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[Inktober #20 Monsters Ink]

Demonic

Wow this was amazing work, this one right here had some really nice lines. So far here you have really formed some detail in each character or demonic character and I think some extra shades here and even doing a color version would be nice to try out next time around, maybe with blood and hell fire, because the simple all black can not help me focus on one aspect and draws my eye all over the place, but anyways nice job, nice design as always.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some color inside the character and hell fire would be nice

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Cyberdevil responds:

I think you'll find your feedback fully implemented a few Inktober pieces over. ;) Thanks.

[Father and Son]

Very nice

So this was pretty cool a couple of great characters here and almost seems like they are in some sort of action scene here, the "COLORS" are pretty deep too a dark red with purple hair just looks fresh and sharp so nice job on this piece indeed, the backround seems like it could use some small added detail maybe some lighted windows on the city buildings or something along them lines, besides that this was pretty cool.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
the backround seems like it could use some small added detail maybe some lighted windows on the city buildings or something along them line

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[X]

Nice

So this was a nice piece here and a good form on the mega man character, the shine is good I think adding more shine would be a plus, also adding more backround would also be a nifty idea to ad onto this, but regardless this was pretty amazing hope to see more soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I think adding more shine would be a plus, also adding more backround would also be a nifty idea to ad onto this

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[Locked Out]

Very cool comic series

haha great joke here You so you have a very cool comic series here I hope to be as inspired as you are because these are pretty impressive and have enjoyed them since the start allthough I love color and detail and wish you had more of that but what you do have is pretty impressive, so keep the good work up.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
You should make these somewhat longer.

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[Farm]

Very nice comic

The potato man entries seem so full adventure And nice work as always another great piece of the bigger puzzle with this one, I would love to see you introduce more characters like some extra side ones and maybe one or two more main ones like even a female that will really change it up a bit anyways nice work, anyways untill next time.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I do wish these were longer

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[Inktober #23 Back Blaze]

LOL

well this one here, this one made me laugh and I really did enjoy the simple stick man's expressions of being on fire and "RUNNING". I think the flames themselves were good and the use of the text under it just made it more hilarious. It felt more like a comic panel and that was nice to me. I do find a border would have been more helpful and maybe would have brought this all together in a more comic way. I do think you give solid advice tho, back up your back ups.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some border around this would be nice and make it more like a comic

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Cyberdevil responds:

I can actually see that black panel-like border around this one. :) Would be perfect. Glad you got a laugh out of it too (and if you haven't heard of the company they're very much recommended)!

[Inktober 2018 - No. EX - Chris]

Very nice

So this was pretty good the black and white drawing itself is pretty amazing I would love some color but that might not be the intent, So I would like to say that I found this pretty interesting it was differant and has a unique feel to it, so I was glad to have found this, I like your style here its a good piece, and kinda jumped out at me. but thats what made this all the more interesting. And now as I come to the end here, I must say it was a pleasure checking this one out, a unique and interesting design you have here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I would love some color but that might not be the intent

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[Sweater]

Here we are again

And boy do your comic submissions just pop up in the most random places, but anyways this particular episode had a lot to cover and had some excitemeant within it and made me chuckle a few times and for that it gets my respect, so very nice work here, keep it going strong its all good stuff.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
No changes on this it was a fantastic entry.

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[Snakes & Ladders]

Awsome

Wow really love what you did here with color and backround detail, Another awsome piece these must take you really long to produce or too easy but regardless you always bring some good adventure to the table and I have come to enjoy your work very much infact these adventures in this comic series grew on me as I was not always a fan, but am now.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
make more great entries like this one.

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[Smoking]

I really like this

This was really cool I really like the character here kind of out of a scary and creepy movie you have here and I love the shading and deep texture so very welldone and love the detail you have added here, even your backround work was really impressive, so keep up the great characters.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I thaught it was fine wouldnt mind more darker backround and feel about it.

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