Very nice
So I like this because it's simple yet complicated but yet it does have a very artistic feel in a subtle way and the wording puts meaning into it all but besides that it's nice I wouldn't mind some more deeper reds blended in with the ones you have just for extra measure be or something but overall a nice art piece you have here your talent shines on this one
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some blending of other reds
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