XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[MechaNakedZilla]

Cool

Well here we have another good drawing or sketch as some may call it but I found it to be good work even with none or little color to it, its really good stuff, now adding color later wouldnt hurt either, but I like your drawing and design here with all of its black and white style.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some added detail in the backrounds.

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[The End of the War to End All Wars]

Beautiful

And this was a beautiful piece you have here the "ROSE" growing full of life while the black and white backround is not so alive but you did good, more water points would have been nice and more glare from those water points, you have done some amazing work here.

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more water points would have been nice and more glare from those water points

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[Basquiat]

Love the color

So with this one you have some really amazing use of color here and just all the different colors really jumped out at me more with this one then anything else, maybe adding some white specs of shine on the crown he has to represent some shine and sparkle would be a plus, I love your creative use of color.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
adding some white specs of shine on the crown he has to represent some shine and sparkle would be a plus

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DocLew responds:

Not to be rude or anything but you're leaving all these reviews to 'help me improve my works' but they're just your personal opinions, not real constructive criticism.
And no, sparkles and shine won't be a plus on Basquiat crown.

[Shoot Nick Shoot]

Different version

so this one was a different version of the "SPRITE" you have a nice sprite and this one shooting I still think some added sparkle on this piece and your other one would be a small yet good addition, overall this was pretty good stuff and nice animation on the sprite.

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I still think some added sparkle on this piece and your other one would be a small yet good addition

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[Artpile 1]

Nice style

The backround seemed too dark in grey maybe something lighter, So here was a nice style and you dont see too much like this anymore but I do have to say that this was nice and refreshing, I do enjoy this black and white sketch here while it doesnt have much or no color at all its still a nice piece and it could have some added color but also its just pretty good on its own.

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The backround seemed too dark in grey maybe something lighter

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[Disgusting]

Nice

Nice work so you have some nice work here, the "REFLECTION" comes off well the red eye was nice I think more glare from the eye would be a nice touch here, but thats my imput on it all, you have some nice character work here and a nice portrait even so nice job.

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I think more glare from the eye would be a nice touch here

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RannitX responds:

Thanks!

[That Red Pyramid Thing...]

Nice painting

So you have some nice paintings here, this one really stood out the "GRUDGY" look was pretty nice the idea of the red pyrimed guy behind the gate was a nice dark feel here and you presented that well and I see no need for any changes on this piece it was pretty fantastic.

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I see no need for any changes on this piece

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[Liryo]

Very nice

So here you have presented a full on piece with lots of nice detail love the color "TONE" on this one, and I dont feel like any changes need to be done on this one this was fantastic all the way through, And so here we have a fine piece of art with some good ideas some nice detail and some interesting styles of art, this is something I could get use to, so ill have to checkout your work more better, but for now this was pretty decent. so keep making stuff. A great piece you have created here for us, its not perfect but its very close and you showed us some nice talent not a lot can do.

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I dont feel like any changes need to be done on this one this was fantastic all the way through

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[Run Nick Run]

Sprite at its best

Nice animation on the sprite you should ad some sparkle to this piece, So this is some nifty sprite work you have here some nice little "DETAIL" here and there and you make it shine with a great visual, sprites have always made art and games go around even movies so keep making great sprite stuff alive, and I look forward to even more.

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Nice animation on the sprite you should ad some sparkle to this piece

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[Big Face]

Intense

the shades on this were pretty intense, I couldnt find anything to ad or take away this was well done, So nice design here on this sketch allthough no or little color I could see you adding some color to bring out the design more but overall this was just pretty well done work you have here, hope to see much more from you and great sketch you have here its a fantastic piece.

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I couldnt find anything to ad or take away this was well done

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