XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[A Bullfrog]

Decent

This is well decent but nothing artistically spectacular. I do like your comic like cartoon style and the words were nice to go with the image but the words needed more fine tuning. They looked rushed and child like. Now your drawing itself was good and unique but I wish you focused more on the words. The style of the words isnt too bad but some letters are larger than others and we more consistantcy. I do like your style tho.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Just try to improve on the lettering of your words. They need some work.

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[Christmas Dinner]

Cool another one

The color and art is so "DEEP" very welldone on that element, the humor here was pretty good not as good as some other humor of yours but I still found it amusing and funny, I had not seen any from you in a good while so didnt know what to expect allthough these are older ones but anyways another nifty comic piece you have here and I have enjoyed this one just as much as I have enjoyed the others do you plan on stopping at a specific number or anything, anyways nice job here.

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the humor here was pretty good not as good as some other humor of yours but I still found it amusing and funny

~X~

[Force]

Brimming with sparkle

The "FORCE" is a strong thing to use lol anyways well exectuted joke here, love the color here and no changes needed at this time it was brilliant, I will say that this one alone is brimming with some sparkle you bring a whole style and ad your own kind of sparkle to that element and thats really a plus of things so very nice work there, keep on bringing a sparkle to our hearts with your lovely piece of talent and keep this great comic going as strong as ever, I absoulutly loved the jokes and humor in this one, one of your best.

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love the color here and no changes needed at this time it was brilliant

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[K/Da Akali]

Very nice

This was "COOL" I really like the "NEON" on this wish it would glow even more or just a few parts glowed even more, I really like when people make these styles of artwork, because its not everydy we get to see stuff like this so thats all a big plus. And so here is my Extended part of the review Appropriately done if I say so myself, And now As I do end here I will say it was a nifty art piece with some nice design elements, you have shown you have the talents of some nifty art. So my last wording on this is that this was a Symbolic piece of art.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
wish it would glow even more or just a few parts glowed even more

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SouredApple responds:

I'll make note lol Thanks ;)

[Spider-Man (11x11)]

Neat

Ok that was neat but only because I watched your video below on how to draw this. I do like those videos so you get a sense of the work and know it isn't fully stolen and their. I do like the reds and blues and the lines in the suits. Some lines aren't right porpotionally but it is doable. I think the background doesnt match the foreground....it seems unbalanced. I would try something else other then some squiggles.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
You have talent but the background needs work so focus on that next time.

~X~

[Jump!]

Cool jump

So this was a nice "JUMP-SCENE" love all the trees and the glass, I think you should have added some shine and sparkle on the glass especially since the sun is shinning away, but regardless of that this was pretty good and some really nice character work here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
some shine and sparkle on the glass especially since the sun is shinning away

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[S A D G I R L S 1]

Nice style

So you have a nice stylish idea here I love the detail and the suprise on this one so you really did some nice work here, some added shine and sparkle would be cool, like on that blue beak maybe the red devil mask even, Finally I find something really artistic today, while a lot of art is artistic you seem to bring out some nice style and a certain uniqueness about it, So my Overview will be pretty positive here, I will for sure look for more stuff from you especially if its like this because its unique things like this that I really enjoy comming to the art portal for, so keep up the good and unique styles of artwork. I like Polish and you seem to be Accustomed to ad it aswell.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
some added shine and sparkle would be cool, like on that blue beak maybe the red devil mask even

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[Lightsaber]

Love it

haha didnt think he would run it through his eye lol, anyways great entry here, Aww I love this one more of the comedy style then anything else but you really did bring out the flavour in this one and it really shows it just jumps out at you in the most unexpected ways so for that nice job, I love your style on these characters, so keep that going.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
make more starwars themed ones kind of like what you did here.

~X~

[Flame]

Cool

Love the fire and color added in this one you should do that with more of these older black and white ones, So before I get started on this one I do want to say that I did have a rough moment getting into this comic but once I did I cant stop enjoying it and all the comic stuff you present, So I can never get enough of this series, and have enjoyed it ever since. hope to see more from you soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Love the fire and color added in this one you should do that with more of these older black and white ones

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