XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[teddy bear]

Simple and fun

This was pretty simple but it was fun and works well i think you can ad a background that can match out with the simplistic of it like a pattern or a design that is simple in color but anyways I like your work and I will check out more of your work here in the near future new or old all is good by me anyways untill next time

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some pattern or design in background

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[4 days to go for Xmas!]

Wow

Lol well this was another cute one and nice wow text I do think as a form of improvement that the wow text should be very big and in a more fancy font that would be a nice improvment on this nice art piece

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A much bigger text and fancier don't

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[Your Xmas Present!]

Nice

This was cool I think that back wall could have more of a wall if it was brick but in same blue as you like then could match up well with that theme but other then that this was a good art piece and nice work keep it up

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make the wall more brick

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[Early Xmas!]

Lol cute

This was cute I like the background it's not too much and not too little you should do your other pieces like that but anyways once again a nice piece of art here fresh charchters and just looks good overall and nice theme here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Not a thing on this one

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[It's never too late to give up]

Amusing

Well this one not sure what to think but that background needs more but it's a cute saying with a nice phrase good fresh charchter and just amusing and funny so keep up the good work and I look forward to more like this

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Something in the background like a pattern or design

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[Summer Nurse]

Very cute

And this one is another cute girl with a good structure she has cuteness written all over her the line work is smooth even the background is nice as I said in the other one I think you can have some bright stars and dim ones and some shiny ones and even glowing ones but those are just a few ideas that would be nice to see

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some star effects with glowing and shine ideas

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[Wallpaper sharing!]

Nice and simple

So this was nice and simple but it's also bland in that background now this is one of those I would put a beam of light or sun burst from behind the heads and have it come forward would be a nice filler and nice effect overall

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Ad a sunburst or beam of light from behind heads

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[Vocaloid Usagi]

Nice and soft

So this was a soft piece here I love your charchter here very simple and cute very good structure and the clouds are nice but I think you should have more layers of clouds so that it does have that real effect of a cloudy feel of things but nice clouds regardless anyways good work here I look forward to even more. Fantastic work here today

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More layered clouds more fluffy look

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[Our journey starts here!]

Entertaining

Lol this was funny I like the comic style here and you would really do well with a comic style of sorts here I like the ending and what the bird says lol I think as a form of improvement you could make the border frames thicker just a tad

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Thicker borders frames

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[I'M HIDING FROM......]

Haha cute

Well this one is pretty cute I like the little pun joke at the viewer or me lol love the close up shot too I would like to see a sparkle on his goggles though it's a refreshing look and shows his goggles are shiny but nice work here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some small sparkle on his goggles it's just a small detail that would stand out

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