XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[You Are Already Dead]

Nice

So this was very cool I like the in your face attitude here the goggles could have a shine on there goggles glass maybe even a sparkle and some background work would be cool too but anyways this is a nice charchter here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some background work and some shine on the goggles

~X~

[Monday.......]

Another fine piece

And I have to say your character here is fresh and simple but always seems to be in a situation again maybe some background work some scene back there would be better but still a nice charchter you have here but still nice work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Once again some background or design or pattern

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[SEA-rious Journey]

This was cute

This was a cute piece I like how this one was more basic style art and not so 3d but you have a nice charchter here I do think the background could use some work though some scene or just something back there

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some background work would be nice

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[Angry cute girl]

Beautiful

This was a beautiful piece love everything about this and honestly I didn't see anything that really needs fixing or changing as this was well done not perfect but almost there but it was very good charchter design

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well done no changes needed

~X~

[Portrait of a girl]

Wow

Wow I must say you are beautiful at this portrait stuff the color the texture the lines the background work just so detailed I do think you could ad a nice frame on this or border to give it that portrait feel but every thing else on this is pretty solid and a great quality bof art here so keep up the great art style I look forward to even more because this was fantastic

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some borders or frames on the edges

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[Opal from Steven Universe]

Lovely charchter

You have some really good skill and the detail and textuture really shows in the deepness of every little detail point and for that I give you a pat on the back she does look a little stiff though maybe it's the expression in her face also some props like a bird or flock of birds would be nice in the background but anyways nice art piece here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some props in the background and more emotion in her face

~X~

[SEA-rious Journey]

Cute

Lol well I found this one to be really cute him not worrying about anything all though alot is going on this one is pretty funny and cute I don't think anything needs to be changed on this it's a perfect visual so nice work here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
No changes on this beautiful piece

~X~

[SEA-rious Journey]

Nice charchter

So this was very fresh looking I really like the fresh look here I think he could use much more shine and sparkle on a few points like his beak his medal and his captains hat just some ideas I'm throwing out at you

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some shine points

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[SEA-rious Journey]

Very good reaction

So with this one there was some good reaction and I could see some more effort like have spit come from his mouth and even more shine on the goggles those are just a few ideas to improve on anyways nice work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A few improvments like spit from his mouth as it seems like he's yelling and ad more shine on his goggles

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[Maka Alban in Real Life/ Soul eater in Real Life]

Very nice

And here was something very nice the hair is fine but yes she does need more expression on her face more emotion and the background could use a prop or two like some birds a sun or something but other then that this was a very nice piece of work and I really liked it so keep making great charchter portraits

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some background props and more emotion in the girl's face

~X~