XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Hunter Gin and Raar]

This was notbad

I like this sketch you have here, the "PENCIL-WORK" is very good I could see you improving on more line work more little details that would bring this out even taking this into a photoshop for enhanced visual effects would be a plus, but other then that this was a fantastic piece to review so nice work here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I could see you improving on more line work more little details that would bring this out even taking this into a photoshop for enhanced visual effects would be a plus

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[Inktober day 19 (cloud)]

A brilliant piece

And here you have a beautiful piece the black and white is nice and the design on all the drawings here is nice I wouldn't mind seeing more of this style but throughout the whole canvus giving off a very artistic view of everything but what you do have is really good and some nice work indeed so nice work on this one

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More fill in. On the canvus

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DrSevenSeizeMD responds:

I enjoy filling a canvas. Maybe that will be my inktober challenge this year!

[Yosatsu Wallpaper]

Wow nice

Very nice this was a good piece of art the background reflection was nice and a nice touch indeed the main character was really cool too and the darkness of this whole piece was pretty fantastic I remember your work from years ago and this was pretty nice too so nice work on this indeed this does not need any improvements

~~things to improve on~~
No changes at this time

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[Millia Rage]

Very nice indeed

And here you have some nice work this was like a queen card and you presented it very well I do think the edges should be colored it a golden color like the characters clothing it would be a nice touch on this one. Try it out

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Color the edges and or frames yellow or golden

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[60's Pinup Turned Demon Lady]

Very good demon lady

This was a very good demon lady I like the colors I like the pose and you really made a nice structure of her I think adding some smoke filled areas might give off that demon feel also but very good charchter here it was brilliant

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some added smoke would be good

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[Yoko Pinup]

Nice

Wow nice and a big congrats on the front page that's a nice achievement to gain but your hard work payed off like this piece I really don't see any changes or improvments that need to be changed because you created a masterpiece here great color great pose very nice backrounds it all worked out so well so nice job here. Props to you for a beautiful piece of art

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
No improvements needed on a masterpiece

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[Halloween Cream]

Very cute

This was very cute and simple and you can see it didn't take long I can see you improving on this with much more texture and a better don't with more style but as you said it was a quick piece of work so I guess it is what it is

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some texture some improved don't

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[Going for a Dip]

Very nice

Now first off I really love your work and you have a very good eye for detail like the waterfall in the background or the snapping of the undergarments lol and the backside of beautiful views but you really do put some effort and energy into your work and it shows just like this art piece and I was very impressed with your style here as for improvement not sure because you did so good on this only thing I can really think of is a burst of sunlight beaming down on the girls

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A beam of sunlight

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