XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[LudLud]

Dark

Wow I really "LIKE" this one, this was some very intense work you have presented here, love the darkness I think as a small tip have a small shine on the teeth or eyes, but besides that this was pretty cool and you should do more of these dark elements anyways nice work once again.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I think as a small tip have a small shine on the teeth or eyes

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[Pink Haired Girl]

Nice dancer

So here you have a nice "STRUCTURE" of a dance and the "POSE" was just right seems to be perfect in its pose almost as if there is music playing or something, I think you could ad some detail to the backround like backdrop scene or some random purple design or even props, anyways really good stuff here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I think you could ad some detail to the backround like backdrop scene or some random purple design or even props

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[The Kittadel]

Awsome

So this was really good I really "LOVE" the small details in the like the lighting effects on the small kitty on the ledge, you really put some nice "DETAIL in this ome seems like you could have added slightly more lighting effects though, anyways nice job here."

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
seems like you could have added slightly more lighting effects though

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[Yoda]

Yoda YES!

That was awesome. I really love this. You really have captured him and all his glory. I do wish you had more effects in his face and body like you do in this wonderful background. I do think those stars and black sky effects are great and really give off that galaxy feeling. The face was the best part becuase you gave us classic Yoda with a small smile and a guy full of heart.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I would not really change anything, maybe more effects, but great job.

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omacron6 responds:

thank you very much :)
yes, i should have out a lot more into the coloring but i was satisfied with how it looked at the time :)

[U a wizard?]

Awsome work

So I love the "DRAWING" here it was very artistic I could see you adding some color to this maybe some more fine details added aswell, overall this was pretty good work though, anyways hope you grace us with even more art styles like this piece here its a very nice drawing and detail of art.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I could see you adding some color to this maybe some more fine details added aswell

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[PenPineappleApplePen]

This was cute

So this was a cute piece "FRUIT" together is kind of interesting seems like you did a good job on the creation of them and the message was kind of odd but it was a nice gesture, I think you should ad some backround detail on this one, but anyways nice work here looking good.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I think you should ad some backround detail on this one

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[Happy 4th of July to all my American Friends]

the 4th

This was cool and I have to say a well "EXECUTED-JOKE" at the end there this was a brilliant idea the "COLOR" was vibrant and I could see you making a "WEB-COMIC" from this with these characters anyways, more jokes more humor and that would really make this something even more, but besides that I enjoyed your artistic view here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I could see you making a Comic from this with these characters anyways, more jokes more humor and that would really make this something even more

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[Sailor moon sketches 1]

Good sketches

Ok well this here is decent for sketch work but you really could add more in terms of the Sailor Moon universe. I love the use of character representation in this. You have Usagi down pretty well in her ditzy ways and cute nature with strong body language and facial expressions. Just try to use the drawings in a setting like a battle or maybe a moon background with just one of the sketches as the main art. Good line work and coloring too btw. I do think you have some talent here. The lines do need a bit more solidity to them and refinement but good job nonetheless.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As stated above. Keep it up.

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[Crypt Shyfter]

Very nice

This was nice and "SHARP" I think more use of glowing and shines and even some added sparles would be a nice touch up on this, And so here we have something interesting and differant, this was petty cool, it does show off some good artistic skills, but also at the same time it could use more effort and so on, So good style here keep with that effort. because it really does look great. And well thats that, a decent piece of art, some pretty neat way you designed this it was interesting and kept me looking at all the little details, so in that aspect of it, it was a decent piece of art, and I hope to see more from you soon, anyways nice efforts.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I think more use of glowing and shines and even some added sparles would be a nice touch up on this

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[Aria]

Nice

So this was a nice character I love the "GOLD" theme here the hair is really nice, wish it was a bit more shiny and I would also suggest adding some backround detail to this piece here it seemed bland in the backround, but anyways this was a nice character design you have here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
wish it was a bit more shiny and I would also suggest adding some backround detail to this piece here it seemed bland in the backround

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