XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[DELTARUNE]

Very colorful

So this was very well "COLORED" I love how the vibrant just jumps out at you with this one, I think some more fancier borders or frames would reflect more focus on the main piece, First of all this was a nice piece, I always get pleasure from these types of artwork, and its always a nice blessing finding these types from the art portal. Well I hope you keep making stuff like this as it was pretty nice, and its nice to see stuff like this come thru the portal, anyways keep up the great work. because you have some nice talent and would love to see much more of it grace our paths.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I think some more fancier borders or frames would reflect more focus on the main piece

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[Chameleon assassin]

Very detailed

So this was something "WELL-DETAILED" here and love the darkness and the moon just above my suggestion might be to ad more lighting beating down on the trees and character, Something like this goes from a simple idea into a complex design, and thats what you came up with it really just jumped out at me and I am glad I had a chance to see this. So here you have a unique style as I have mentioned, and I will look for more stuff from you soon especially if its like this stuff you have here now. But I will expand on this just a tad, and say this was a pleasure to review and really enjoyed your efforts and ideas here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
my suggestion might be to ad more lighting beating down on the trees and character

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[Kantai Collection - Iowa]

Really nice work

so this was some really "NICE-WORK" and its america themed so that was cool lol, I normally would suggest some added backround detail on these types but this one was ok as is, so nice job, These types of art styles are always my favorites because they bring something else to the table rather then the same ole same stuff that people randomly make. Infact I would even call this a bit on the Symbolic side And my Overview is it was Appropriately done pretty well you gave it style a unique style at that and you kept going so nice work on this one for sure. But untill next time keep up the solid work.

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I normally would suggest some added backround detail on these types but this one was ok as is, so nice job

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[Swimming dragon]

Cute

so this was pretty "CUTE" and even "ADORBLE" I love the character design here the bubbles were a nice touch I even think you could have took it one step farther and ad some sparkles on the bubbles, but besides all that this was a nice character design here really nice work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
the bubbles were a nice touch I even think you could have took it one step farther and ad some sparkles on the bubbles

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[Parappa n Lammy]

Cool combo

Great character "COMBO" here and I am loving the cartoony feel with colors even that yellow guitar seems to mesh in the yellow backround maybe some added texture in the backround to offset that, but overall this was a nifty idea here some really nice characters and poses.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
that yellow guitar seems to mesh in the yellow backround maybe some added texture in the backround to offset that

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[Purpose]

Really nice

So this was some nice "WORK" I love all the details in this piece, seems like some added shine and even sparkle could have been pushed on some those detailed points, but a really good art piece here and shows off a sort of story even like she is on a mission.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
seems like some added shine and even sparkle could have been pushed on some those detailed points

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BoyPorcelain responds:

Thank you!

I'm glad to see the idea came through, i will keep that in mind next time i use light like that.. If you have the time i have more art pieces that could do with some crit. Would love whatever feedback there is! :)

[Ralsei]

Wow nice

So this was really cool a great work of art and beautifull character detail, that grid in the backround seems as if you could have made the purple lines glow more, I always enjoy seeing what the art portal has to offer, and it always seems to keep me interested and comming back, so this was a pleasent joy to see. It kind of reaches out and grabs at you in away as do special art pieces and this one just kind of pulls you in with a unique style and well detailed details, I like your style here, so keep at this and keep making these kinds of art pieces they are nifty.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
that grid in the backround seems as if you could have made the purple lines glow more

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[Sheery and Greg]

Awsome

I am loving the use of "COLOR" here on this one, the animation of this piece was "FANTASTIC" seems like its missing more splash from the behind the character, Theres always Something different to see in the art portal but thats what I love about it, and the entry you have here is no different, its different and unique in its own ways and brings a different style to the table. Now with me ending this review in just a bit I do want to say it was a pleasure checking this piece of out as it kept me interested and wanting more.So keep up the fantastic style here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
seems like its missing more splash from the behind the character

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KeithGarces responds:

I'm definitely going to take these into consideration. Thank you <3

[Out of Mana - kit]

Really cool

So there is some action in this it being some kind of robot I would love to see more shine and sparkle on this one, And now for the Extended portion of the review, You have some nice Polished elements in this piece, These kinds of entries reall move leaps and bounds with me because it brings out a lot of creativity especially with this pice that speaks volumes. I like the Blend of style and uniqueness you bring, And so with this piece The fires of creativity burning within another inspiring piece, Some real work of art piecing everything together like you have here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
this it being some kind of robot I would love to see more shine and sparkle on this one

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[bb design redux]

This was cute

A cute and "ADORBLE" piece you have created here I like the character and the board I do think some added shine on the board maybe even some sparkle too, and you should ad something to the backround maybe an ocean with waves to kind of show off the world she is headed to or comes from, this was a nice art piece.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
some added shine on the board maybe even some sparkle too, and you should ad something to the backround maybe an ocean with waves to kind of show off the world she is headed to or comes from

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