XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Conan The Snowman]

Cute

Ok this one was very original and cute because I've never really seen a snowman with glasses before. I mean why did you name him Conan too? I like the name but it doesn't work with the glasses to me. He should have a more geek name like Kevin. I am not sure but overall the piece was nice and you captured that cartoon snowman look. I like the snow and effects around him and the blue eyes were a nice touch. You almost gave him a sort of human face and expression. Overall I liked this one.

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nothing to change

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Cyberdevil responds:

I guess you haven't read Detective Conan huh. :) Definitely recommended if you're into manga/detective fiction/any comics in general. Glad you liked this one, background and all!

[Akali KDA]

Love the neon

I think the "ANIMATION" was really nice more neon would be a nice touch too, Well its something different and I like what you have here, it seems to have something of a theme a little anyways, there was some nifty things I have not seen done before, so glad you put in some effort to make things different. So I do look forward to new stuff you have. Glad I found this creative and nice piece of artwork here well rounded So this was a great outcome if you ask me and it was a pleasent piece.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
more neon would be a nice touch too

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[Desert Horse close-up]

Beautiful

So this was beautifull you have some nice "TALENT" on art here and this is a prime example of it, Now I do think some extra backround would be nice like a tree maybe a small lake in the desert and it could be blured to show the motion of thr horse running, anyways nice work here.

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I do think some extra backround would be nice like a tree maybe a small lake in the desert and it could be blured to show the motion of thr horse running

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[Merry Early]

A cute comic

So this was a rather "CUTE" comic, you should think about making these longer maybe a few more frames, and maybe even making a long running web comic of some sort, this was a good joke well executed and the artwork was notbad either I enjoyed this piece here.

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you should think about making these longer maybe a few more frames, and maybe even making a long running web comic of some sort

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BigEyedBen responds:

A fair analysis.

For one thing, I enjoy drawing like I did when I was 9 years old. I'd like to believe I could make more detailed artwork, but my cartoon character was invented when I was a child.

I usually choose the amount of frames based off the story I want to tell with them. I've occasionally, in the past, made some strips without dialogue to kind of emphasize the point that there's an awkward pause between scenes. If you wish to elaborate on their length I am more than willing to hear your input.

What sort of web comic would you prefer to see? A running series based on random events, or something along a plotline that takes place along a series of story-based events? I've had plans for both.

[Dragonair + Rapidash = Rapidair]

Beautiful

A really beautiful piece you have some amazing "TEXTURE" in this and the combo of the two mixes Dragonair + Rapidash = Rapidair was a really nice idea, You should make a series of art with more combos like this, but anyways nice work here and some beautiful artwork.

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You should make a series of art with more combos like this

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[Bug Family]

Color

I really love your use of "COLOR" love the vibrant colors here on this one and all the bugs is cool, I could see you making some sort of web comic with the great use of color you do, anyways nice design here and it was artistic with great color make more soon.

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I could see you making some sort of web comic with the great use of color you do

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[Mat Stubs]

Wow

Wow this was pretty "INTENSE" I like the "SHATTER" effect in this one love the green eyes too I think you could ad even a little more glow to the eyes too might give it a more intense view point, the face itself was pretty good a good art piece you have here.

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I think you could ad even a little more glow to the eyes too might give it a more intense view point

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[Fighter Uno 💀]

Really great character

So you have a really great "CHARACTER" here I love that "SWORD" too I think you should ad some extra shine and even some sparkle on the sword, but besides that you have a nice design here and nice details to go along with a brilliant character so keep up the amazing work.

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you should ad some extra shine and even some sparkle on the sword

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[Plasma]

Really nice

So this was nice You have some nice "NEON" and "GLOW" effects in this and in that case I think you could ad a nifty neon or glowing border and or frame to reflect all the glow points of this piece, you have a nice character and it really stands out well so nice job on this piece.

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I think you could ad a nifty neon or glowing border and or frame to reflect all the glow points of this piece

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gatekid3 responds:

Thanks.
It has a neon look to it, but I feel like a neon frame would just muddy things a bit. Not only would it take away from the face in my opinion, a neon boarder just goes against what i was going for i think. Like i said, it was one of those plasma ball things. Maybe darker boarders or background would help emphasize the light more, but I think light boarders wouldn't look particularly nice.