XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Shantae and the Space Pirate's Curse]

Nice

So this was cool I love the dragon here this was a very nice "PIECE" I do think some added effects like glowing eyes maybe a more textured border and such would be a nice touch up, This one has Flair and sofar this is a good start and you made it stand out and some areas didnt so much. but for sure you added Stylization and you have Captured that Flair in this piece. So I am honored in this style of work here and I will admitt, I found your artwork by accident but I must say I became an instant fan of your work and your style, but anyways keep up this style its top notch stuff, And I will continue to look for your future stuff.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I do think some added effects like glowing eyes maybe a more textured border and such would be a nice touch up

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[Birdblob Pile]

This was cute

I like all the little birds here made for a nice and "VISUAL" point nice expressions on them all, the white outter border piece was also a nice touch, I would suggest as an opinion from my point of view to see some texture in the white outter border or maybe some small birds in there or nothing at all as it is a nice piece as is, anyways nice work here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I would suggest as an opinion from my point of view to see some texture in the white outter border or maybe some small birds in there or nothing at all as it is a nice piece as is

~X~

[Trico from the Last Guardian]

Really nice

So this was a nice "CHARACTER" sitting up and looking down on everyone a nice "POSE" the hanging guy was nice too the backround was pretty decent but maybe some added lighting effect back there it would bring on a nice effect, but this was some really nice work here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
the backround was pretty decent but maybe some added lighting effect back there it would bring on a nice effect

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[Adoptable #8]

Wow amazing

And wow some amazing work you have here the detail of the dress alone is just so amazing it's detail like that that just jumps out at me and you presented it well with some nice visual points here now I'm always saying ad something more to your background and you have done just that it's a subtle background but still very impressive and I enjoyed it very much keep it up

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I don't think this piece needs changes it's solid and artistic

~X~

holikrep responds:

Oh gosh I feel so bad i've been away I only just now saw all ( or most, still reading!) of your kind comments/critiques/suggestions ; u ; I can't tell ya how much I appreciate you going through and taking the time to do that <3 it means a lot to read them all so thank you very much! You're too kind~

[Summoner/Witch Adopt]

Adorable

So here you are with some more cute and adorable work here the pink stocking fit well with the dress design here and made her even more cute you have some nice detail in the clothing and a good fashion sense so that was a plus and a good charchter overall I still think some added texture and colored design would be a plus on things for the background just to reflect the main character more

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As mentioned just above

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[Polymorph Witch Adopt]

This was nice

Kind of a nifty design here you have some nice art detail here and some good visual points here I really like the work though seems like the background color could be somewhat different then just the white maybe even some texture with some color to balance off the main focus of things but overall you have impressed me here and these are some nice details you have here and I was pretty impressed with your detailed work here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some textured background

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[Ych - Taorusama]

Nice

So this was a cute one and the water she's popping out of is pretty nice and makes for a good background now that water comming out of her mouth looks odd but is good still

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Nothing really this was solid work

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[Adoptable #4 - Open 25$]

Cute

So this was cute and you presented the prices just right and nothing wrong with making some money on the side but as for the art it was pretty good love the subtle design the linework was amazing as always you have great talent and it shows well so keep that aspect of things going strong but I do enjoy the work you present here with such a nice style and element so nice as always

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make more background

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[[C] Lalafell#2]

Amazing

Now this was pretty amazing here now this is what I was talking about when some pattern or design could be in the background besides some scene but you presented a subtle design or pattern and made it come alive the character itself is pretty amazing and was pretty intense and with the pattern it just all looks so much better so nice job on the character and most of all the design in the background

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
No changes as you have outdone yourself here

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[[C] Lalafell]

Cool

So here was another unique piece by you I love how you presented it with the character looking like on a glass or something in that aspect of things I think you could ad some glass reflection streaks to make it seem like there is some glass there but the character work is pretty amazing some very nice detail and great expression of course anyways nice job here keep it up

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make a glass panel

~X~