XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[[C] Dadainish]

Really nice

And here was another really nice work piece another standing pose the black backround now this is one piece where the black background should be changed to a lighter color because the character has on dark outfit so a different color backround like a lighter one would accent the characters wardrobe much better but overall you have a really nice charchter here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make the background a lighter color

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[[C] Mixtilly]

Awsome

And here was another great charchter this particular one I really like because one it's a frontal pose and shows all the detail I do think some more shine can be added to the tenticales and some shiny jewelry points also something could be done more with the background these are some nice elements to improve on but overall I like the work you have created here and hope you create even more soon

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some extra shine in places and some background detail

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[[C] Maxwell]

Very nice

So this was another nice pose by a character you have prepared here now I will say I'm not too fond of the black background but I do like the element here also like the sword and think you could have some shine and sparkle come off the sword and it would reflect well with the dark background but of course this is just an idea here you have some nice work as it is

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some shine and sparkle on the sword

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[[C] Thisisnotras]

Cool charchter

So this was cool I like charchter and is in a nice standing pose the black background is ok but maybe some design or pattern back there would be something better

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some ideas suggested above

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[Dipper Pines]

Cool painting

So this was pretty cool, I like the "PAINT" style you have here and makes it look pretty realistic on this one, the "EXPRESSION" on the face is real scared and worried so you executed that look within the painting very well, I think a darker theme maybe some glowing eyes in the backround would be another key point on this piece, anyways nice work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I think a darker theme maybe some glowing eyes in the backround would be another key point on this piece

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RannitX responds:

Thanks for your input. bill cipher kinda blends into the background adding a glowing eye for him could have helped him pop out.

[oil study]

Nice painting

So this was really nice, I love the painting style here its subtle and has some good "TEXTURE" you really bring out some nice paint style here in this one, love the little detail like the watch and how it sparkles etc, anyways nice work you have here keep making great stuff.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
make more great stuff like this.

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[Happy Halloween!]

Cute

So this was pretty "CUTE" I really like what you have done here with the "ANIMATION" it was a short animation but was cute and adorble, I think if you added some backround detail or even color it would be a nice touch up on this one, but you have presented some nice work here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
if you added some backround detail or even color it would be a nice touch up on this one

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[Creepy Doll]

Very dark

This was really good, I love the darkness of this whole piece, I like the deep textures and that small light in the backround was cool I think you could have that light glare up a tad bit more and shred a bit more light into the darkness that would be a cool idea, but anyways nice art piece here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
that small light in the backround was cool I think you could have that light glare up a tad bit more and shred a bit more light into the darkness

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[uzuzuzzbobzozozo]

YAY more

I was hoping to see more from you. I do enjoy your work. I am saddened to see such a low vote on this piece, but some people do not understand dark art I suppose. The girl here seems to be lost or losing herself. The mouth is moving from one place then down and repeating like it has lost it. I love that. I love the element of teeth and sadness coming off of her, the madness within trap inside the body of hurt. The pain of the shadows and red combined make you see something deep inside her, something of sorrow. You wonder why and you wonder if this is fear, a monster, madness, or depression. It makes you think and that is what I like about your work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As discussed before, maybe a more red background instead of white, but I like these as they are.

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shittingpie responds:

TY friend

[Halloween Shot]

Nice Scene here

So this was a nice scene you have here really good characters and there seems to be a good scene of fun and enjoyment scene so that was really nice your artwork is very nice and all the props was just very nice, I dont really need to give any advice because you have made a solid piece here, you do some good work here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I dont really need to give any advice because you have made a solid piece here

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