XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Maka Alban in Real Life/ Soul eater in Real Life]

Very nice

And here was something very nice the hair is fine but yes she does need more expression on her face more emotion and the background could use a prop or two like some birds a sun or something but other then that this was a very nice piece of work and I really liked it so keep making great charchter portraits

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some background props and more emotion in the girl's face

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[City Street Under Attack - Background Art]

You do amazing work

You do some amazing work the background detail of broken pillars bent lights very nicely done I think a blinking light and sparkles here and there would be a nice touch on this but I understand it's for an ongoing project but regardless very nice work on this one the shading and details are very well done very visually beautiful and very nice all the way around

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some small effects but maybe not

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[Two Little 'Mons]

Very nice job

And so this was a nice job I like the characters the black and white one was unique and could have those eyes glow more would accent off the black and white even more but both are great charchter designs

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some glowing eyes

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[Three Little 'Mons]

Nice charchters

So you have some multiple characters all cute in there own way and nicley done in detail and beautiful color themes that pariakete could use some shine on his nose just for that extra touch but besides that this was cool

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some shine

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[I Miss You - Sketch]

Perfect moment

This was the perfect moment to have some color and I think a way of improvment is to have just the flower colored with some nice fresh colors on it and leave the rest of the design black and white but you have a nice drawing and or sketch

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Nice drawing have just the flower colored

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[Roseragon? Dragrose? A rose by any other name would still be as Deadly.]

Amazing

And this was very amazing I have to say the level of your detail and shading is just amazing stuff each little line just jumps out at you now this one needs some reds in there for sure anyways nice work indeed hope you keep making great designs like this

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
For sure color this up

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[Ew]

Very nice

I have to say this was very good I love the detail you put into your character work here and the shades I like the long hair I wouldn't mind more shine on her hair more at the bottom but honestly this is pretty good and maybe even adding some background to it but anyways very nice work here and I look forward to even more

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some more detail in the background and maybe some shine on her hair

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[J's on my feet]

Nice sketch

So this was a nice sketch here love the lighting and or the paper that gives it that color and I do think you could use some more shadow under her feet to represent that shadow even more other then that this was pretty good stuff I like the art structure here of your charchter it's nice work anyways keep at it

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some more shade under her

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[Leftover Paint]

Wow very nice

Love the paint on this and have to say the skull came out well over the dark background now if there was a way to ad some type of glow to the eyes or something but overall this is a very nice piece indeed

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe some glow to the eye sockets

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[Pumpkin Bomb]

Simple and creative

And this one was very creative now this is one of those that really need some color added to it it's a bit bland with out it but your shades and drawing are pretty nice just ad some color but overall very nice work you have here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some color of course

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