Notbad
So this was actually notbad and you can't go wrong with something like down the character was notbad I did think much more depth and detail could be placed on the character likes shines and shades as well as putting some depth into the room word maybe even use a fancy font or something just an idea to think about besides that you have some nice work here
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some added depth to both charchter and wording
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