XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Fund The Charity Room's Platformania!]

Nice

So this was a nice piece here it looks like an intro to a game or something I like the animation you put into this and like the art detail it has a fresh look and a very nice visual with some good charchter detail on top of that so as some form of improvment I would say ad some more sparkles more shines more glistering shine all about even on charchter work just an idea though

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As mentioned some shines and sparkles

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[My Lizards And I]

Very nice

So this was another very nice "PIECE" love the bearded dragons, the painting was very pleasent on the eyes and this was a very beautifull visual, so nice work here, I cant find any need for any changes as it was just a beautifull piece as is, anyways keep up the brilliant work.

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I cant find any need for any changes as it was just a beautifull piece as is

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[Napoleon and his girl - COTM Feb'18 PimpMyClassic]

Neat

This is cool and has one of those rag doll effects to the body parts and characters. Lots of nice shades and coloring. I love love that you actually have a backgrouond and use the space to tell a story here and not just focus on the characters. You even have a nice neat border here. I like this very much.

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Nothing to really change, good job here.

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[Alicca]

Beautiful

Now this was an elegant piece I love her "EXPRESSION" on this kind of like she is looking deep into something the sunlight was nice behind her, I think you could even have more domminant lighting effect come off the edge there, but anyways nice work here I like this piece.

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I think you could even have more domminant lighting effect come off the edge there

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MatthewLopz responds:

this is such an old piece lol

[Neutrality]

Awsome as drawing

This is one of my "FAVES" from all of your work I do think you could ad some lighting effects into this, So here was once again another great find of a black and white drawing here, good shading and a stylish visual, even though no color here its still pretty amazing, so props to you on some nice drawing and sketch here now maybe one day adding some color or even just a little would be a good improvement for this.

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I do think you could ad some lighting effects into this

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[Raiden!]

Subtle

So this was notbad it was a subtle peice of art good toony cartoony here, I think the white "WORDING" blends too much into the pink backround so thts something that you could change up a bit maybe darker wording or darker backround either or will sufice, but other then that this was pretty good.

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I think the white Font wording blends too much into the pink backround so thts something that you could change up a bit maybe darker wording or darker backround either or will sufice

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[Old Moss Back Gorge]

Wow amazing

Now this was pretty amazing, the "DETAIL" is so realistic and the backround is just as good so nice job here very realistic style here, and this is one of those pieces that you dont need any changes its a beautifull art piece as is, so really fantastic job here.

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this is one of those pieces that you dont need any changes its a beautifull art piece as is

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[Old man's face]

Very well done

Wow the "DETAIL" is amazing here love the linework its so "FINE" and such detail I almost think you could ad a fancy frame on this and have more like a gallery piece, but anyways thats my take on this piece its a beautiful piece of art here and hope to see more of your work soon.

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I almost think you could ad a fancy frame on this and have more like a gallery piece

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[Unfinished Comic Page 3]

Very good design

Wow you create "STORIES" in these art pieces and I love them, you should ad a fancy black and white frame on these b/w pieces, So I call this drawing a design but have to say this was very unique and different its a drawing or a design a sketch its a brilliant piece of art here with some nice line work that makes this as artistic as it is even its black and white theme is just as fantastic.

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you should ad a fancy black and white frame on these b/w pieces

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