably 1999 or so, before there was a portal. So I definitely recognize your user name, since you've probably reviewed other things of mine over the past 15 years or so, as well as the billion other things since you're a reviewing machine. Keep fighting the good fight my dude.

[LudLud]

Dark

Wow I really "LIKE" this one, this was some very intense work you have presented here, love the darkness I think as a small tip have a small shine on the teeth or eyes, but besides that this was pretty cool and you should do more of these dark elements anyways nice work once again.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I think as a small tip have a small shine on the teeth or eyes

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[Pink Haired Girl]

Nice dancer

So here you have a nice "STRUCTURE" of a dance and the "POSE" was just right seems to be perfect in its pose almost as if there is music playing or something, I think you could ad some detail to the backround like backdrop scene or some random purple design or even props, anyways really good stuff here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I think you could ad some detail to the backround like backdrop scene or some random purple design or even props

~X~

[The Kittadel]

Awsome

So this was really good I really "LOVE" the small details in the like the lighting effects on the small kitty on the ledge, you really put some nice "DETAIL in this ome seems like you could have added slightly more lighting effects though, anyways nice job here."

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
seems like you could have added slightly more lighting effects though

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