XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[(atp girl) hotline miami]

Interesring

So this one was interesting mainly her back foot looks odd and different it's the form of t the colored face and the rest not almost like an unfinished project but still a good piece here and a nice art submission I think you can work on the foots form a bit better

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
That foot could use some work

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[morning duties as atp (madness combat)]

Notbad

Well another decent visual here her upper body is really hard to see it's almost like it was unfinished with it and the background could be more appealing it was kind of dull in a way but I do like the effort on this entry so more background detail and better upper body form

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More upper body polish and some background detail and polish

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[Oh boy!]

Very nice charchter

So this was a very nice charchter I like the longness of him and being a top head heavy type of charchter and good work as he is freshly looking good and maybe some small shading here or there would be a nice improvment as well as asking some type of backround work here maybe a sun set maybe some city scene or even some base color besides white

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some background work some extra shading here and there

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[Man in the box]

Nice and fresh

So this is some nice and fresh art here I like the idea of on a box just simple idea and the character work is really good I do think you should have more shading in his hair and even some background detail or scenery you have some but other then that you have some nice work here great looking charchter very well drawn keep drawing and making fun art for us all to see

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some background scenery and some extra shading is all this needs

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[Tajie]

Very nice

I really love this you do some nice charchter work here very well done very details love the shine on his face I honestly think the only change this needs is some blood running down his mouth maybe teeth it would be a nice touch to who this charracter is but nice work I like your style here and hope to see some more from you here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some dripping blood

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[dumbledalf]

Very nice

I really like the top view here that was hard to do with all the detail you have it's very good stuff here the amount of detail in this one is pretty solid and the graphics are just deep in texture you have some very good fine detail here the small line work that make up shades came out well I wouldn't more lighting effect from the top anyways nice stuff

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some more lighting would be nice

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[reindeer lady (bright christmas)]

Notbad

But this was actually notbad the face was not exactly clear but the body was nice and there could be some shine on her back side maybe even in her hair but it looks like some snow falling so maybe no shine is needed but other then that this was notbad at all

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe some shine and that's a big maybe

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[odd art (color test again) (but that how famous artist back in the day)]

Interesring

It was interesting not sure exactly what was here but looks like a dark charchter and I guess it could be an abstract style but looks like the dark skin tones could use some texture or even shades in there but besides that it was not bad so keep up the good work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some more shades maybe some texture in the dark skin tones

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[Regessi pinup]

Not a pinup

So I wouldn't say this is a pin up it's more of just a back shot once again I'm starting to think this is all you know how to do or like to do but this particular piece needs color much more color the drawing itself is not bad but does need some color and that my take on it

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Ad some color

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[Ranger's Escape]

Cool

So this was a nice piece I really love the color you use here and love the borders as well you are very creative and especially know how to use color infact that white border should be a deep red or darker people or even a light purple just an idea but I do like this drawing it's nice and we'll done keep at it

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Change that white border to another color would accent the main focus better

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