XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Vocaloid Usagi]

Nice and soft

So this was a soft piece here I love your charchter here very simple and cute very good structure and the clouds are nice but I think you should have more layers of clouds so that it does have that real effect of a cloudy feel of things but nice clouds regardless anyways good work here I look forward to even more. Fantastic work here today

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More layered clouds more fluffy look

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[Our journey starts here!]

Entertaining

Lol this was funny I like the comic style here and you would really do well with a comic style of sorts here I like the ending and what the bird says lol I think as a form of improvement you could make the border frames thicker just a tad

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Thicker borders frames

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[I'M HIDING FROM......]

Haha cute

Well this one is pretty cute I like the little pun joke at the viewer or me lol love the close up shot too I would like to see a sparkle on his goggles though it's a refreshing look and shows his goggles are shiny but nice work here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some small sparkle on his goggles it's just a small detail that would stand out

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[YES, WEEKEND IS COMING!]

Nice as always

And I love that little bird I could really see you making a comic out of this whole thing and making it work well you have the characters and the flavor of style this particular piece could be enhanced with a beam of light behind them

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Since it is he weekend have a beam of light behind them shine on them from behind

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[Snuggle it Out]

Cute girl

So this was cute I like this cute girl she is sleeping peacefully those stars in the background are nice I would have the stars hlow and shine some brighter then the others that an idea for you to think about the character here was really good and I enjoyed it very much so that's my review for this lovely piece of artwork

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some stars can hlow and be brighter not all just some here and there

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[Who love doughnut as much as i do?]

Doughnuts

So this was a nice random one now for some improvment on this one I think you can have the doughnuts glow on the bottom would be a nice little effect that can enhace the quality of this art piece just an idea to think on

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Have the doughnuts glow

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[Don't judge me!]

As always cute

And here was another cute one these characters say the darkest things and I have to say that the don't used is basic I could see you using a more fancy font for more quality but that's just an opinion and idea to try

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some better don't in this one

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[Ass Cheeks & Pantsuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu]

Now this was cute

This was really cute the character is really nice great form and love that color tone and you used alot of it Wich made for some nice visuals and some very nice details in the background I honestly don't think you need any changes on this at all I like it very much so no improvement needed on this one but as that's said keep up the fine work that you do

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
No changes this is already a fantastic piece of art

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JaviJavi responds:

DUDE haha thanks for all the love man god damn X^D i just read everyone of you critiques, thanks for even taking the time out to do that. Theres always things that i could improve on thats no doubt, so thanks for pointing those issues out for me ! again thanks so much for doing that, its always good to get an objective view about my art !

[Beth]

Very nice

I actually love this it is very red and pinkish but I'm sure that's your intent on things I do think you could use some type of border or frame on the edges to give it that portrait feel even a nice wood frame would be very fitting with this piece your art style is pretty fantastic and I love this whole art piece so I will say is that this was a nice piece of work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some frames or borders

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[idontknow2]

This was cute

So it's nice to see you draw about your boyfriend I like the two versions here and I would love to see you do more your line work could be polished and some added color would be a plus but I like it very much just needs some polish

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More polish needed more smoother line work and some color would be nice

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Rgessimai responds:

Thanks for ur comments