XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Gamster]

This was nice

Well this was cute I like the glasses so this was a cute charchter I think the background should be lighter like a great there should be more texture in his green clothing and maybe some shine on the glasses like a sparkle

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some small additional changes that may help as mentioned above

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Polybox responds:

It actually doesn't have a background :D

[Internet IRL - Jazza's COTM - Professor Google]

This finished project

And here we have the finished project you show all the details and all the talent really comes alive I'm really impressed with the end results here I still think you should have a light beaming down on the chalkboard of some sort but the color and textuture you got here is really good I like your talent and your style of art work anyways nice detail and nice colors here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some lighting effects

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Dry-Art responds:

Thanks! I haven't really tried different digital effects, but I'll definitely experiment with it soon!

[Professor Google - WIP]

Very nice style

And another great piece from you and a nice style of art I like how you showed some nice progress of how it's done and the progress was very nice the color and texture on finishing points was great I think in the class room you can add more lighting though but also maybe not needed but besides that this was a really nice piece of work with some real talent here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Possibly some lighting effect

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[Batman - Jazza's COTM]

Now that is unique

Now here you have some very unique idea here and I don't think I have seen anything done like this at all on newgrounds so this was a pleasure the process is probably pretty intense and time consuming so very nice job indeed would love color but honestly this doesn't call for it and you have done pretty good with all that you have done here as for improvement I'm really stuck on this because it's on it's own creation and has it's own style so I'll leave this one alone

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
No changes as this is a style and creative art of it's own kind

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Dry-Art responds:

Thank you!

[Yama the Scarecrow]

Nice charchter

Nice charchter here you should make a comic of this charracter it is simple and I like the simple form and black and white but I could see him in all sorts of trouble and such nice background on this one very good work here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Put some light up specs or gems in background

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[The Girly Wolf]

Nice

I love the colors here very good side view I think the background is all wrong on this one the black lines on the fox/wolf seem to collide with the background so maybe make the background a dark great or a lighter blend of color

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Backround needs to be a different color something lighters like a dark grey or light great

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[Xavier]

This was nice

Well I have to say this was well done I like the style I like the fur like feel you gave it and some nice background here as well you really put some detail in the background too so nice job there I think the eyes could be slightly larger though

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe bigger eyes

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[Fedora Style]

Love this

I like what you did here there is some really nice art here the pumnkin could use some shine on it and the green eye could have a much more flow on theme as well as the mouth part those are my advices for this fine art piece so nice energy on this art piece I really like this and your talent really shows off very well here. You do have some good talent and glad I had the chance to see it

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More glow on the eyes and some shine on the pumnkin

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[The Illusion]

Nice

I like what you did here with this one I like hangman and this has a nice but deathly meaning some color would have been nice maybe the rope could be red to represent blood too but the idea here was pretty awesome if I do say so myself

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some blood or a red rope

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[Billy]

Good charchter

This was a good charchter I do think you can ad gun fire with some lighting effcets and let it show some action in this whole piece here but very nice character work and background I like it and your art is very good indeed

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some gun fire would be cool

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