XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[CB -Scandalicious-]

Love the red

I love the red here love the emotion the girl has as she lifts off her top and I also like the white borders but instead of the borders maybe you should make them a deep dark burgandy color so to accent the reds more that would be something really nice but anyways love the character here great structure

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Deeper red borders

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[inktober day 2]

Love it

Love the two tone color here love the pose you have her doing and live the gun I think you can ad some shine to the gun and her hair and maybe even adding some background too but overall this was a nice piece of art you have here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some shine on gun and hair and some background would be nice

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[Kitty Kat]

This was awesome

You have a good style here the cat looks very real very realistic the eyes are nice all though I think you should ad some glare on the eyes as it's pretty nice addition that would be a nice touch but now I'll end here with that note

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some glare in the cats eye

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[Inktober, day 3 - Tony Tony Chopper]

Very nice

This was a very nice piece here there's some good detail in this one and love the black and white style here some added color wouldn't hurt but I do like the style so nice work here hope to see more from you and more of this fancy style

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some added color

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[Eira Dakimakura]

Very cute

So this was very cute the colors are fantastic her hair was even better you do some nice hair design her breasts are big but I think you can ad some shine on them and I think that's all it needs but a good charchter here with an alurring look and pose love the hair though so nice job on her and keep up the awesome work on your character detail

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some shine on her front side

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[Ring Ma'am 2]

Really colorfull piece

You have a wonderfully colerd piece here and I honestly can't find anything to improve on this one as it's really brilliant and a fun piece to review the colors just work well with the background as well the background is pretty solid too and allows for all the color to shine if I did suggest anything it would be to brighten up the colors just a bit

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Brighter colors

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[Sushi cat2 fanart]

This was cute

You have a cute piece here it's fresh it's colorfull and is well detailed I think some of the characters could have more shine to them but other then that this was a nice and fresh piece of art so just adding some shine would be a plus for something like this anyways nice job indeed so keep up the good work that you have prepared for us here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some shine on the characters would be very nice

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[Orc Woman]

Love this

First of all the detail is so vibrant on this as soon as I saw this I added it as a fave love the color love the expression on her face and the hair and skin tone all came out so well I think the only thing to improve on this would be to put some shine and sparkle on her eye that would be a nice improvment just an idea though but overall this was pretty nifty and a nice art piece indeed

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some shine on her eye even a sparkle

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Jomoko responds:

Hey thanks! There are some things I'd change and yeah, the eyes could use a bit of sparkle in them.

[Plant]

Really well done

This was a really well done piece of artwork the colors are great the meshed textuture is very nice indeed I like the lighting effect comming from the window it lights up things greatly but I think it should be a little bit brighter but besides that this was a top notch piece of art and I really enjoyed the amount of detail you pushed on this great art piece

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some more light on the sun comming in

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[Malroy]

Nice work

I like this I like that you used paper and pens to make this the detail is there I think you can ad some color though with some colored pens and the background could use some type of backdrop and the sword could use a sparkle or two on the tip just an idea here that could help and improve on this great piece of art of yours anyways untill the next piece keep up the nice drawings

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some small details here and there

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