XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Gosh and sloth]

Interesting

So this was an interesting piece here, kind of "FUNNY" and I found it very "AMUSING" and you braught some good humor wish you had made this longer but the joke was well executed on this, I would suggest some backround detail maybe even start a nice web comic from it, anyways nice entry here.

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I would suggest some backround detail maybe even start a nice web comic from it

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[Kantai Collection - Akashi]

Nice character

So this was a nice character very "ANIME" and thats ok, you have presented some really nice "DETAIL" in this one love all the extra stuff you added to here even the backround being bland was ok with this one as its focus on the main character, I have no tips on changes for this piece as you have presented it well, anyways nice work here.

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I have no tips on changes for this piece as you have presented it well

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[Hi There]

Very nice

Wow this was pretty good the character "ART" here is pretty amazing I love the paint style the striped lines are kind of a nifty effect, you do some very nice work here and a very nice visual point here this was just a beautiful piece and I have no tips of suggestions as I found this piece to be really nice as is, nice work here.

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I have no tips of suggestions as I found this piece to be really nice as is

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[Death DC]

Wow nice

Wow I really love this "PIECE" the "CHARACTER" was amazing the image behind here was just the perfect touch you should do more stuff like that for your backrounds, the girl her self was amazing love the shine points allthough some added shine wouldnt hurt either, a fantastic art piece here.

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love the shine points allthough some added shine wouldnt hurt either

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[Witch ONE III]

Nice

I like that you have a couple "DIFFERENT" portraits here the characters themself are amazing and have nice details, the border could have more of a unique design added to it, but regardless this was a nice double portrait you have created here, and I look forward to more from you.

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the border could have more of a unique design added to it

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[Bouncy Goat Train]

Cute

This kind of reminds me of that classic "TOON" steam boat willie or the old black and white mickey toons, but you did very nice with the "ANIMATION" and the black and white art was pretty nice too, very nice work here you should do more of these like a nostalgic series of some sorts, anyways good stuff here.

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very nice work here you should do more of these like a nostalgic series of some sorts

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[Pigeon Queue]

Wow nice

So this was pretty nice, I like the "SUBTLE" art here the pigeons are cute and in line for food makes sense lol, but you have a nice colorful piece here I would think about adding some photshop effects to this just an opinion for improvment, but overall this was cool.

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I would think about adding some photshop effects to this just an opinion for improvment

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[Vanishing Point]

Really beautiful

This was a "BEAUTIFULL" character here I am loving that shine on top of her head you should ad some of that same shine commining off the weapon or item she is holding, You have some nice talent and you have showcased it here more shine in my opinion but overall this was a nice piece of art here.

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I am loving that shine on top of her head you should ad some of that same shine commining off the weapon or item she is holding

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[Squidren]

a strange character

So here was a "STRANGE" looking character but it was kind of "UNIQUE" and I love the detail on this character aswell as the texture in the backround, I dont think this one needs any changes as its a solid piece of art here, so really nice work here and hope you make more sometime.

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I dont think this one needs any changes as its a solid piece of art here

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[Murky]

Nice color

So here with this one you have added some really nice color and made this jump out with a "VIBRANT" feel about it all, some really nice work here, seems as though the backround was a little light and the space could be filled maybe some color or props a design or something, this was some nice work.

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seems as though the backround was a little light and the space could be filled maybe some color or props a design or something

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Cromatoid responds:

Thanks for the feedback I'll consider it for my next artwork.