XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[SwimSuit Twintelle]

Nice

This was cool kind of like an advertisement but not sure I wouldn't mind more shine on her legs though just a bit more but honestly this was pretty good stuff and hope to see more of your work I love the detail in this one keep it up

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some more shine on her legs

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[Blake Belladonna Wallpaper]

Very fresh

Love this style love the fresh colors and very smooth lines you really bring out the sharpness in this whole piece I like your work and keep it up if I may suggest anything maybe the lighting in the back could be better or more of it

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More lighting or brighter from back end

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[Dancing Rotom]

Very cute

Now I must say this was not just cute but it was pretty amazing love the little animation as well and I honestly can't think of any changes I would suggest if anything maybe some shine here or there but not by much you have a very good piece of pixle art here and it has animation so that's a big plus anyways keep up the brilliant picked mation

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some possible shine

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[[C] Anad]

Wow

Now this was a very intense piece of art here and has some nice props in the art piece like the snake and the crown and I think you can ad a sparkle to the crown and some shine on the snake skin just an idea that could really improve on this great art piece very nice colors used and nice smooth line work so I will end this with a thank you for all that you do

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As suggested some shine on the snake skin and some sparkle on the girls crown

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holikrep responds:

I wish I had you around while I was drawing this! Now that you've mentioned it i'm sad I didn't include some sparkles ;u; especially since those are usually my favorite things to add~ anything to make it shine/glow! I really appreciate you taking the time to comment and for being so sweet ;u; )/ <3 I enjoy reading these a lot!

[Eimi and Ebony]

Very nice

And I have to say that the lighting effect is really nice you really made the characters glow and shine I think some parts could hlow even more with much more shine and more vibrant then it is now but very nice work you have here and was pleased with the outcome so keep making more like this it's always a pleasure

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Use more of that glow and lighting effect

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[Sketch Collab T Monster]

Love it

So with this one I love the little animation that came with it and that was pretty smooth in it's own right even though it was black and white I thaught it came out well nice drawings that flowed well with the animation I thaught you could have added some color or at least the background and now that this review is over nice job here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some color would have been cool

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Wondermeow responds:

Thanks for the review, but this piece was for the pervious sketch collab. It's suppose to have no colours just black and white, cheers.

[Happy Memorial Day]

Really nice work

So this was some really nice work you have here I thaught it came out very well and the look of his expression and his uniform just so very realistic look I think if anything would Beed to be changed it would be maybe some light beam from behind him to accent some light and shadowing but still this was a pleasure to review and hope you make more

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some lighting and shade effects

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[Potatoman Begins: Page 39]

Notbad at all

Very nice work and I really love the color detail you have added here it really comes alive with it and you put some details here and there that really made it stand out so that was a plus so nice job there as for improvements I think the story could have gone longer the way it ended but still a good and funny story anyways keep up the good comic making

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some more frames for more ending but still I found it entertaining

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[[C] Dennis Sprite]

Very nice

So this was pretty cool love the dress design here I think the lower part of the dress could have more shading but that may just be me i do love your detail on the whole charchter and the whole dress design so nice job the black background I'm not too fond of but it is what it is anyways keep up the good designs

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe a backdrop scene maybe more shading on lower end of dress

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holikrep responds:

Thanks for the kind comment ;u; )/ I appreciate hearing your feedback~ As for the background part I would love to eventually get more into those ;-; )/ I need all the practice~ This was just a character sprite commission though so the background is transparent so the commissioner can use it for their VN ;u; )b clothing shading has always been a struggle but I will try and pay close attention to how I go about it!

[Face of a woman]

Very fine detail

Wow you do some really nice work the hair is some fine detail very nice linework and some really nice detail love the face too but the facial expression seems like she is scared or something and I would suggest making the lips a tad bit more redish just so the whole piece can standout a tad bit more but with all that said it is a beautiful day in and hope you make more like this soon

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More red lips and maybe another time more expression on her face unless that was the intent

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sketchywarior responds:

Thank you, I have not posted in a while so I will make shure to post my new art soon.