XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[BASA: Only Madness]

Really nice

The drawing here is really nice you put some nice drawing lines to effect, some really good detail even the "BLOOD" was pretty good, I did think you could have added some more blood more dripping blood infact, but besides that you do some really nice work here.

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I did think you could have added some more blood more dripping blood

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[[C] G1v2]

Nice pose

I like that the pose is different here outfit is all the same and it's just so hard view point wise to see past the black background since you do have black sockings on her just really doesn't look good over that black background some texture of color should be added into that background somehow but anyways nice work here great charchter great different pose anyways keep making awsome stuff

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Once again the background meshs with the black outfit parts

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[[C]G6 Legs for days]

Legs for days

Yes I agree she did have some really long legs some added shine and sparkle here or there would be a real plus but that would be my little tip based on this piece but overall this was a nice charchter with some nice details and super long legs a good structure of a character and it came out well I was pretty impressed with how it all came out so nice job indeed again onlything I would ad would be more shine and some more sparkle to the legs and other points

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some added sparkle and shine

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[[C] Proj 2 #2]

Alurring

And here was a nice and alurring piece the clothing is beautiful and well designed she seems really tall and her legs seem very far apart not sure that was the intent the light color clothing works well with the dark background I think the onlything I would suggest on this piece would be adding more shine to her stockings and maybe her legs shouldn't be so spread but overall this was a nice piece here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I have suggested a few ideas above

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[Raffle Winner]

Notbad

Ok this is one of those piece that the legs is so hard to view because the background is pretty much matching same color this why I have suggested manytimes about a different base color backround but again you still have done some nice work here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Different color backround

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[Blair]

Cool piece

So this was a really great piece here a nice "HALLOWEEN" themed piece too, I think some extra glow from the pumnkin or pumnkins eyes would have been a nice touch up, also maybe a darker backround so the lighting could take effect more but thats just my perspective on things, you do some nice work.

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I think some extra glow from the pumnkin or pumnkins eyes would have been a nice touch up, also maybe a darker backround so the lighting could take effect more

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[Shinobi Warriors]

A cute comic

So this was a cute "COMIC" the art could be smoother and the characracters could be refined more you should have text bubbles instead of squares, but overall this was a nice idea for a comic, and think you should keep it going on more entries would be great for this.

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the art could be smoother and the characracters could be refined more you should have text bubbles instead of squares

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[Nightmare at P.S. 112]

Haha nice

So this was pretty good I think you have a good idea here and I think you could make a series out of all the scary villians in class or something, But the art was great the backround you made funny like a classroom, and the freddy character has lots of great detail.

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I think you could make a series out of all the scary villians in class or something

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DirtGoblin responds:

This actually started as a joke about a series where Slasher villains go to school to learn how to become slashers. Glad you like it.

[Zero]

Nice character

So this was a nice "CHARACTER" I love the sabre I think you should have some more glow on it, and also I would suggest some more backround detail some props some scene or even a colored pateren design, Anyways nice character here very good form and pose, so nice job here.

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I would suggest some more backround detail some props some scene or even a colored pateren design

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[Izzy]

Really nice

Love the amount of "DETAIL" you have going on in this one, Love the back end design too almost creates a frame and border aswell, I would even suggest ad a small frame long the edges to accent that back end design, So Im glad I had a chance to see this aswell as review it, this was started from a simple idea but you turned it into something unique, so nice effort there. Very nice work here I like this style and the talent really does come full frontal here with the detail and style you push forward. There are things that can make this better but I like what you bring out in this style and piece, and we need more artists and pieces like this. My final Overview is this was pretty good.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Love the back end design too almost creates a frame and border aswell, I would even suggest ad a small frame long the edges to accent that back end design

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mogy64 responds:

thanks a lot for the nice words xway! i did want to give tha back some sort of border especially due to how its tilted, but i thought it took away a bit from the white border of the character, since i wanted her to pop out more than anything.
ill definitely have that in mind for the next pieces tho, thank you again!