XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Tobuscus]

Nice

So this was some nice work here, its a "PORTRAIT" piece and he is in an action "POSE" pretty good pose if you ask me, I think as for the backround you should have more details maybe even a patteren or design instead of the gradient one, but it was a nice portrait piece you had here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
for the backround you should have more details maybe even a patteren or design instead of the gradient one

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[Wrong Kind]

Nice series

lol the "BOTTLE" up your rage is deadly lol I really like how this one plays out from start to finish, the story stuff you bring to these are really good, Good story and even better humor as always, so what I can say while theres a dozon of these of sorts they are still awsome in there own way. so keep that up.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some added backround detail of the store or something might have been cool.

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[HiPico.png]

Different

Well I have to say that this was pretty different and random and thats ok I like the "FACE" love the "H I" that was just so random but the art itself was pretty nifty and it just came out very well Some color in the backround would be nice. but anyways good random art here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some color in the backround would be nice, just a suggestion though.

~X~

[Breakfast]

Awsome web-comic

Dont eat the "DIAMONDS" lol And once again I have found another piece to the puzzle in this great web comic it brings lots of fun and joy throughout the series and this entry really brings some good humor and adventure ofcourse, you have some good ideas and make them come out in full fun and wildness and thats what I enjoy about your work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Another one with no need for any changes its fantastic

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[Legendary Jazzaxe]

Nice comic

So this was a nice comic here, I love the intense detail you should really make more of this and have it stretch more like more entries, the story keeps it exciting and the detail in this is very good very talented art here, I look forward to even more from you.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
make more to this comic, and more eye frames as you did with this one.

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[NightWatch at ComicCon]

Wow

This is a great idea you have here. I have setup many cons in my time so I know how they can be, so that was a good way of showcasing what happens and the good times people have dressing up in cosplay. I love the additon of the coca cola and the comic-con bag so you know they are chilling there and having a good time. The coloring and blending with your brushes is wonderful. I do love the darker tones of color to bring out that con feeling of low light and crowds. I think your diversity in the people is also good and shows that we all love to be fans together.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Nothing to change, love this as it is.

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[Love is...]

Nice Comic idea

So this was a cool "WEB-COMIC" some art detail could look smoother and fresher, So this was a nice comic idea you have here and based on the comic of review it seems pretty solid and a good creativity element about it, So "I-ENCOURAGE-YOU-TO-BUILD-ONTO-THIS" and create a great comic as you have been these web comics are pretty impressive.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
some art detail could look smoother and fresher

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BbonX responds:

A very late answer, sorry
But, thanks for the tip!
I'll remake it!

[Inktober Day 2]

I love B/W Submissions

I think you could ad some "SLIGHT" color to this, Wow I really like this Black and white drawing or painting regardless you really made it come to life and this piece goes to show that you dont really need color or much color to make it "LOOK-ALIVE" because you have made it come alive just all on the depth and detail of the black and white.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I think you could ad some slight color to this

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[Station]

Nice

LOL Dont pee on the "3rd" Rail lol another funny one, fun and entertaining moments in the comic and comic series, thats what I say about this series as you always make these characters do some wacky and crazy stuff, the comic style never gets old, and thats what really keeps me glued to the screen, so nice job here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
no changes with this one its fantastic

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[Even More Fishing]

Amazing work

Haha I love the "JOKE" in this one very well executed, wish you had made this one longer maybe a few more frames, So I have to say as I always do you do some amazing work it never fails to entertain me with all the brilliance of the entertainment value that you bring to the table, and just some great characters that bring this together so props to you on some amazing style and great comic here these characters always into something but that makes it fun.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
wish you had made this one longer maybe a few more frames

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