XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Procrastinization]

Good detail

I like the detail in this love her look and that hair is really wild I do think as some improvment you could ad more shade in the hair and as for the background that was very impressive with the design I think you should have a burst of light back there it will reflect off of her and show more lighting detail on her skin tone just an idea that you maybor may not use but may improve on things

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some light brust from back end and some more shading in hair

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[Cute Etna]

Very cute

Now everything here was really good I love the shine you added in all the different points I normally would suggest more shine especially on end of tail but you do have some decent shine it's the background that could really use something more the base color is nice but may also needs a design to it like some pattern and such but anyways very nice work on this fine charchter piece hope to see more of your fine work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some design or pattern on the background wall

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[OPEN ETNA]

This was cute

Now this was a cute piece here everything looked just right some cute charchter and cute friends very nice form I love her hair and tail you need much more shine and sparkle on her tail like the tip of it then maybe a streak of shine on her hair it would reflect nice off the deep color you have but with all that said I will say this was a pleasure to review and hope to review more soon

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some shine and sparkle points here and there

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[GoH: Devil]

Devilishly good

This was a nice devilishly good character with some really nice form and I like the shine I wouldn't mind more shine and some sparkle on the tip of her horns would be another great idea she is perfect with the black dress and this really came out well a nice art piece and you bring lots of energy here with lots of fine detail so nice job on this one anyways keep up the good work I really like this piece

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some random shine and sparkles her and there

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[Collision of Asses]

Nice fresh colors

I like the nice and fresh colors used here you really have some sharp design here as well I like the blood splatter but my question here is why no blood splatter on them and there bodies that's one thing they should have I know you like the whole fresh look but blood on them would have been a cool idea very nice work here and just ad some blood on them even if it's just a little bit of splatter

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Put some blood splatter on there bodies

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[Answer Me...]

Really intense

This was a very intense piece I love this charracter he has some very nice design I really love the eyes you should ad more of a glare on his eyes that could be a focul point but I did want to say you gave him some nice texture on his skin tone this piece is really good I even faved this one it's very nice indeed and I look forward to even more stuff like this from you so keep up the great work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some shine and glare in the eye

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[Devilish Maid]

Nice detail

And this one needs some borders or frames some dark green ones would suffice just fine and I honestly think it would complete it by a ton just has that look that a border or frame would fit so well with this one but you do have some very nice character structure nice blend of colors too besides that this was a pleasure to review I have enjoyed it very much

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some frames or borders

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