XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[the white rabbit]

Very detailed

This was very nice very detailed drawing sketch here I think you adding some color on this one would be a beautiful change even just some light color here and there would be a plus but you have a nice drawing here also the upper right area could use something

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some fill in spots and some color

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[Wrappy bird]

I love it

You did very well on the eagle the detail is very nice work very good shades in there as well and it was a nice tattoo now I wouldn't mind a tad bit of color I have a tattoo full of color but with yours maybe just the eyes or maybe even skateboard but regardless this was a nice creation and it's with you forever so that has to have some deep meaning anyways nice work you should show us some more of your work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some small color but it's also a creative style of it's own

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HumBurt responds:

thanks a million bud! will do!

[Tsuyu Asui]

Very nice

This here was a great piece of art and great charchter structure I think you should put some muscle tones in her face though just a little but really besides all that the muscle tones are really good and you did a fantastic job on them love the shine too and notbad on a base background but very nice work here I really liked what you did here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some muscle tones in face if she works out like that

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[JJ]

Very nice design

This was a very good design I love the black and white style and you showed some good pattern here with a nice detail pattern. I wouldn't mind you having a two tone color theme or even a focus point of color and have it spread out somewhat but all in all your talent shows on this one and I was very impressed with this unique design here and hope you keep up this good work I like your style so make more soon

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A mix of color would be nice

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JME10135 responds:

Thank you! ^^

[Coffee Love]

Very nice work here

I like this and like the idea of it but it's lacking I think the outter backround after the heart there should be some faint background designs and or pattern like a faint grey of some sort but anyways this was still a good piece of art

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some background work or small detail

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[Golden Desert]

Love this

This was a great background I like the redness of it love the palm tree only thing I think you could really change on this would be a sun in the background so that you can really show that sun glaring on the sand and tree maybe even a mirage pond

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I suggested a few ideas that can improve on this one

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[Eye Drawing]

Very nice detail

You have as they say an eye for detail lol no but really a nice eye here the skin tones we're good the purple eye with a glare was just perfect maybe adding more glare and sparkle would be cool but other then that so nice job

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More glare and even sparkle on the eye

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[Such a Night]

Very artistic

Now here was some very artistic art stuff you really captured the moment here but all the colors and brushes here and there was very good it really brings out some artistic style and you really show the detail I wouldn't mind seeing some frames on this then it would really be like an art piece on display or something like that anyways very good style here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some frames and that's about it

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[Greed-Ling]

You have some nice ideas

So with this one you have some nice ideas and good visuals a bit dark and I like that I think you can improve onto this one more like that sparkle in the eye can shine even more so very nice work and hope to see more of it sometime soon

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More glow and shine on the star on the eye

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[Ed and Al]

Nice art

And here you have some really nice art here a very detailed piece I think this one can use a few additional effects like a background for one the eyes can glow more some shine on the armor but those would be a plus in all those points

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some few additions on this to improve on

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