XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[dawn chorus (2017)]

This was cute

This was a cute charchter and I like the color added I do think you could do some shading in the character that would really improve on this as a whole and ad some background work as well maybe a scenery of some type

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Ad a backdrop in the background

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[REALM4]

Interesting

Well first of all this sketch is interesting and is also entertaining I do think you should refined and polish your drawings more take more time with them and ad some color as well as some background work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some color more time on your drawings more polish and some background detail

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[my moms art]

Well notbad

Well I have to say that is notbad at all you I mean your mom has some skill and it's notbad of a drawing wouldn't mind some color though but it's still pretty good if you ask me just add a tad bit of color and maybe fill in bland spots

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some color and some bland fill ins

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[NG Phone]

Very nice

So I like this and like the idea of it all but seems to be missing a camera hole or something there not sure if that was intentional but as for the phone itself it's pretty slick looking love the colors on it nuce work and looks like a real case and phone you show off some nice detail here and I was pleased with it

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Ad a camera spot

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[Cloud FFVII]

Some really nice work

Now this was really good the hair is nice and love the fine details in the hair his emotion on the face I could see him having more but it was still ok and I wouldn't mind some type of design or pattern in the background but have to say this was pretty solid work very talented and love you art style here maybe even adding some borders or frames like a picture but anyways nice job

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some frames or borders for edges

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[ME WHEN I AM STARVING]

Nice animation on this one

And this was another cute one and I like the drooling animation on this one you should have a puddle of drool though that would be a nice effect but anyways this was great stuff you have here great little character you have here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Ad more drool like a drool puddle

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[Wallpaper]

Now this was cute

I like this and love what you do with these characters always putting them in some funny moments and they are very fresh looking some background scene backdrop is needed but it is what it is so nice job there

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some background backdrop scene

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[what day is it today?]

Nice

This was cool I think you could do more with the don't and adding more splashy effects behind it like a big yellow star then the don't but for what it is this is a nice piece of art here and hope you keep up the funny moments here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More spalshy effects as mentioned

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[Halloween Wallpaper]

This was cute

Now this was pretty cute with the Halloween theme you have here but something should be done about the background like some spooky ghosts and such maybe some trees or houses that kind of stuff

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some background spooky scene stuff

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[Rosalina]

Really lovely

Wow first of all this was a great charchter portrait anyways but I can see you adding some shine on her crown and even the gems from it it's a beautiful focus point to have some more shine and sparkle come off of and that's just an idea to throw your way but anyways great line work nice charchter here hope you keep making great stuff like this

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some shine and sparkle off the crown and gems

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