XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[SEA-rious Journey]

Very fresh

Now this one was pretty fresh artwork lots of fresh style and look in here love the little details too and the hello text was a nice touch indeed and I don't think there needs to be any changes on anything really as this was pretty impressive and a nice fresh look so nice job on this piece great charchters. Nice amusing text just overall fun piece glad I could review it

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
No changes on a nice fresh piece here

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[Pinup]

Awesome

Well here is another awesome piece you have it's very good you did great in skin tone and texture really came out very nice I like what you did here very good pose and nice background and I do think her face seemed somewhat Flatt maybe some more expression and emotion in the face for a more really effect of the character but good solid stuff here if you do ask me and I enjoyed it very much

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some more expression in the face

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[Ponytail]

Very nice work

You did some very nice work on this one I think you did a fantastic job on her form and yes that ponytail is great the jeans came out perfectly I do think as an idea you could ad some rips in the jeans just small touches like that can really improve on something like this so very nice work sofar but wouldn't hurt for some more little details but as that's all said and done so is this review

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe more little details like a ripped jeans and such

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[Pink & Blue]

Very well done

You have some very well done texture and a great design behind this one it's well done very nice work indeed love the cloud like feel around it. I do think even with that cooud you could still ad some borders or frames on the edges so nice just an idea to think about for improvement but with all that said I don't have much more that can be said about this it's a solid piece of art

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some borders and or frames on the edges

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[7]

Simplistic

So this was simplistic but then it wasn't but I like the shadows here it does seem the back end of the area needs more props like little things here and there maybe some more men in the distance or something that would be kind of neat and it would fill in some of those blank spots or gaps and holes just something you can think about and really go with some ideas there anyways nice designs here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some filling in of some blank areas

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[3]

Some nice pixel art

And well what do we have here with this one it is something nice something different and a little bit pixelated I like that you have a nice idea here and a nice style about this with some cool shapes and colors really nice idea here that you made work pretty well with all the simplistic to completely nice visuals so really nice work here I can see you adding some shine to some of the edges on this piece

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some added shines on edges and corners

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[Cream]

I like this kind of stuff

Now this is what I call creative not sure how you got this one to form out like that but this is one of those types that you could really push some shine especially on the top part as it's first falling with the drip so more shine on the goo and some sparkles in the background but anyways a very creative style here with some unique design to it all anyways nice creative creation

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Very creative style here as some shine and sparkle

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[Portrait of Mar]

Very detailed

This was very detailed stuff I just love the fine work on line detail and especially the shading so well done so impressive so very good it's almost perfect I think all you need here is some color maybe some shine and sparkle on the glasses that would be pretty cool must have took you a long time to do this one but it's very well done lots of talent here anyways nice job

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some shine and sparkle on the glasses and maybe even some color

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[Batman - Work In Progress]

This is nice

It's nice to see how the progress is I think one step further you could have made some more photos of the progress in steps that would have been a great idea but it's still nice to see how it's done and you have the perfect work area with nice lighting very clean I like that but with all that said there's not much else I can review about this piece so nice work indeed

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Only thing was maybe more pics of a step by step progress

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Dry-Art responds:

Thanks, and sure I'll try to take more WIP pics next time.

[Gamster]

This was nice

Well this was cute I like the glasses so this was a cute charchter I think the background should be lighter like a great there should be more texture in his green clothing and maybe some shine on the glasses like a sparkle

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some small additional changes that may help as mentioned above

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Polybox responds:

It actually doesn't have a background :D