XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Marceline]

Different

Well this was kinda nifty it's different for sure but you have a nice charchter here with some good ideas in some detail now i do think you could ad more shine to the breasts like a streak of shine that would be the end game for this one lol no but really it would be a nice ending touch and a nice little improvment on this nifty art piece of yours

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some shine on her front end

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[Happy Birthday HappyHarry]

Wow nice

Wow this one is really nice I love the pose you have this charracter in and the shine on the armor is wow and very nice work I would love to see more shine and even some sparkle off the purple shoulder pads armor with a sparkle off the spike and such but just an idea that shine could really show more reflection off the shine anyways really nice work here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More sparkle and shine on the shoulder pieces

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[Wxd]

Different

Well this was a bit different I like the abstract feel of this with the different feel of it and it has some nice artistic style also like the idea of it on the drawing board some nice little details and it really jumped out at you but I liked it I don't see any place to change anything on this fine piece of art anyways nice work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
No improvments that I could see that was needed as it was pretty good work

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[Mercy Summer Games Skin 2017]

Very well done

So this was a very well done piece here very nice charchter lots of gold items of jewelry and I think alot of that you should ad much more sparkle and shine too because it was really looking like gold and could shine more as gold does just an idea though but that's all I have for the improvments on my end it's a good charchter

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More shine on all the gold parts and jewelry

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[The Main Man]

Nice

So this was nice I like the green blob here and you added some shine that was nice I think you can ad some more sparkle and shine to that shine morenof a glare but for what it is. It's pretty good and I like it so nice job even the background was pretty nifty and worked well with the main character so nice job all around here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some more sparkle and shine

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[Anime style]

This was cute

Very cute pose with the girl here and I like the two fingers up love the blue eyes I do think you can ad a bit more glare and shine to the eyes though and besides all that this is a really good piece you did some nice skin texture and made it all look realistic and that's what really jumped out at me so nice work on this and I look forward to even more from you here soon or in the near future

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More shine and glare in the eyes

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[Portrait of old man]

Wow

So this being the second piece of yours I'm reviewing I have to say this was absolutely beautiful I love the dark textuture especially what you did with the hair and the deep complection I do however still think this needs more of a portrait border and frame maybe even in color so that the black and white really comes out too anyways nice job here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As mentioned a colored border or frame on edges

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Fantastikus responds:

I really appreciate your reviews ,and I will try to put some kind of frame on my future projects. Thank you for helpful reviews!!! :)

[value portrait]

Very beautiful

And here was something very beautiful I really like the eyes on this and love the black and white style you have on this with all the soft touches here and the I do think you could ad some sort of portrait frame or borders to give it that portrait look even more but I still like what you did here anyways nice work regardless

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some portrait frame or borders

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[Emo Pirate - Work in Progress]

The start of it all

And so this was the start of it all and I like it you can really see how the progress takes off from this piece and the full color piece I like both pieces now if there was only some way to turn it upside right but maybe this was your intent but I will say it was a pleasure to review this work of yours you have some nice skill and nice talent so keep up the great artistic styles that you bring to the art portal

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
It's a work in progress so no changes other then making it upright but again maybe that was the intent

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[Emo Pirate]

Wow nice

Wow I must say this was pretty brilliant and you have a good style of color here and the texture just comes out some deep textures is what I really like about this piece why it's sideways I don't know but what I do know is that this was a very good piece of art and I really enjoyed so keep up the good work and make more great stuff

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I don't think this needs any changes

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