XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Tali and Yuno]

Pretty Cute

So this was really cute I love the "SHINE" you ad on the faces and other points this was a "SIMPLE" piece but is radiant with all sorts of little details that make it cute so nice job on this piece I do think you could use some backround work maybe some backdrop scene of a city scene or trees etc, anyways nice work.

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I do think you could use some backround work maybe some backdrop scene of a city scene or trees etc

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D-SuN responds:

Thanks for the feedback!! Very much appreciated and inspiring to draw more!

[Sora]

Decent

Ok this is pretty standard in terms of KH artwork. Your basic lines and shades and fanart. I feel like i've seen this one before in terms of positioning. I do like the use of space and colors. You have him filling in all the space well and it allows the need to not have a background. You got this done very well, but it needs more diversity.

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I think different positions of him would be nice, something not seen before would be great.

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[Interstellar]

Cool

So first off very "NICE" and cool design here, the "SHINE" was nice but I think you could have had more of a sparkle and shine come off of the eye pieces and the helment itself, maybe some more domminant stars even, these are just some small ideas anyways nice work.

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I think you could have had more of a sparkle and shine come off of the eye pieces and the helment itself, maybe some more domminant stars even

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StevieHarrisonIII responds:

Thank you for your help I will defiantly work on it thank you again

[Feeling Fabulous]

Very pink

So this was pretty cute and a nice "CHARACTER" structure at that the lighting effect was kind of nifty I do think you should have had more lighting come in and hit on the stars maybe even have random colors of stars on the backround, besides all that you have a really nice art piece here and great character structure.

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I do think you should have had more lighting come in and hit on the stars maybe even have random colors of stars on the backround

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[Drugs and Dreams]

Cute and subtle

So this was a cute and subtle piece you have here the colors all blend well together and you have a nice little character here, I wouldnt mind seeing more texture and shading within the color but other then that this was some nice artwork you have here, keep making great stuff.

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I wouldnt mind seeing more texture and shading within the color

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[Tera - Elin]

Very nice

The "STRUCTURE" on the character is amaung I do think you should ad more glows and lighting effects like with the circular beam she has going on and some "BACKROUND-ELEMENTS" would also be nice, Now this entry wont get the perfect award but what entry does, But what it does offer, Is a good balance of what works and some elements that you did bring forward are nice, Now go on and make more nifty stuff.

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I do think you should ad more glows and lighting effects like with the circular beam she has going on and some backround elements would also be nice,

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MLeth responds:

Thanks for the feedback! I don't think more glow would've benefited this piece as I feel I already went too far with the glow on the magic rune. If you add too much glow on something that isn't the focal point of a piece you might end up with an unfocused drawing. Her really is the focal point!

[Dusk Silhouette]

Really nice

So this was really "NICE" I almost feel with all the "REDS" you could have had more of a sunset comming off the backround setting with some added lighting effects it might look pretty cool, but your style here is pretty good in itself and very nice view scene here.

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you could have had more of a sunset comming off the backround setting with some added lighting effects it might look pretty cool

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[Portrait]

Beautiful

Wow well this is just great and the beauty really shines here. I love those eyes, those deep eyes, they just draw you in so much and you get lost in them. What a great variety of blues and hues there. I love your shading and effects with lighting. The texturs the colors the style is all great. The shine in the skin, the details in the hair, my god it is just magical.

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Nothing, not one thing.

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[Brooke]

Very nice indeed

So this "PIECE" here came off very well her "LEGS" seem like they could use more of a shine to them though, Now no submission is perfect by any means nor would they win the perfect award, But you did bring a balance of elements that were pretty nifty, And there were some things that you could bring forward that would make this even smoother. but I will get to that later, But sofar you have done something interesting.

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her legs seem like they could use more of a shine to them though

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[That's what teddies are for...]

Nice teddy

So this was pretty cool I like how the "TEDDY" protects the girl I do think you should have added more backround and some more blood shooting out here or there maybe even some splatter on the walls, but other then that this was pretty cool I like the style of art here.

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I do think you should have added more backround and some more blood shooting out here or there maybe even some splatter on the walls

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